Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy-Five

March 18, 2011 at 4:05 pm (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, , )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 75


Recap: Last time, Syrus flew to Trillium City with the group of teenagers hot on his tail. Though in possession of the Eclipse Star, he couldn’t stand up to all of them attacking at once with Lindsey finally leading in a simultaneous energy beam to finish him off once and for all. However, Chris doesn’t seem to feel the battle is won. As he stares at the crater where Syrus once stood, a sudden urge of dread overtakes him and the others. Genesis ends today, on Eclipse Star!

-A few blocks away, as civilians still flee in a mass panic, Glitch leans against a crumbling building, holding it up as it threatens to collapse.

Glitch: Everyone needs to evacuate the area! This is not a drill!

-He looks over and notices a terrified reporter limply holding a microphone as his cameraman just keeps filming.

Sam the Go-To Guy: I can’t believe it. The robots are back again…

Frank the Cameraman: Yeah but our ratings should skyrocket.

Glitch: (Almost in disbelief). You need to flee. What are you doing?

Sam: I’m, uh, I’m reporting.

Frank: (Shifts to face Sam). Into the camera, genius.

Sam: Oh, right. (Slowly pulls his microphone to his mouth). Hey Dave, hey Diana, it’s me, Sam. I’m out here near Franklin Parkway where it seems a lot of bad things are currently happening-

Glitch: HEY! You want to help?! Then go rescue some people! I’ve got civilians trapped in this building who need help!

Sam: I, uh…

Frank: (Bolting into the building). Let’s do this then.

Sam: Hey wait up! (Jogs after him).

-Back at ground zero.

Austin: Chris, your cheery optimism is always welcoming, but savor this victory.

-Chris’ eyes remain fixated on the crater.

Chris: We need to get out of here. We need to go, now.

Austin: I don’t-

-The ground starts rumbling all of a sudden. Everyone grows quiet and turns to the crater, watching in horror as debris begins levitating around the center.

-A hand bursts up from the rubble, tightly clutching the Eclipse Star.

Lindsey: No way!

-Syrus rips himself from the ground, dusty but unharmed, save for his tattered clothing.

Syrus: (His eyes are glossed over with rage as he practically froths at the mouth). You think that’s it? You think you children have won? You’ve accomplished nothing!

Jack: We need to hit him again!

Leena: With what? We’ve got nothing left!

-Syrus begins grasping the Eclipse Star so tightly that it pierces his skin, causing his hand to bleed.

Syrus: I will show you just how pointless this all is.

-His face contorts as he closes his hand completely around the Eclipse Star, embedding it in the deep flesh of his palm. He holds his hand in front of his face, shaking, as the area is hit with a violent quake.

-Syrus begins screaming as his hand shakes more and more. Everyone else is forced to shield their face as debris is getting hurled in all directions.

-The blood from Syrus’ hand stops dripping and suddenly sucks itself back up. Blackness starts creeping from his palm, coating his arm as dark tendrils engulf him. From his arm it spreads to his chest, then down to his legs and his other arm, finally snaking its way up his neck.

-Syrus lets out one final scream as a shockwave pushes everyone back.

-When they’re finally able to look up again they see Syrus looking himself over carefully. He is covered in a sleek black armor that comes to a point upwards from the knees and elbows. He’s seemed to calm himself a little bit, mostly due to curiosity at this new transformation, and steps out of the crater toward the group.

Derek: So that’s it, huh? Some black armor? That was the Eclipse Star’s true potential?

Jack: (Checking his Pulse watch). I’m not reading anything. My watch can’t even get a signal.

Derek: So it screws with technology. My dick screws with technology. Big deal.

Kevin: I think Chris may just be right about this…

Derek: You, too? Oh please. (Flicks out his sai). We beat him down once already; He can’t have anything left.

Chris: Derek, stay back…

Derek: HRAH! Fuck this noise!

-Derek rushes forward with his sai out, pulled back and ready to strike.

-Syrus continues looking himself over, paying no attention to Derek.

Derek: I’m putting you back in the ground!


-In an instantaneous flash, a long, thick blade appears from the back of Syrus’ hand as he imbeds it in Derek’s stomach. It goes through the other side as Derek gasps slightly, dropping his sai weakly on the ground next to him.

Chris: Derek!

-No one makes a move forward as Derek stands rigid with shock.

Syrus: Hmh.

-Syrus retracts his blade and grabs Derek, tossing him into the air.

Syrus: Haha…

-He starts firing energy blasts at Derek midair, blasting him relentlessly as the others watch, motionless.

Syrus: HAHAHA!

-He brings his hand in close and points two fingers upward as he charges a peculiar new energy blast. It appears as if it’s a white-hot glowing atom. He points his arm straight at Derek and firsts this little blast.


-The sky explodes an unholy bright white, so intense that no one can keep their eyes open. The resulting boom presses them all to huddled positions, trying to keep themselves from being blowing away.

-As they look up to see what’s happened, they witness a spherical shape carved perfectly out of the buildings surrounding the explosion.

-Derek, however, is gone.

Syrus: I suppose he was always the eager one, wasn’t he? (No one says a word). So then, who to pick next…?

-Syrus scans the group. As he does so they all unconsciously take a step backward. He takes his time slowly antagonizing them with a simple look, pausing on some with a chuckle.

Syrus: (Looking at Danny). Maybe you’d like to try? (Danny stops breathing as Syrus turns to Scott). Or do you have the stones to throw the first punch?

-This continues as he walks increasingly slowly without any direction.

Syrus: Come to think of it, I certainly wouldn’t want another inspirational moment, would I?

-He quickly turns to Lindsey and fires an energy ball.

Chris: Shit!

-Chris sprints and hurls himself in front of the ball.


-It hits him hard, throwing him back into the concrete of a nearby building. He slides down to a slump, alive but heavily winded.

Lindsey: (She turns around to see him). Chris!

Syrus: Now what did that accomplish?


-Lindsey stops suddenly as a thin energy beam shoots through her chest.

-Chris leaps up as her legs give way, rushing over to her to catch her before she hits the ground.

Chris: Oh God, Lindz!

-She begins to sputter a bit, unsure where she is.

Lindsey: Did I just…? What just happened…?

-She starts to fade in and out of consciousness.

-Austin powers up anything he has left.

Austin: ATTACK!

-Everyone takes this as a signal to fight desperately against whatever fate Syrus has in store for the group.

-Austin has ignited himself in a ball of flames as he rushes at Syrus.

-Syrus stomps his foot down, showering the area with chunks of cement. These hunks of pavement pepper Austin until he’s fully disoriented, allowing Syrus to easily swat him away with a backhand.

-Kevin tackles Syrus but can’t push him back. Syrus holds his ground, casually reaches down to grab Kevin, and pulls him into a swift headbutt.

-Kevin goes loose for a moment as Syrus grabs him by the face and hurls him to the side.

-Jack sends a volley of punches at Syrus, each getting slapped away like they’re coming from an amateur.

-Jack fires off an electrical charge at Syrus but watches sadly as it’s shrugged off before Syrus’ heel swings around and clocks Jack in the side.

-Things begin moving too quickly to differentiate between teenagers attacking as Syrus is moving in a fluid motion, rotating in circles as he punches one attacker into another or swings his momentum into the closest body he finds.

-Austin lets out a yell as he grabs the ground and tears up a chunk twice his size,  flipping it at Syrus.

-Syrus turns at the slab touches down in front of him.


-Austin throws all his energy into a solid punch that breaks through the concrete, shattering it on Syrus’ face before landing his own punch with the follow-through.

-Syrus remains unflinching as Austin’s whole arm quivers.

Syrus: Well that wasn’t awful.


-Syrus clubs Austin in the neckbone.


-Then hammers him in the side of the head with a flat hook.


-And a snap shin strike.


-Then a downward headbutt that knocks Austin to a slump.


-That concludes with a heavy boot to the body that carries Austin into the air.

-Syrus instantly steps back and swings his arms out, punches colliding Willy and Scott.

-Syrus turns to punch Kevin in the gut, then to his side to bop Clinton in the nose, and kicks backward to catch Jack under the chin.

-As the three react in slow motion to their damage, Syrus moves at normal speed, standing upright before sending them skidding away with a pulse of energy.

-The group of teens huddles together, beaten badly and hurting.

Austin: Okay, we need a strategy here.


-Austin hardly has time to look up as Syrus plows into the group huddle, delivering a straight jab to his face.


-Syrus continues firing right-handed jabs at Austin’s face, pummeling him relentlessly while smirking.

Syrus: Ah-ah, no cheating now! Speak up so everyone can hear what you’re planning!

-As Syrus pulls his left hand back for a haymaker, Kevin dives on him, holding the punch back. The rest of the group dive onto Syrus as well, doing their best to hold him.

-Syrus chuckles deeply to himself before flying straight up into the air.

Syrus: Tenacious, aren’t you?

-He rockets back to earth, the majority of the group still clinging to him.


-As he slams down, everyone is thrown from his body, skidding along the street until they come to a stop at a building or some wreckage.

-Instead of relenting, Syrus speeds off to distribute fly-by poundings.

-Chris remains out of the fray, looking on with horror-struck eyes. Lindsey is coughing weakly and shivering in his arms.

Chris: C’mon Lindz, you can hold on. Just hold on a little while before we can get you some help.

-Chris catches sight of Jack looking over, staring intently at Chris, rather than Lindsey.

Chris: Why aren’t you helping?!

-Jack coldly turns away.

-Nearby, Syrus has managed to beat he spirit out of just about everyone. He walks up to Kyle, facedown on the pavement, and kicks him in the side.

Kyle: HAH!  (Holds his side and scrambles to his feet).

Chris: (Looks on with his eyes wide, filled with dread). I’ve seen this all before…

Syrus: Why is it that suddenly none of you are worth my time?

-Scott rushes up behind Syrus and swings a metal pole as hard as he can.

-Syrus whips around and grabs the pole with one hand, yanking it from Scott’s grip as he kicks Scott into a concrete slab jutting out of the ground.


-Syrus impales Scott through the stomach with the metal pole. Scott coughs a bit and slumps down, struggling to keep his head up as he pulls feebly at the pole.

Clinton: Scott!

-Clinton rushes forward to help his friend, charging something in his hands as he goes.


-Syrus knees up into Clinton’s stomach at the same time that he elbows down into his back, the spikes from his armor piercing him on both sides.

-Syrus grabs Clinton and tosses him to the side as he lies bleeding from two large holes in his body.

-Leena pulls out a throwing disc from her pocket and hurls it at Syrus while his back is turned.

-Jack sees this, curses under his breath, and bolts to Leena.

-As the whirling disc about hits Syrus in the back of his head, Syrus spins around and grabs the disc.  He then spins around again and pitches the disc right back in one fluid movement. The disc screeches as it flies toward Leena.

Jack: Damnit!

-Jack throws himself in front of Leena and swishes his arm upward, knocking the disc away, but not before it slices to the bone.

Jack: Nnh…AH!

-Jack holds his arm as blood flows out from behind his hand.

Chris: I failed. I wasn’t supposed to let this happen…

Lindsey: I can’t see anything…

Chris: (Looks down to see her rapidly fading). What?

Lindsey: I…I can’t breathe…

Chris: No! Don’t do this!

-She starts violently choking as she weakly reaches up a hand.

-It falls as her body goes limp.

Chris: Lindsey…?

-He touches her face and feels no warmth. He leans his head down to listen for breathing, but hears nothing.

Chris: She’s dead…

-Syrus stops at this, as does everyone else.

Jack: C’mon, that should do it already…

Austin: (Angrily puzzled). What?

-Chris just looks down and quietly sobs.

Jack: Why isn’t it working?

Syrus: (Casually walking up to Chris). Hnh. So she’s gone then?

Chris: Why did you have to kill her? Why did you have to do any of this?

Syrus: I said I’d bring Hell with me.

Chris: No. This isn’t how it ends.

Syrus: I’m sorry, but it is.

Chris: (Looks up, his eyes piercingly white). THIS ISN’T HOW IT ENDS!

-Light explodes forth from Chris as he screams, pushing Syrus and everyone back out of shock.

-Chris shuts his eyes tightly as the ground quakes around him, sending cracks rippling through the streets.

Syrus: (Shielding his eyes to the both the intense light and the dust whirling around Chris). What is this?

Jack: (Also shielding his face). About time.

Austin: What’s happening?

Jack: (Smiling). You’ll see.

-Chris’ cries carry out into the city, growing more and more strained and painful the longer he holds them.

-His hair suddenly flickers gold as his muscles tense.

Scott: (Barely keeping his head up). Khh…atta boy.

-A pillar of blue light bursts upward into the sky as Chris’ howling becomes its most severe.

-Chris falls silent as the light spirals upward and dissipates. His hair, however, is glowing bright gold.

-He quickly looks down at Lindsey and places a hand over the hole in her chest. The aura that surrounds him flows down from his hair and into his hands as he hums quietly. The light continues on and flows into Lindsey, causing her hair to shimmer faintly.

-Lindsey gasps suddenly and jerks upward as her eyes shoot open and then closed again. She passes out but heaves a long and healthy sigh.

Kyle: Holy shit.

-Chris stands up, still holding the now sleeping Lindsey in his arms. His hair has returned to its previous dull brown, but his hands still have a spark of gold surrounding them.

-He walks over to Scott and places Lindsey on the ground near him. Firmly grasping the metal pole, he pulls it from Scott’s stomach, holding a glowing hand at the spot of the wound.

-As Scott finally drops to his knees, released from his hanging position, he takes a deep breath and looks down to see his stomach completely intact.

Scott: Not a bad trick.

Chris: Also, you’re welcome.

-Chris picks up Lindsey and walks over to Clinton. He sets Lindsey down once again and reaches his hands out to Clinton, covering the open holes where Syrus punctured him. He closes his eyes as another healing takes place.

-Clinton sits up, weak but clearly out of the danger zone.

-Jack watches this as he holds his arm, wincing from the sharp pains. Chris gently cradles Lindsey and walks over to meet Jack, setting her down at his feet.

-He grabs a hold of Jack’s arm at the wound, causing Jack to flinch at this, but ultimately it’s apparent that the gash is healing.

Jack: Your hair looked a bit like mine there for a second, didn’t it?

-Jack’s injury healed, the light in Chris’ hands has completely faded.

Chris: Lindsey just died you know.

Jack: But you saved her. I knew you’d save her. (Bends down and picks her up). You always save her.

Austin: (Pats Chris on the shoulder). How do you always do this?

Chris: I want you all to get out of here.

Leena: But you, you’re…

Chris: I’ll be fine. I’m pretty resilient when I have to be.

-The group huddles closely as Syrus looks on, dumbfounded. Willy is carrying Clinton over a shoulder and Kyle is doing the same with Scott.

Austin: I’m not leaving you. Not this time. You need me.

Kevin: And me. (Places a hand on Chris’ shoulder). I trust you, and I trust that you shouldn’t have to be alone.

Chris: (Nods at Kevin and Austin, then instantly looks around). The rest of you, get as far away from here as fast as you can.

Leena: Are you su-

Chris: (Barks). NOW!

-Everyone except for Austin and Kevin takes off at a sprint away from Chris.

-Syrus finally snaps out of his stupor and blinks.

Syrus: You think they can just leave? What makes you think they can just leave?

Chris: Your fight is with ME! (He crouches down and powers up to max). This is what you wanted, isn’t it?!

-Austin and Kevin also power up what little they have left.

Syrus: (Turns his head inquisitively, searching for some sort of deception). And now you’re willing to fight, just like that?

Chris: Let’s go!

-Chris launches himself at Syrus as Austin and Kevin follow a few paces behind him.

-Syrus growls a wicked smile as he readies himself for the battle.


-As Chris strikes Syrus, they both disappear with a sonic boom.

-Austin and Kevin skid to a halt, stunned at their sudden disappearance.


-They look up to see Chris and Syrus exchanging blows in rapid succession in the air, disappearing and reappearing with every hit.

-Chris flies toward Syrus, throwing a punch out. Syrus grabs his arm and socks him in the ribs.

-Chris kicks out at Syrus, catching him in the head, then slams him with a double-handed smash.

-Syrus reappears with a punch to Chris’ gut.

-Chris vanishes and reconnects with an elbow to Syrus’ back.

-Syrus turns the tables with a heel kick.

-Chris returns with a solid knee to Syrus’ body.

-They both disappear and reappear with a straight cross, each connecting with the other’s fist.

-Syrus fires a quick energy blast at Chris, sending him away.

-Chris struggles against the blast but maintains control, tossing it away.

-Syrus comes straight down onto Chris’ head with a stomping double boot.

-Chris careens out of the air and lands with a crack to the pavement.

-He looks up as Syrus slams his fist down, just barely dodging out of the way.

-The two zip off after one another down the street.

-Syrus blasts a hard jab into Chris’ face, getting stopped by a full cross defense. The jab still pushes Chris back as the force carries the two further down the street.

-Syrus opens his mouth and starts charging a blast.

-Chris grabs the ball of energy forming in Syrus’ mouth, pushing back as it reaches completion.

-The two struggle against one another, Syrus trying to fire his blast and Chris trying to prevent it.

-Austin and Kevin come down hard on Syrus’ head with a foot each, causing him to clasp his jaw shut and harmlessly swallow the blast.

-Chris instantly pulls back and fires a strong Pulse explosion at Syrus’ stunned face, pitching him away from the trio.

-Syrus flips end over end before slapping the ground to right himself. He digs his feet in, skidding to a stop before launching forward again.


-He flicks out the blades from behind his hands and swings them above his head for a strike.

-Chris pushes Austin and Kevin away as he flips backward to avoid the strike.

-Syrus continues slashing at him, missing by mere hairs as Chris dodges and ducks, moving away as fast as possible.

-Syrus boots Chris in the chest, tossing him to the pavement.

-As Syrus comes down with a blade, Chris instinctively grabs at the item lying next to him, a sai, and deflects the blade into the ground where it imbeds itself.

-Chris grabs the other sai and stabs it at Syrus’ face.

-Syrus stops it with his other blade, pushing Chris back to give them some room.

-They both leap at each other, the metallic sounds of their weapons clashing against one another as they frantically try to make a damaging strike.

-Syrus finally gets the upper hand and rakes Chris on the shoulder.

-Chris winces and clangs the sai together.


-The sonic boom blows Syrus away and puts some distance between the two fighters.

-Chris grabs his shoulder to inspect for any significant damage.

-Syrus comes barreling back, his blades sheathed again, kicking upward into Chris’ body.

-Chris stumbles backward, dropping the sai as Syrus pulls his arm back, firing a devastating haymaker.


-The punch collides with Chris’ face. He takes a few steps back where he falls down, stunned.

Syrus: (Stands upright and takes a moment to exhale deeply). So, this is fun, isn’t it?

Chris: (Rubbing his cheek, still in some slight pain). You could have killed me there if you had your swords out. Why prolong this?

Syrus: Oh, you know, it’s just so rare that I’ll have a chance for a match like this again. I figured I’d savor it just a while longer.

Chris: That’s a pretty bold mistake.

Syrus: Hmm, you think? Do I look damaged to you in the slightest? And I’ve been holding back on you, too. There’s no other way for this to end and you know it.

Chris: (Massaging his shoulder now). Yet you’ve been so patient waiting for this fight.

Syrus: Oh yes. (Sighs). Pity though, if you’d used the Shimmer Form to fight me, you might have had the advantage for a few fleeting seconds before it faded.

Chris: (A sly grin crosses his face as he gets to his feet). Who says I can’t do that again?

Syrus: (Shakes his head as he walks casually toward Chris). Hah, you must be delirious from that last punch to the head.

Chris: (The ground around his shakes slightly as he smiles, giving a quick laugh through his nose). Hngh.

Syrus: (Raises an eyebrow). Eh?

Chris: You wanted to see Hell? I’ll show you Hell!

-Chris powers up again, instantly causing a shockwave to boom out from him.

-Syrus pauses, surprised at this.

-Austin and Kevin look on, also surprised at Chris’ spike in Pulse energy.

-As Chris screams, his power raises near his maximum level, cracking the area slightly. Chris grunts quietly with his head down as his body tenses.

Syrus: (Sighs and shakes his head again). Foolish boy, you have no idea how this works. You can’t reach the Shimmer Form by simply powering up. (Chuckles and takes a few steps, until he sees Chris’ hair and freezes).

-Chris’ hair flashes gold for a second before fading again.

Syrus: That’s not possible.

-Chris looks at Syrus as his eyes clear up again, tensing his body even further as he resumes screaming.

-A vicious earthquake resonates from Chris’ spot, shaking the area so badly that Austin and Kevin instinctively fall to their hands and knees for balance.

-A ways away, Jack and rest of the group continue running as fast as they can.

Lindsey: (Slowly opens her eyes). Jack? (Intensely confused). What’s going on?

Jack: (Not looking down). Chris is fighting with Syrus.

Lindsey: What?

-A shockwave reaches the group, pushing them forward to the point of nearly tripping.

Danny: What was that?

-They look back as the ground starts shaking. A light is glowing in the distance.

Jack: I need to be there. (Tosses Lindsey to Danny). Stay here!

Lindsey: Jack! What are you doing? Jack!

-Jack sprints back toward the battlefield. Meanwhile, at the center of it all, Chris is screaming louder and louder.

-A bright aura sparks off Chris’ body in places as his muscles tense, shooting cracks of electricity here and there.

-Fissures snake from his feet all around in a crater as his voice cries louder.

Syrus: (Looking all around, shocked). This isn’t how it works! You don’t understand!

-Chris clenches his fists, shaking them from holding them so tightly. His hair continues to fade in and out between gold and brown as chunks of the pavement nearby start coming up from the ground.

-A few blocks away, Glitch, Frank, and Sam continue leading civilians away, stopping to look up at the glowing light.

Sam: What’s that? (Frank swivels around and points his camera at the glowing sky).

Glitch: I don’t know. (Turns away from the glow). There’s no time to worry about it right now. There are more people that need help.

-Back with the source, Chris is pulling himself in tightly, his hair glowing freely now.

-Jack runs up and joins Austin and Kevin.

Austin: Jack?

Jack: He’s doing it again, isn’t he?

Kevin: Yes.

Jack: I knew it!

Austin: Has he done this before?

Jack: Twice. Once at the Regime’s base and once against Derek.

-Jack checks his Pulse watch, hoping to gage just how strong Chris is getting. His watch has stopped entirely.

-The three look up as Chris, still tense, is pushing himself harder than they could imagine, tears streaming from his eyes.

-The camera zooms inside Chris’ head, showing flashes of Lindsey fighting at various times, sustaining injury and damage against multiple foes such as the Hex-Duo, the Octa-Rangers, and Syrus. These quick moments alternate faster and faster between them, flashing so rapidly that it’s impossible to make out a clear image over the sound of Lindsey crying out.

-Something snaps as Chris opens his eyes, energy detonating from him as he screams at the top of his lungs.

-The pillar of blue light streaks into the air as the shockwave pulsates forth, shattering the glass from every window and streetlight in the area.

-Everyone shields their eyes as dust and glass spray them.

-When Syrus moves his arm to watch as the dust clears, his mouth instantly hangs open in a gasp.

-Chris is hovering a foot above his little crater, eyes closed and at peace, his hair shimmering bright gold.

-He gently lands, takes a deep breath, and snaps his head upward in Syrus’ direction as he opens his eyes. They’re clouded over for a few moments before they fade into glowing pupils.

Syrus: (A fearful smile pulls at the side of his face). You can’t be serious. This is nonsense.

Chris: This is what you’d wanted, isn’t it? A real challenge?

Syrus: (Regains his composure). Please, it’d be in your wisest interest to attack me while you can still maintain the transformation.

-Syrus sprints forward and throws a punch.

-Chris hardly steps to the side, dodging it easily.

Syrus: So, you have a bit of speed, do you?

-Syrus sends a volley of punches in Chris’ direction. None of them can hit their target.

-Syrus begins throwing in kicks as well, furiously acting at a lightning-fast pace. Still, he can’t land a single hit.

-As Syrus punches, he carries through so hard that the force from each continues past Chris and rips up the ground. And yet, Chris remains untouched.

Syrus: You think this is funny?

-Syrus’ speed increases as the punches become blurs, sounding as if a propeller were buzzing about Chris. Every so often Chris blocks a punch instead of just letting it whiz harmlessly by.

Syrus: Fight back already!


-Chris thrusts forward with an elbow, catching Syrus in the face. The attack rawks him so fully that he screeches down the block.

Syrus: (In disbelief as he flies). How did he do that? No one’s that fast!

-A wisp of dust trails next to Syrus, suddenly…


-Chris reappears behind Syrus, kicking him into the air.

-Syrus spirals into the sky, high above the buildings. He can hardly keep his eyes open as his teeth are clenched to the point of nearly shattering from anger.

-Chris vwings above Syrus, clasping his hands together and bringing them over his head in a strong arc before clubbing Syrus with his full strength in a double-handed smash.


-Syrus zooms to the ground, smashing into it without even being able to right himself.

-He lays for a moment or two, looking up to see Austin, Kevin, and Jack worriedly looking at him.

Syrus: You little-



-Chris spikes into Syrus’ back with his knee, slamming down so hard and with such follow-through that the area craters around them and explodes.

-The three onlookers take a step back and cover their faces to block the debris.

-Syrus leaps from the cracked earth, only to get decked in the face from a fist coming out of nowhere.

-A series of hits like this go back and forth, pinballing Syrus throughout the street.

-Syrus lands and dodges a punch by a few inches, Chris’ fist gracing his cheek.


-The force of the punch tears a swath in the street as Syrus leaps back, shocked at what he’s witnessing.

-He looks back at Chris, but he’s gone.

Chris: You scared yet?

-Syrus jumps from the voice behind him. He turns to see Chris hovering lightly above the ground, completely calm.

Austin: This is just unreal.

Jack: It’s exactly how I predicted it.

Kevin: I don’t like the idea of using Chris as a tool, though.

Austin: Me either.

Jack: Right now it doesn’t even matter. Syrus can’t land a decent hit, so all that’s important is the end result.

Chris: (Walking toward Syrus). Boy I wonder what’s going through that head of yours right now.

Syrus: (Smiles and calms down a bit). So a few strong blows and already you assume the fight’s over?

Chris: Yeah, it’s been over for some time now.

Syrus: How long do you think that form will hold out? Another minute? Maybe a few more seconds?

Chris: I can do this all day if I have to.

Syrus: Hah! I think you’re bluffing. (Grabs the metal pole from earlier and swishes it around). Mind if I test your theory?

Chris: Please do.

-Syrus steps up to Chris and swings the pole horizontally, to which Chris ducks out of the way.

-Syrus repeats this, swishing it around, missing Chris every time.

Syrus: Hmm, not bad, but you could do better.

-Syrus heaves the pole at Chris, striking with a metal CLANG! as Chris blocks the attack.

-Gritting his teeth, Syrus spins the pole around, flips it above his head, and brings it down on top of Chris’ head.

-Chris blocks it yet again with a loud and echoing CLANG!

-Breaking down to frantic swings, CLANG ringing out each time, Syrus is unable to inflict any damage to Chris.

-Chris grabs the pole from Syrus, plucking  it from his grasp with one simple tug before disappearing.

Chris: Let me show you how it’s done.

Syrus: What?


-Chris shows up behind Syrus, battering him with the weapon.

-Syrus recoils, partly from the surprise, and spins around as Chris swings the pole again into him.

-Syrus manages to block with the usual CLANG, but Chris keeps advancing, pushing Syrus back as he flips the pole around in a stylish manner.

-Chris leaps forward and slams Syrus in the head with the pole.

-Syrus grabs his head as Chris flips behind him, hitting him again with a wide swing.

-Chris pummels Syrus unrelentingly, TANG permeating the air in a rhythmic fashion.

-Finally, Chris appears in front of Syrus and swings the pole like a bat, holding it at the very end, and clubs Syrus in the face so hard that the metal bends clean in half.

-Syrus spins onto his back as Chris disappears.

-Suddenly a kick strikes Syrus into the air. He rights himself and tries to block but takes a damaging gut punch.

Chris: This is where I’d say, “you’ll pay for hurting my friends.”

-Chris thrashes Syrus left and right with harrowing blows, hammering him as he speaks.

Chris: I’d probably say, “that this one’s for Scott!” BOOM! “And this one’s for Kyle!” BOOM! “And for Danny” BOOM! “and Willy” BOOM! “and Derek!” BABABOOM! “Maybe one for me!” KABOOM!

-Syrus is tossed high into the air as Chris cups his hands and pulls them back, instantly charging a huge blast.



-Chris fires his signature blast directly at Syrus.

-Syrus manages to defend himself, pulling himself in tight to withstand the blast as best he can.

-Right before it hits, Chris lurches his hands upward, causing the blast to shoot straight up and away from Syrus.

-It carries into the sky and dissipates harmlessly.

Chris: Yeah, something like that.

Syrus: Why…why did you do that?

Chris: (Crossing his arms). Oh come on, like I’m ending the fight while spewing some garbage like that.

Syrus: And so you feel you’re just toying with me, right?

Chris: (Thumbs at his hair). Notice your theory didn’t pan out.

Syrus: Have you forgotten that I possess the Eclipse Star?

Chris: Just about, yeah. It’s not like it’s doing you any good.

-Syrus lets out a howl as he charges his energy, a dark light emanating from the armor.

-He pounds Chris in the face with a strong hit, sending Chris flying through the air.

-Chris zips back and punches at Syrus, getting his fist caught and held.

-Syrus pulls Chris to the side and smacks him under the chin with a palm strike.

-Chris twists to the side and kicks at Syrus, getting blocked.

-Syrus grabs Chris’ feet and zooms to the ground, slamming him into the pavement with a sharp crack.

-Chris juts a punch up, missing Syrus slightly. Syrus punches back, also missing slightly.

-They both keep punching, missing every time.

-Finally, their fists collide and Chris winces, pulling his fist back.

-Syrus blasts Chris in the face multiple times with punches, slapping him around.

Syrus: Hahaha! You feel it yet?!

-As Syrus continues his punching, Chris suddenly stops reacting to the damage, standing perfectly unmoved despite Syrus’ continued assault.

Syrus: Wha-what?


-Chris chops at Syrus’ chest, hitting him hard.

-Syrus stops punching and takes a step back.

-He leaps straight at Chris, blasting a huge stream of Pulse energy right at Chris, engulfing him.

-Syrus stops, as there is only a cloud of smoke where Chris is standing. He lets out a thankful sigh.


-A kick rips out from the smoke and sends Syrus high into the air.

-He spins around and shudders energy around him, stopping instantly.

-Chris vwings to Syrus’ location, his arms crossed.

Chris: Convinced?

Syrus: (Breathing heavily, in a contained rage). You’re just a child. How are you doing this? How are you sustaining that transformation?

Chris: I initially did it because I had to, but now, I just sort of want to.

Austin: (Yelling up). Any time you want to finish this would be great!

Chris: (Waves Austin off). I’m busy right now, thanks.

Austin: Chris, we’re all, very proud of you, yes, but there’s no reason to prolong this!

Chris: (Faces the three on the ground, turning his back to Syrus completely). Don’t tell me how to do this!

Kevin: Austin’s right! Don’t make a mistake that could hurt us in the long run!

-Syrus realizes he has a slim opening and watches carefully.

Chris: NO! He’s caused every bad thing in our life for the past year and now that I’m finally not afraid of him I’m returning the favor!

Austin: Well we’re pretty well still terrified of him, so if you could do us a solid and twist his head off right now I’d really appreciate it!

Chris: Are you the one in control here? No, you’re not! (Noticeably on edge, clenching his fists and pointing at himself). I’m in control! I’m the one with the power! I’m the one who makes the decisions! And until you reach this level, you don’t have a say in it!

-Syrus sees his chance and strikes.


-Syrus unsheathes his blade and slashes right at Chris’ neck, following clean through.

-Everything freezes for a moment as silence overtakes the mood.

-Finally, the tinkling sound of metal falling to the pavement breaks the pause.

-Syrus’ blade has shattered on Chris’ neck.

Chris: (Giving an arrogant smile). Ah-ah-ah, can’t you see I’m talking with my associates? (Turns around and faces Syrus, not a scratch on him). I’d have thought you of all people would appreciate the few moments before they talk me into killing you.

-Syrus stares in disbelief at what he just witnessed. Slowly he floats higher and higher in the air, furrowing his brow with a serious anger.

-Chris watches him fly upward, smiling.

-As Syrus climbs to a point far beyond the buildings, up in the clouds, Chris allows himself to drift to the ground next to the others.

-His arm shoots up above his head as Syrus begins charging a black energy ball. The others look on with curiosity.

-Without saying a word, Syrus gradually increases the size of the ball larger and larger, causing it to pulsate with each expansion, sucking in a dark power from all around him as tendrils lash from his armor.

-Three of the teenagers on the ground feel their eyes go wide and their jaws lull open at this sight.

Austin: That does not look good.

Jack: (Astonished). Something that size is going to destroy everything from here to the Northern Lodge. If he throws that he’ll kill himself, too.

-Chris just smiles and watches with his arms crossed. Syrus builds the attack’s power to the bursting point, so large that it eclipses the sky almost entirely.

Syrus: Try this one!


-Syrus tosses it toward the group on the ground. It slowly comes crashing down, humming loudly as it falls.

Austin: Shit!

-Austin, Jack, and Kevin all dig in their feet and start frantically charging energy blasts.

Jack: Ready, on my signal!

-Chris casually strolls past them as they charge up. Upon seeing him they lose their concentration and stop charging, letting their guard down, entirely baffled by Chris’ reaction.

-He walks past them and looks up at the incoming death ball. He shuts his hand and quickly charges an energy ball in it, clasping his hand shut around it as light sprays from between his fingers.


-Chris pitches his little energy ball directly at Syrus’ massive black sphere, rocketing up at a ridiculous speed. He turns around and walks back between his friends, not even looking up to see if his counter will do anything.


-The smaller ball collides with the larger ball, instantly plunging itself in a few inches as it stops the death ball’s progress completely.

Syrus: How…?

-Syrus’ finishing attack goes in complete reverse from the force of Chris’ baseball-sized blast, picking up speed the higher it gets.

-It finally moves past Syrus as he stares on, wordless in his moment of stunned silence.

-The ball clears the clouds and breaks out of the atmosphere, heading up, up up…

Chris: (Whips around and clenches his fist). And boom goes the dynamite!


-The two balls detonate somewhere in space, piercing the sky with strobbing lights before fading as if nothing had happened.

-Syrus’ rage wells up to uncontrollable levels as he pants louder and louder, his veins bulging anywhere his skin is visible.

-He lets out a guttural scream as sections of the sky tear away and glow black.

-He fires himself directly at Chris.

-Chris turns around right as Syrus catches up with him, completely taken off guard as Syrus grabs him by the face and slides him across the ground.

-Chris breaks the hold and decks Syrus in the face. They continue skidding across the ground, throwing damaging blows to each other, pounding without caring to defend.

-Syrus grabs Chris by both shoulders and forces him into a strong headbutt that Chris jerks back from.

-Chris strikes back, resulting in the two clenching up and struggling against each other.

Chris: (Completely serious). So, this is what you were talking about, huh?

Syrus: I will not be beaten by a child!

-Syrus shoots an energy beam from his mouth, nailing Chris in the face.

-As Chris flips back, Syrus lays in with a combination of attacks, each meeting their mark as Chris genuinely attempts to dodge them.

-Syrus finds a grip on Chris’ ankles and fiercely swings him around, making a buzzing noise. He changes the angle of the swing and starts chipping into the ground, slamming Chris over and over before hurling him into a building.

-As the structure crumbles, Chris bolts out, only to get shot away with an energy blast.

-Every time Chris tries to move away, Syrus pops him in the face with a powerful hit.

-Syrus finally grabs Chris by the shirt and hangs him above the ground, charging an energy beam in the other hand.

Syrus: Where did all your confidence go?

-Chris reacts quickly to this, embedding his fist in Syrus’ stomach up to the wrist.

-Syrus coughs out loud, trying to breathe.

-Chris continues landing these unforgiving hits in the exact same spot.

-Syrus reaches out a hand to grab Chris, but Chris grabs it back, clenching his fist around it and breaking the hand.

-This causes Syrus to reef back and distance himself from Chris, his breaths raged and strained.

Chris: (No longer arrogant and cocky). Austin’s right; I’m ending this.

Syrus: (Through gritted teeth, blood oozing from his lips). You won’t take this from me…

Chris: (Holds out a hand and charges energy in his open palm). I gave you fair warning.

-Syrus pulls his remaining working hand up near his face and forms the same white-hot energy attack that was fired at Derek.

-Chris stops charging for a moment, surprised as Syrus instead points his hand and his attack at himself, as if holding a pistol to his head.

Syrus: I’ll see you in Hell.

-Chris tries to quickly fire his attack before Syrus’, but he is too late.


-Chris is hurled from the explosion point as the area is once more enveloped in an unholy white light, shredding the city block as the blast implodes upon itself, leaving nothing behind.

-Syrus is gone.

-A few moments pass as nothing stirs, a slight breeze blowing through to swirl the dust.

-Chris pushes out of a pile of rubble and coughs. His hair is back to normal and he finally looks like he took a serious beating.

-Jack, Austin, and Kevin also emerge from piles of fallen concrete, busty but relatively unharmed.

-The four get to their feet and brush themselves off.

-Chris looks down and sees Derek’s sai. He picks them up and looks them over.

Kevin: Is Syrus gone?

Chris: I think so.

Lindsey: Thank God! You’re okay!

-Lindsey and the others come rushing into the eerie clearing.

-Chris looks up and sees Lindsey sprinting toward him, crying from joy. He smiles as he sees her.

Lindsey: Jack! You’re okay! (She brushes past Chris, bumping him as she dives into Jack’s confused arms, kissing him). Don’t do that! Don’t do that! You could have been killed!

Jack: (Awkwardly going along with it, embracing her back). Y-yeah, I’m fine.

-Chris watches this, all happiness fading from him, leaving only a powerful feeling of isolation.

-He closes his eyes and screams out in rage, powering up.

-The others turn to see him explode away from the scene, flying off towards the now-rising sun in the distance.

-No one speaks as Glitch and a large number of Legion soldiers march into the open, quickly checking for anyone in need of their help.

-Glitch sees that no one is speaking.

Glitch: What’s happened?

-No one says a word.

End of Eclipse Star: Genesis!

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy-Four

January 27, 2011 at 2:33 pm (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 74

“Saving Throw”

Recap: Last time, as the group fought to suppress Syrus’ loyal soldiers, Chris, Jack, Austin, and Glitch made their way to the chamber housing the Eclipse Star, a chamber that was empty save for a single pedestal. Syrus arrived to challenge Chris to a fight but during the scuffle, Chris hacked the pedestal in half, revealing the Eclipse Star inside. Syrus immediately grasped the all-important item and brought the temple down on Chris’ group. Everyone on the outside watched helplessly as the structure fully collapsed while Syrus flew off for Trillium City. Is this really the end?

-Lindsey and the others frantically grab rubble and throw rocks to the side, desperate to clear as much out as possible.

Lindsey: C’mon, we’ve got to get them out!


Leena: Hon, I don’t know what to say. I don’t think it’s happening.


Scott: She’s right. Structurally speaking, that much debris falling all at once is enough to crush anything, even Jack’s barrier thing.


Lindsey: Shut up! (She continues to dig as tears well up in her eyes. She gradually begins to take on a more liquid form as she loses control of her emotions).

-The others continue throwing debris aside, partly to placate Lindsey, and partly because there is always that strange hope.

-Meanwhile, deep underground…

Glitch: You guys okay?


-Glitch clicks on his chest, illuminating the now very small space.

-The other three, all huddled close together, are surprised to see a barrier field surrounding them, easily sustaining itself and keeping the structure from crushing the four.

Jack: I’m not doing that. Who’s doing that?


Chris: I have no idea.


Glitch: Oh? The energy field? I saw you do your technique enough, plus I have some of your memories and DNA on file in my data. It wasn’t until just now that I had a viable reason to implement my findings.


Austin: Nerd!


Glitch: I suppose I could turn it off and crush you guys. How ‘bout that?


Austin: Haha! No, that’s perfectly fine!


Jack: You have no problem holding that shield up?


Glitch: Nope. My energy recycles itself, so I could keep this field up for as long as I need to.


Chris: Well great, I guess we can set up a nice life at the bottom of a caved-in pit. That sounds like a great plan.


Austin: Ah c’mon. There’s always a way out.


Chris: Do you see one?


Austin: Nope, but I’m not the guy who just sees stuff and pieces everything together. That’d be one of my roommates from this caved-in pit I live in.


Chris: Okay, it’s worth a shot.


-Chris begins scanning all around the protective bubble, looking for anything that could help them.

Chris: Glitch, you said your energy recycles itself?


Glitch: Yes. I recently gave myself a few modifications.


Chris: What happens if we fire energy blasts from in here?


Glitch: They’d bounce around inside the shield, most likely striking us and compacting into a denser, more powerful explosion.


Chris: Can you generate more than one field at a time?


Glitch: I suppose it wouldn’t be impossible.


Chris: Which way is north?


Glitch: Er…that way. (Points).

Chris: Okay. (Chris cups his hands together and starts charging an energy blast).

Austin: Uh, what are you doing?


Chris: You mind adding to this?


Austin: I’m not great with science, but I heard something about explosions inside our little bubble getting bigger.


Chris: Jack, you too, please.


Austin: (Shakes his head and starts charging something as well). You’d better know what you’re doing.


Chris: I never know what I’m doing.


Austin: Which is where all the fun happens.


-Jack also charges an energy blast. The three meet their hands together as they charge.

Chris: Glitch, I’m gonna need you to shield this stuff in about three seconds.


Glitch: Ready.


-Right as the three are about to discharge their blasts, Glitch creates a field around the explosion. The energy begins surging within the little bubble, growing brighter and brighter.

-Chris grabs the energy ball and forces it into the ground near their feet.

Chris: Jack, you might want to throw up an energy shield of your own.


-The four huddle closer together as the ground begins glowing. While Glitch shrinks the energy field around the four, Jack throws up his own. At this point they are barely separated from the glowing explosion waiting to happen.

-Back outside…

Derek: We need to call it. Syrus is only getting further and further away at this point.


Lindsey: And you’re just going to let your friends die?!


Derek: In those words: Yes. If I get to stop Syrus, then yes.


-The ground once again begins quaking violently.

Leena: Great, what now?



-The backside of the Forest Temple blows wide open as a spinning ball of death hurls from the explosion, landing just a few feet from everyone.

-Everyone hits the deck as more debris begins raining on them.

-The spinning ball of death stops spinning and comes to a stop nearby. Chris, Austin, Jack, and Glitch are inside, reeling but okay.

Chris: Glitch, could you drop your shield so I can throw up properly?


Glitch: Yeah. (Click).


Chris: Thank you. (Sick).

-The others run up to see what the commotion is.

Kyle: Well holy shit. You guys aren’t dead. Pay me. (Scott pulls some cash from his pocket and reluctantly hands it to Kyle).

Lindsey: (Grabs Jack). Are you guys crazy?! I thought you were dead! You can’t just DO that to me!


Jack: Calm down, we’re okay.


Chris: Syrus didn’t harm any of you, did he?


Derek: No, he left straight for the city.


Chris: Damnit! Even at full speed we can’t catch him!


Jack: I think I can do it.


Derek: Yeah, I’d like to see this.


Jack: I’ve been playing with the electricity abilities and I’m sure I can transform into a bolt of lightning, similar to how Lindsey and Kevin can change into water.


Chris: How much energy would that take?


Jack: I haven’t had a chance to really use this yet, but I’m pretty sure it’ll get me to Syrus with enough Pulse left for one good smash. After that, I’m completely worthless.


Lindsey: Then it’s not an option.


Jack: Don’t.


Lindsey: (Smacks him). No, you don’t. How badly do you want to get killed?


Derek: We don’t have time to argue. You either go now or the city’s a crater.


-Jack quickly kisses Lindsey and waves to the others.

Lindsey: Jack wait!


Jack: (Points at the group). You better be right on my ass for cover.



-Jack converts himself to an electrical form, zapping across the sky toward Trillium.

-The others instantly take to the air as well, following the trail left by the energy bolt. In mere seconds, Jack is no longer visible.

-Meanwhile, Syrus continues flying by himself, looking over the Eclipse Star as it glows in his hand.

Syrus: I find it rather odd that so many have failed to use this properly. I hardly feel any different at all. (Looks over his arms). I feel a power surge, yes, but I’m still in control of my actions. Were the others just too moronic to perform simple tasks?


-As Chris’ group flies, once again, no one is speaking.

Leena: (Quietly nudging Kyle as they fly near the back). What, no Eye Spy?


Kyle: I’m not really good at that game, truth be told. Kind of runs in the family. Also diabetes, so we’ll have to get our kids checked for that.


Leena: I don’t mean to sound all weird or anything, but, uh, if I were buried under a whole structure, let’s say an ancient temple or something, would you be freaking out like Lindsey did?


Kyle: Hypothetically?


Leena: (Annoyed). No, I’m really buried right now. You’re just suffering from a diabetic coma.


Kyle: That would explain a lot…but if you were trapped, yes, I’d be freaked. I mean, our kids need a mother and all.


Leena: Okay, those kid jokes? Don’t make those.


Kyle: Can’t you just turn into air or something?


Leena: I’m not following.


Kyle: Lindsey’s got that water thing going, Jack’s a spark of thunder right now-


Leena: Thunder is the noise, lightning is the thing.


Kyle: Whatever, you’re really good with those wind abilities; can’t you change into wind?


Leena: Haven’t tried, so I have no clue.


Kyle: Well, if you get buried alive, give it a shot. It might just work out.


Leena: That’s…actually that’s pretty smart.


Kyle: Our kids will definitely be smart.


Leena: Shh.


Kyle: Sorry.


-This is the last anyone speaks until they get to the city. Inner monologues, however, those are still just as talkative as ever.


Chris’ Monologue: I can see everything happening in my head before we even arrive. I see Syrus standing before so many of my broken friends, and I…I don’t know what I’m expected to do. We’re walking into something horrible, and if we manage to get out of this, we’re not going to be the same people that went in.


-The images of Syrus breaking his friends plays over and over in his mind, speeding up faster and faster until Chris finally shuts his eyes tight before reopening them, a look of intense anger on his face.

Chris’ Monologue: I’m not letting that happen, no matter what.


-Syrus views Trillium as he approaches.

Syrus: It is time.


-He flies to the center of the city, tucking the Eclipse Star into a fold in his clothing. He hovers above the buildings, staring.

Syrus: With Trillium gone, the war ends. And then everything else becomes so simple.


-He throws a hand out, pointing his palm down at the city as energy begins to accumulate around his hand.


-The sky starts to cloud as a rainstorm becomes inevitable.


-Syrus’ hand shakes every so slightly as he reaches maximum strength.


Syrus: All so simple…



-Right as Syrus unleashes his blast, Jack pounds him with his body’s full force, bowing Syrus backwards and hurling his energy blast into the air.


-It sails up, up up…



-Syrus centers himself as he turns around, seeing nothing.


Syrus: Now where did he run off to…?



-Jack brings both feet down onto Syrus’ head, throwing him sailing down to the pavement below.


-He lands with a smash before standing completely upright.


-Jack is once more gone.


-As the group continues flying a ways off, Lindsey becomes flush with goosebumps.


Lindsey: Jack’s in trouble already.


Derek: That soon?


Lindsey: We’ve got to hurry.


-She takes off at a speed that has her screaming across the sky, distancing herself by a wide margin with the others.


Chris: Lindz!


-Back in the center of the city…


Syrus: Alright Jack, is that it? Are you out of lightning tricks? Couldn’t have been so easy to follow me at that speed, could it?


-People on the street are looking around, extremely confused as to why a man in black clothing is yelling to a person they can’t see.


-Around a corner, Jack peers around silently, panting deep in his chest.


Syrus: You’ve done quite well delaying me, haven’t you? So are you ready to keep fighting?


-Jack starts running around the building to strike again.



Syrus: I don’t think so!


-Syrus leaps straight through the building, looming overhead Jack in an instant.


-As the building starts swaying, the crowds of people on the street suddenly realize everything is very wrong.


-Jack grounds himself and throws a strong punch straight up at Syrus.


Syrus: Oh Jack, poor Jack.


-Jack looks up to see Syrus holding his fist without any effort.



-Syrus sweeps a kick underneath him and boots Jack in his entire body, knocking Jack down the block.



-Following this, Syrus imbeds his fist into Jack’s stomach up to the wrist, pinning Jack to the ground.


Syrus: Would you like to call out for help maybe? I’m somewhat curious.


-Jack grabs Syrus’ head with both hands and discharges a jolt of electricity.


-Syrus recoils as Jack slips away, kicking Syrus in the head as he moves.


-With eyes closed, Syrus catches Jack’s foot.


Syrus: Foolish boy.


-Syrus throws Jack into the air and points straight upwards.


Syrus: I hope you’ve made your peace with God.



-An energy blast soars up at Jack. He has barely enough time to throw up his barrier technique, and even that provides minimal relief.


-He plummets back to the ground, hitting it hard and trying to roll to his feet.


-Syrus’ boot comes down on his back, keeping him held firmly in place.


Syrus: It feels good to be the hero again, doesn’t it?


Jack: (Weakly). More than you know…


-Syrus points his palm down at Jack, energy forming around it again.


Syrus: And who am I do deny you a hero’s exit?



-Lindsey tackles Syrus from behind with a solid punch.


-As she lands next to Jack, she points her index and middle finger at Syrus and fires three quick energy blasts, all three hitting their mark in the distance.


Lindsey: Don’t do something that stupid again, you understand?


Jack: (Smiles). And just how loudly did Chris yell when you sped off alone?


Lindsey: Pretty loudly.


Jack: Good.



-Syrus returns with a haymaker to Lindsey’s face, tossing her aside as Jack leaps back up with another punch.



-Jack’s punch connects as well, this one hitting Syrus in the ribs.



-Lindsey snaps right back, hitting Syrus in the head with a roundhouse kick.


-As Syrus rolls to a stop, Jack and Lindsey each start charging elemental attacks.


-Lindsey begins spraying Syrus with a jet of water as Jack plunges his hands into the stream, discharging a current of electricity.


-Syrus is hit with the full effect of this, bringing him to his knees as the attack ceases.


Lindsey: Good teamwork, no?


Syrus: (Laughing in his throat). And that’s it, isn’t it?


Lindsey: What?


Syrus: (Looking up at her, smiling). That’s supposed to be enough to cripple me, right? And now I’m helpless? (He stands up, unharmed. Lindsey and Jack take a step back). Both of your Pulse energies are hard to read right now. Could that be because you’ve gotten so very good at hiding them? Or is it perhaps because you’re already so tired?


Lindsey: We’re not afraid of you!


Syrus: Hm, I’d assume not, what with the reinforcements arriving just in time.


-Syrus turns back to see the rest of the group landing in battle stances.


Chris: You guys hurt badly?


Jack: We’re tired, but we’ll be fine.


Syrus: Oh joy of joys. Will I be treated to a series one-on-one battles, or just a chaotic free-for-all?


Chris: We don’t have to do anything. All you have to do is put the Eclipse Star down and walk away.


Syrus: It’s too late for that; I’m too far gone.


Chris: No one’s ever too far gone.


Syrus: I am.



-The entire city block is shook to pieces beneath everyone’s feet as Syrus powers up, screaming as he does.


-Innocent bystanders too stupid to leave are caught in this chaos with few being saved as the teenagers quickly move to pick them into the air.


Derek: (Not holding anyone). You guys deal with the morons rubbernecking; I’m taking him on headfirst.


-Derek speeds into Syrus with his arms out, slamming into him and starting a volley of punches and kicks back and forth as the two wrestle through the air at high speeds.


Jack: Glitch, go start protecting the crowds. They’re your only priority.


Glitch: Right.


-The others drop off their passengers a good ten blocks down.


Kevin: Everyone, please, you need to get as far away from here as possible!


Austin: Seriously, this whole area is about to keep shaking apart.


-Derek fights on even ground with Syrus, straining hard with every move to keep up. Syrus just smiles and plays along before grabbing Derek’s next two punches and headbutting him while still gripping his fists.


-Derek recoils but can’t break away. Syrus repeats this a few times.


-As Chris and Austin fly in behind them, Syrus turns and tosses Derek to Chris.


-As Chris catches Derek, Syrus punches him in the face, then kicks Austin.


-Danny and Willy come up behind Syrus, one attacking from high and the other attacking from low. Syrus simply spins sideways between them before firing two small energy blasts into their backs.


-This repeats multiple times as people attack from obvious angles, each getting countered and thrown to the side.


Chris’ Narration: We’re not hitting hard enough. We need to hit harder.


-He and Derek look at each other and nod before taking off in completely opposite directions.


-As Syrus blocks punches thrown by Scott, Chris comes up at his face.


-Syrus knocks Scott aside and throws up a block to Chris.


-Instantly, Chris moves to the side and darts in another direction.


-Syrus turns and sees Derek coming from his other side, once more throwing up a block and once more seeing his attacker change course and run in another direction.


-This continues happening over and over again.


-Eventually, as Derek is rushing towards Syrus, Lindsey comes from behind and clobbers Syrus with a double kick.


-Syrus turns to attack her but as he turns, he spies Chris running up again.


-Covering this new attack, Syrus leaves himself open for Kevin to elbow him in the side.


-Soon Syrus discovers that Chris and Derek aren’t actually attacking, meaning when Danny runs up to strike for the side, Syrus attacks his blind spot instead, tossing Danny aside, then Willy from the other side, and Leena from behind.


Syrus: Clever trick, but it still isn’t working!


Chris’ Narration: Harder then.



-Chris and Derek strike Syrus at the same time, one from either side.


-Syrus lets slip a painful growl as the two disappear just as quickly.



-Syrus is caught off guard yet again, this time getting struck in the back of the legs by Chris and in the head by Derek.


-He stands up, shaking this off, right before-



-He receives a slam in the hip by Derek and a punch to the head by Chris, spinning completely in the air.



-The tactic doesn’t work a fourth time as Syrus strikes both kids at once, knocking them back.


Syrus: Is that the best you can throw at me?!


-Syrus throws a haphazard energy blast in no particular direction.



-The attack levels a few buildings and rips up the street all around.


-All of the teenagers land, unharmed.


Chris: HARDER!


-Everyone converges on Syrus at once, slashing and firing energy blasts as fast as they can charge them.


-Syrus dodges and blocks as many as he can, knocking attackers aside when he can, but he’s still taking a lot of heavy shots in between.





-Syrus powers up, creating a shockwave around him that throws everyone away.


-The shockwave stays up as he starts charging energy in his hands.


Syrus: Can none of you deliver a true challenge?!


-Austin slams against the energy barrier, ricocheting off.


Austin: Can’t get through!


-Lindsey comes speeding down the block at full power, hitting the barrier with everything she’s got.


-Syrus looks up just as she punches through, her eyes ablaze, as she hits him full-force, carrying him with her down the strip.


Lindsey: How’s this for a challenge?


-Syrus smiles and taps acknowledgement to her.


Syrus: Well done indeed.



-He strikes her back, sending her head-over-heels into a painful faceplant.


-Syrus looks over his shoulder and tosses a quick energy ball as Derek sneaks up to attack.



-Derek brings out his sai just in time to create a sonic boom that bounces Syrus’ energy right back.


-As Syrus comes out of a hasty block, he looks to rush up at Derek, though doesn’t counter the kicks from both sides, one from Chris and one from Austin.


-Syrus reaches out and grab the two, but still gets hammered in the face by Jack.


-Syrus claps Chris and Austin against Jack before force pushing them away, right as he turns around to uppercut Kyle.


-Leena catches Kyle in the air and throws her other hand out, kicking up massive wind gusts.


-Syrus is forced to shield his face as the debris attempts to sting his face.


-With this as cover, Lindsey zips in with an energy blast charged.


-Syrus drops to his back and kicks her into the air.


-Lindsey spins like a top as she soars higher and higher.


-She finally comes to a stop, screams, and fires every ounce of power she has straight down in one explosive discharge.



-Syrus brings himself in tightly as the energy beam hammers down from above.


-Lindsey remains airborne and maintains her beam’s strength, trying to force Syrus down.


-Chris recovers from his last injury and quickly charges his Pulse before firing his own blast.



-His beam collides with Syrus, now struggling heavily under the force of two full-powered beams.


Chris: HELP HER!



-Derek joins with an energy beam at another angle.





-Everyone else fires their biggest and strongest energy blasts at Syrus, combining their powers together.




-Syrus finally shows the slightest bit of fear as the dozen energy beams shred the area around him and push him lower and lower, breaking through any defenses he may still have.


Chris: HARDER!




-The massive combined energy attack detonates, blinding everyone in an instant.


-As the noise dissipates, the teenagers land, coughing from the smoke.


Derek: We get ‘im?!


-Everyone waits for the dust to clear, revealing a crater the size of a city block where Syrus once stood.


-They hardly have the strength to stand anymore, but they all begin laughing and celebrating.


Jack: (Kissing Lindsey). Not bad out there.


Lindsey: Oh shut up, that was awesome and you know it.


Chris: Glitch, what’s the status of the bystanders?


Glitch: I managed to clear the area. There were very few casualties.


Kevin: Still…


Glitch: Yeah…


Austin: Hey, we’re okay though! We did it guys! Mission accomplished!


Chris: Yeah…


Derek: Hey.


Chris: Hey.


Derek: (Claps Chris’ hand in a tight handshake). We weren’t too bad working together there.


Chris: No kidding.


Derek: (Motions to the crater). You a little disappointed you didn’t get to go one-on-one with him?


Chris: No. Not even a little.


Derek: To each his own I guess.


-The group goes about limping around, checking on each other’s statuses. All the while, Chris keeps staring at the crater.


Kyle: Yo Chris, you’re kind of freaking me out here.


Chris: (Keeping his eyes fixated). Yeah.


Kyle: Uh, that wasn’t the reassurance I was looking for there.


-Chris continues watching the crater, starting to twitch a little.


-Everything becomes really quiet all of a sudden.


-The others take notice and also become silent.


Chris: (Breaking the eerie quiet as the camera zooms in on his face). It’s not over.


To Be Concluded!

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy-Three

January 6, 2011 at 5:58 pm (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 73

“The Eclipse Star, At Long Last”

Recap: Last time, Chris and Derek returned to the Northern Lodge after obliterating the Regime’s final Zanrethan bunker, but not before witnessing both an ominous red light to the south and feeling a sudden energy spike where they last left Octavious and Syrus. After discussing the situation with Max, Jack, Glitch, and Austin, they came to the realization that the Forest Temple, previously seen by Austin’s escaping group during the Hidden Plateau plotline, was in fact the default resting place of the Eclipse Star. It took this revelation to jog Chris’ thought process and piece together that Syrus had been knocked south after seeing the red light and, therefore, must be after the Eclipse Star. The group hurries to ready themselves against Syrus as he and his group of loyalists tromp into the ruins in search of the titular MacGuffin at long last: The Eclipse Star appears today!

Up North in each of the rooms, each of the teenagers collect themselves one final time within the past few days, getting ready to fly South and face whatever they find in the Forest Temple.

Derek pulls a leather jacket out from under his bed and reads the tag to himself. “Marshall.” He pauses on the name before throwing one arm through, then the other. He picks up his black sai and slips them through his belt.

Danny and Willy take turns stretching each other’s arms out, grasping their partner’s arms and slowly pulling them behind their back.

Clinton goes through the motions of suiting up in each piece of Legion armor he still owns, clipping boot clasps down before doing the same to thick glove clasps.

Scott sits by his open window, eyes closed, breathing deep as he nurses a cigarette. His eyes have dark bags under them but his face has a smile.

Jack stands before a mirror in his bathroom, fully suited in Legion SWAT gear, as the water runs. He begins going through the process of quickly dying his hair a golden blonde, flicking his head back to get a clear view in the mirror once the dye sets.

Leena checks her belongings one after another, picking pieces of clothing carefully. She sees the throwing discs Kyle gave her just a day ago, picks them up, and smiles. A note flicks under her door reading “Do you like me? Yes. No. Maybe?”

Leena’s door is thrown open, just catching Kyle at the end of the hall.

Leena: Hey!


Kyle: Yes?


Leena: One date. You got it? And only if we come back. That sounds fair?


Kyle: (Immensely happy). Oh I am gonna charm the pants off you…er…figuratively speaking of course.


Kevin sits alone in his room, sitting with his legs up in the armchair. He has a Bible in his hand as he flips through pages, stopping every so often to smirk at passages he finds inspiring or topical. He hits one page and taps a finger down.

Kevin: “You will hear of wars and rumors of wars, but see to it that you are not alarmed. Such things must happen, but the end is still to come.”


Austin goes through the kitchen preparing sandwiches in a hurried manner. Numerous pieces of bread lay open with various ingredients strewn about them. Joshua walks in and smiles, going into the fridge to pull out a whole turkey. Austin laughs and continues making food as Josh joins him.

Glitch sits in the corner of Max’s room, his arm casing open as he makes minor adjustments to his wiring. He catches Max looking dully at this. He looks up as if to say, “What?” Max just shrugs and looks away, leaning back on his bed to rest.

Barbara is bundled up in front of the fireplace in the main sitting room, gingerly sipping a cinnamon-flavored drink as she stares intently on the flames, never looking up. We keep catching glimpses of her conversation with Syrus within the flickering fire, further causing her focused and worried gaze.

Lindsey moves around her room, whipping her elbow blades around, practicing how best to use them, a look of incredible seriousness on her face. A quiet knock taps upon her half-creaked door. She stops, somewhat annoyed and breathing strong, as Chris pushes his head through the door as it hangs low. He can barely make eye contact with her.

Chris: Hey.


Lindsey: (Dry). Yeah? What’s up?


Chris: I’m sorry.


Lindsey: You’re sorry?


Chris: I haven’t been fair to you and I know it. I’m crazy about you, but I should know that you’re with Jack. I have to accept that, and I haven’t done a very good job of doing just that.


Lindsey: Don’t say that you’re in love-


Chris: (Holds up a hand). I know, I know. I’m not here to push that. I just wanted to say that I…I’m okay with you and Jack.


Lindsey: (Somewhat sad). No you’re not.


Chris: But I want to be.



Lindsey: (Lets out a sigh and smiles). Then thank you.


-Chris walks up to her and grabs her, pulling her in for a tight hug.

Lindsey: (Still in the embrace). Thanks for not kissing me just-


Chris: (Interrupting). I’m scared.


Lindsey: What?


Chris: I don’t know what’s going to happen with Syrus but I’m scared of what it could be.


Lindsey: We’ll be fine. We have him outnumbered by over a dozen and out powered by who knows how much.


Chris: I’m still scared.


Lindsey: (Looks Chris in the eyes). Tell you what: You make sure to watch my back and I’ll make sure to watch yours.


Chris: And what happens if Syrus is too much for either of us?


Lindsey: Then we let Derek play warrior instead. Besides. (Flexes her arm in a sarcastic manner). How is Syrus getting past these bad boys?


Chris: (Smiles weakly). Things get bad, you get out of there, okay?


Lindsey: Hmm. You get to freak out on my behalf once without me being annoyed. That sound fair?


Chris: I suppose.


Lindsey: Good.


-She quickly leans in and kisses him on the lips for a few seconds. Chris is speechless.


Lindsey: Stop. That wasn’t to screw with you; that’s to give you that strange morale-boost that you need. Now go get ‘em, tiger.


Chris: (Smiles, holding up the hilt of his sword). Let’s do this.


-Everyone gathers in the main sitting room of the lodge, their preparations complete.


Lindsey: (Noticing Jack’s hair). Whoa! You changed your hair!


Jack: You like it?


Lindsey: Bold, impulsive, nothing like Jack at all. (Running her fingers through his hair). I like it, yeah. (She kisses him a few times).


Austin: (Walks up to Chris, noticing that he’s watching Jack and Lindsey). Sandwich? (Holds up a tasty-looking sub packed with all sorts of meats and cheeses).


Chris: (Looks at Austin, then the sandwich, and back and forth a few times). Yeah alright. (Grabs the sandwich and takes a bite).


Barbara: Chris, you know I’m going to tell you to be careful.


Chris: Yeah.


Barbara: So be careful.


Chris: Yeah.


Barbara: And I love you.


Chris: I love you, too, grandma.


-They hug as Joshua walks to the center of the room.


Joshua: You’re all welcome to come back once you’re done with today.


Jack: I won’t be coming back. It’s time to regroup with the Legion and build again.


Derek: And my father’s still missing.


Joshua: Let this place always be a home for you when you need it then.


Kevin: Josh, thank you, for everything.


Chris: I doubt we would have made it this far without you.


Joshua: Eh, you don’t know that for sure.


Leena: What’re we doing with Max?


Jack: I don’t want him coming with us, and he seems content staying here, so we’ll leave him here for now. I’ll be back in a few days with a Legion escort.


Max: I’m okay with that. (Falls back into an armchair and continues ignoring everyone).


Jack: Glitch, we’ll need you to direct us to the proper coordinates.


Glitch: Shouldn’t be a problem.


Jack: Then we’re off.


Chris: Bye grandma. I’ll be back soon.


Barbara: Bye then.


Lindsey: Bye Josh.


Joshua: Take luck.


-Everyone says their solemn partings and walks out into the snow. Daybreak is upon everyone as the snow falls heavily around their feet. Jack walks to the front of the crowd and powers his Pulse energy up before taking to the skies. Everyone follows him.


-Elsewhere, hundreds of miles south…


Ranking Soldier: Syrus, we’re having a hell of a time navigating this place.


Syrus: Most of the structure is underground and doubles-back on itself frequently.


Ranking Soldier: Figures we’re get bogged down by a maze of some sort.


Syrus: Keep notes. Map this place as you go in case we ever need to come back.


Ranking Soldier: Will do. (Joins the others in the hunt).


Syrus: (Wandering through the main hall with the hieroglyphs). Amazing. I started to doubt we’d ever get to see this place. Just think, the probability of finding the Eclipse Star’s shrine twice in a year? That’s nearly impossible. Unless… (Continues walking and notices the four empty pedestals). Those stones they had. They must have been from the counter-set. (Places a hand on one pedestal and laughs). In trying to defend themselves against such a thing, they’ve managed to remove the only defenses this place had.


-The group continues flying south, no one really speaking as they finally fly over the city.


Derek: There’s Trillium. That should be the halfway point, right?


Jack: Yeah.


Chris: Glitch, what time is it?


Glitch: Little past 1.


Jack: I figured we’d be further along by now.


Chris: Going slower conserves energy, energy that we may need should Syrus pose a serious threat.


Derek: Yeah but the trade-off is that we can’t get there fast enough to stop him from grabbing the Eclipse Star before us.


Chris: It’s not a great choice to make, but I’d rather be prepared than rush into this.


Lindsey: Chris is right; we don’t know if Syrus found anything or not, but tiring ourselves out before even knowing won’t help.


Kyle: Anyone want to play the License Plate Game?


Chris: If you can see license plates from up here, you can play.


Kyle: (Pause). Anyone want to play I Spy?


All: No.


Kyle: Alright then, I didn’t want to play anyway.


Leena: (Sigh). Fine, I’ll play.


Kyle: Okay! I spy with my little eye…something that is hot.


Leena: Too soon.


Kyle: Sorry.


Austin: (Flies in close to Chris). Hey, buddy, what’s up?


Chris: I’m nervous, that’s all.


Austin: You don’t look nervous; you look like you’ve seen dead people.


Chris: I have an extremely bad feeling about today.


Austin: Damn, your feelings are usually right, too.


Chris: I just…(Images flash of Chris’ vision. Syrus fights with the group, easily dispatching them. Lindsey dies and Chris is left alone as Syrus laughs).


Austin: Chris?


Chris: I don’t think I’m ready for this.


Austin: We’ll find out soon enough, won’t we?


-Hours pass as the group flies south, searching for the proper coordinates. By 5 o’clock the sky is starting to cloud, but the Forest Temple is within range.


Glitch: Two miles to destination.


Jack: Okay. Everyone on foot. We’re walking in.


-They land in an area with heavy tree covering.


Leena: So weird being back here. I can still remember half the trees.


Scott: I remember you took a leak behind that one over there. (Points).


Leena: (Turns insanely red). Yes, thank you, we all needed to know that.


Jack: Quiet. (Everyone freezes for a moment or two). How close are we right here?


Glitch: 1.7 miles from the coordinates.


Jack: Clinton, do you remember the forest being this quiet when your group came through here?


Clinton: It was oddly quiet, but nothing like this.


-Jack clicks his Pulse-reader watch on. It starts beeping.


Jack: Yeah, we’ve got a number of Regime soldiers lurking about a mile and a half to the southwest, and they aren’t the sort that we usual fight.


Derek: How strong we talking?


Jack: They’re just walking around and even then they’re up around what the Higher Ups of the Legion would be clocked at.


Chris: What’s Syrus reading at?


Jack: I can’t differentiate by person.


Chris: Then the blip with the lowest rating.


Jack: Little over 2000.


Chris: Keep us away from that blip.


Jack: Okay, let’s move out.


-The team trudges in two uneven lines forward through the brush, Jack and Glitch leading the way, followed by Chris and Derek, and then the rest.


-After a short hike in silence, Jack holds up a hand and stops them.


Jack: Clinton, we close?


Clinton: (Moves to the front). Yes. See those trees up there? (Points to a row of trees with the tips sliced off). Just past those is where the temple sits.


Jack: Okay, I’m seeing anywhere between 40 and 50 enemies out there, so we need to start taking them down one-by-one in silence.


Chris: Won’t work. Any one of those soldiers goes unconscious and Syrus is gonna know.


Derek: He probably already knows we’re here.


Chris: Probably.


Kevin: We could try overloading his ability to sense where we are.


Derek: And how would you propose we do that?


Kevin: If one or two of us shoots our Pulse energy to max, it will become harder to focus on anyone running around at a minimum output, similar to what Joshua said about the churches overshadowing individual energy patterns.


Jack: It could work.


Clinton: The more distractions we can manage, the better.


Jack: Glitch, you, me, Chris, and Austin, we’re going into the temple. Lindsey, you’re able to kick up the most smoke when you power up, figuratively speaking, so you’re in charge of the main diversion.


Lindsey: Right.


Jack: Derek, you can focus better, but your Pulse still gets pretty high. You do the same thing she’s doing, but do it within the middle of the enemies.


Derek: (Pulls out his sai). Nice thinkin’ Pony Boy.


Jack: Everyone else, clear those other soldiers and keep them busy.


Chris: Let’s go.


-Lindsey runs off into the trees as the two groups split off and go their separate ways.


-Syrus continues slowly walking down the wall, reading it as he goes. He suddenly stops.


Syrus: They certainly got here fast.


-He turns around as one of his soldiers runs up.


Ranking Soldier: Syrus, they’re here, aren’t they?


Syrus: Take the majority of your men and exit the temple.


Ranking Soldier: To meet them head-on?


Syrus: Yes. Send five to accompany me while the rest hold the entrance.


Ranking Soldier: Absolutely.


-The ranking soldier salutes and runs off to gather his men.


-Outside, Lindsey gets to a high point nearby the temple and begins charging her power to absolute maximum. As a result, the ground begins quaking violently.


Jack: Wow, she’s really putting her best foot forward.


-Derek rushes at the front entrance and cranks his Pulse energy to a staggering amount as well.


Austin: The front entrance is going to be swarming, but I know there’s a side way in. I saw it when we were leaving.


Glitch: On the north face?


Austin: Yeah. Forgot you’ve got those memories, too.


Glitch: Must be mind blowing, huh?


Austin: Hah! Absolutely!


-Clinton and his group run around to the opposite side as Regime soldiers rush out of the temple.


Clinton: Do it.


-His group charges energy blasts and fires them at their opponent’s feet, causing a wave of dust to explode up, covering the entrance completely.


-Energy blasts start firing haphazardly through the dust cover, only to be met with more potshots from Clinton’s team.


-While the fighting begins, Chris’ group slips around back while led by Austin.


Austin: Should be what looks like a crack back here…there.


-He points at a small opening mostly covered by foliage. Austin rips the bushes aside and allows the others to go in first.


-Once inside, the four slink along the wall, careful to peer around corners for any sign of Syrus and his soldiers.


-A few shadows dance across the floors from the hallway as Syrus rushes deeper into the temple.


Jack: Where to next?


Austin: I don’t know; I never went in this far.


Chris: (Seeing the hieroglyphs). What are those?


Austin: Just some designs on the wall. There’s a picture in another room of the Eclipse Star.


-Chris moves his hand slowly over the images, seemingly useless swirls chiseled into the rock.


Chris: Any of this make sense to anyone else but me?


Austin: Nope.


Chris: Just my luck, then. C’mon.


-Chris takes them in the opposite direction as Syrus’ shadows, instead into a small side room with nothing in it save for a water basin.


Chris: Okay, gotta be somewhere…


Jack: We looking for a switch?


Chris: Nope. (Pushes a section of the wall to the side, revealing a tunnel and causing a sudden draft). Well? We’ve got nothing better to do.


-The four dive into the tunnel and beat feet down as fast as they can follow Chris’ lead into the enveloping darkness.


-Outside, Clinton’s team has spread out and taken cover as they shoot back.


Clinton: Danny, can you sense any Pulse readings from within the dust cover?


Danny: Nah, Derek and Lindsey are way too distracting.


Clinton: Then at least they’re doing their job well enough.



-A shockwave resonates from within the dust cloud, clearing it up to reveal Derek standing in the middle, his sai outstretched after being struck together.


-Three soldiers rain down right by the group’s covering, disoriented and confused. Willy, Scott, and Clinton rush from cover and strike each of them in the face once, knocking them out. They turn and sprint into cover once more as Derek slams the ground, throwing up another cloud of dust.


-Up on the high ground, Lindsey proceeds to keep her fighting power at max. Energy blasts begin shooting toward her as seven soldiers try to take her down.


-She throws up a half barrier attack as they continue advancing, ricocheting energy off her shield.


-One rushes up and attacks her from behind. She grabs him by the leg and flips him onto his back, knocking him out with an ax-kick to the jaw. She turns back to the advancing group, keeping one hand up as a barrier and fires back with her other hand.


-Inside the temple, Chris and his group snake through narrow corridors and low overhangs. Chris seems to know where he’s going, but the others can hardly keep up with him.


Jack: You sure this is the best way to go about this?


Chris: Positive.


Jack: Why?


Chris: Hey, you saw the map, too.


Jack: What map?


Chris: Let’s hope Syrus said the same thing.


-As Clinton’s group continues firing, a mass of soldiers dive out of the dust and fire all at once in the direction of the group’s covering.


-Clinton and the others are left coughing and covering their eyes as the soldiers rush in, getting in a few good strikes to the head.


-One soldier reaches out and grabs Clinton by the face, charging a blast in his palm.


-Derek launches into the fray, starting with the back of Clinton’s attacker’s head, knocking him clean out.


-Clinton instantly claps his hands together, forms the shape of a gun, and fires a fast, hot blast right behind Derek.



-Several enemies are thrown all over the place from this blast, skidding into the side of the temple where various members of the good guys run up and deliver the final blow.


-Lindsey continues suppressing fire to her attackers but they’ve begun to surround her. As one from behind her throws an energy blast, she turns to liquid.


-The soldiers seem extremely confused as all that remains is a puddle where Lindsey once stood.


-As a solider steps forward, the puddle reaches up and wraps around his leg, hurling him into a tree.


-The other five soldiers regain defensive stances as the puddle whirls around, whipping them in the faces.


-Lindsey reforms in the center, spraying torrential spouts of water in all directions, washing the soldiers away.


-Kyle and Leena run around collecting the unconscious soldiers from the battlefield, moving them to the edge.


Leena: Haven’t they found the Star yet? Any time now would be great.


Kyle: Yeah, but aren’t you enjoying this?


Leena: Not particularly.


Kyle: Oh. Well then, what sort of food do you really like? You know? To eat when on a date?


Leena: Seriously, not a time I want to talk about that. (Cough). Especially with all this dust.


-Leena pulls out her throwing disc and hurls it at the center of the fray. She points her first two fingers at it and swishes them around before flicking them above her head.


-A hurricane-level gust of wind shoots up from the middle, instantly clearing the dust and lifting everyone within it into the air, including Derek and Willy.


-She throws her hand open and the pillar of wind tosses its debris, people included, in all directions.


-Her throwing disc returns to her hand as she pockets it.


Kyle: That was pretty cool.


Leena: (Lets out a sigh). Thanks.


Kyle: I was thinking like pasta or something. Can’t go wrong with pasta.


Leena: Shh. Not now. Later.


-Chris suddenly comes to a halt at the end of the tunnel, the other three in his team looking confused.


Austin: This it?


Jack: It’s a dead end.


Chris: No way this is a dead end.


-He places his hands on the solid rock face and pushes. Nothing happens.


Jack: We’ve got to turn around.


Chris: HAAAAA!!!



-Chris fires an energy beam, blowing a gaping hole in the rock.


Austin: Very nice work.


Chris: Thanks.


-As the smoke clears, all they can see is darkness. Glitch clicks a panel on his chest, instantly beginning to glow, illuminating the area. They get a view into a large chamber with a single pedestal in the center of a pool of water.


-The four take a few steps forward before looking around at the rest of the chamber.


Austin: How far down you think we are?


Chris: I’m not sure.


Glitch: My geographical sensors are going haywire right now, but I know we can’t be that deep.


Jack: The good news is, that door hasn’t been opened yet. (Points at the chamber’s main door, still closed).


Chris: C’mon then.


-He takes off at a run, splashing through the shallow pool as he makes his way up to the center pedestal. The others follow him.


Chris: This is- (Gets to the pedestal and looks down. It’s empty). No. That can’t be right.


Jack: Nothing? (Turns to Austin). You guys never came down here before, right?


Austin: No, we didn’t.


Chris: I don’t get it. (Slams his fists down on the pedestal). Where is it?!


Syrus: Fancy meeting you lot here.


-Jack, Glitch, and Austin swivel around to face Syrus, standing in the doorway with five soldiers. Chris doesn’t move.


Jack: How’d you make it down here?


Syrus: You three make a helpful energy pattern to follow.


Chris: It doesn’t matter anyway. Nothing’s here.


Syrus: (Somewhat surprised). What?


Chris: (Turns). The pedestal, it’s empty.


Syrus: That can’t be right.


Chris: We both wasted our time.


Syrus: I’d hardly call discovering this location a waste of time.


Chris: The Eclipse Star isn’t here, meaning we have no conflict with you.


Syrus: Is that so?


Chris: I’m asking you kindly, please, let it be done.


Syrus: But I- (Somewhat stunned, looking from Chris to the others, resting his eyes on the empty pedestal as well). How can it not be here?


Chris: You’re the one with the innate knowledge of the subject; you tell me.


-Syrus quickly trots up to the pedestal, grasping it with both hands, slumping upon confirmation.


Syrus: Was it all a trick?


Jack: (Whispering to Austin and Glitch). I don’t know what’s about to happen, but we need to get out of here as quickly as possible.


Austin: The plan?


Jack: Glitch, when I tell you, off go the lights.


Syrus: You. (Turns to Chris, chuckling). You’re trying to fool me, aren’t you?


Chris: No. We’ve both been made fools.


Syrus: (No longer chuckling). How can it- How can she- No!


Jack: Lights, off.


-Glitch clicks his chest panel again. The chamber instantly becomes pitch black.


-Several quick thumping sounds can be heard.


-A dull light shines from Syrus’ eyes, showing his five soldiers on the other end of the pool knocked out, Jack and Austin standing over them, nursing their knuckles.


Syrus: So I am forever shamed? No, I won’t have things end like this. I can still get at least one thing I want. (Points his gaze toward Chris).


Chris: (Reaches behind his back and clutches the hilt of his sword). Don’t. I don’t want to do this.


Syrus: You don’t have a choice.


-Syrus’ eyes glow intensely bright as he lunges toward Chris.


-Chris pulls his sword from behind his back, swishing it in an arc above his head. The blade glows as brightly as Syrus’ eyes.


Chish! Chish!

-Chris starts slashing madly, trying to hack Syrus in half. Syrus sidesteps each attack, throwing his arms out and parrying the sword swings with his forearm armor, knocking the blows to the side.


Jack: Let’s go.


Austin: Not without Chris.


Jack: Fine.


-Jack waits a few seconds as Chris and Syrus dance around the pedestal. As Syrus takes a step back and touches a foot into the water, Jack dunks his palm into the pool and fires an electrical current through the water.


-Syrus’ body tenses for a second as his winces from this. He turns to face Jack.


-Chris leaps into the air, spinning his sword in his hands, bringing it down with full force at Syrus.


-Syrus looks up and sees this. He brings his hands together while turning, clubbing the side of Chris’ sword as hard as he can.


-Chris’s swing is knocked off course, carrying him into the pedestal.



-The sword cleaves the pedestal at the middle, causing an unnatural light to explode forth into the room and throwing Chris across the chamber into the wall.


-Once everyone’s eyes adjust, they can clearly see source of the light: The Eclipse Star.


Syrus: How is this even possible?


-No one dares move for a moment or two. Chris shakes his head, getting up from his slumped position. His sword is no longer glowing.


-Syrus slowly walks up to the Eclipse Star, entirely focused on it.


-Jack and Austin sprint at Syrus. He waves a hand behind him, causing the water to shoot up and blast the two with a water jet.


-Chris leaps up and hurls his sword at Syrus.


-Syrus touches the Eclipse Star and time instantly slows to a crawl all around him..


-He breathes in and looks up, seeing the sword point mere inches from his head.


Syrus: Amazing. Simply amazing.


-He grabs the sword firmly in his hand and throws it back at Chris.


-Time resumes its normal flow as the sword’s hilt collides with Chris’ forehead, knocking him spinning head over heels.


-Syrus firmly clasps the Eclipse Star in his hand and looks back at Jack and Austin.


Syrus: Nice try boys. I’ll admit, you beat me to the punch, but you didn’t seem to know the secret. (Stares back at his prize). And for that matter, neither did I. (Looks up). We have no further business here.


-He reaches his other hand out and closes it while pointing at the walls. They instantly start crumbling.


-As Jack, Austin, Chris, and Glitch scramble to get away from the walls, Syrus vwings to the door.


Syrus: You requested that I let it be done. And so I shall. Trillium’s time is done, and so is yours.


-He exits as the room obliterates itself.


-Outside, the rest of the group have reconvened outside the main entrance, every one of Syrus’ soldiers lined up, unconscious.


-The ground begins shaking fiercely.


Lindsey: This isn’t good.


-Parts of the structure start toppling over, landing all around the group.


-As they dive backward from the temple, they see Syrus casually walking out, a dark aura surrounding him.


Kevin: Where are the others?


Derek: Take him out!


-Syrus stretches his arm out and clenches his hand, throwing up a barrier of earth as dozens of energy blasts rain down on him.


-He pushes and sends debris flying in all directions. The group stops firing and hides in cover.


Syrus: Those four you sent in after me? You might want to go check on them. (Points at the shrine). They were in the lowest levels when I brought the ceiling down on them.


Lindsey: You bastard!


Syrus: Good luck with that.


-Syrus takes to the air and flies off at full speed.


Clinton: He’ll be heading for Trillium.


Lindsey: I don’t care; Jack and the others are in there.


-She sprints toward the entrance as the structure finishes collapsing, sending a puff of dust out every crevasse.


-The teenagers shield their eyes and try to see anything. Leena starts blowing the dust away with gusts of wind, but they don’t see anyone emerging from the rubble.


Danny: They can’t be dead. Can they?


-Lindsey runs up to the entrance and starts throwing rocks aside. The others join in.


-Syrus continues flying, looking over the Eclipse Star.


Syrus: All that trouble, just for this little stone. (Tightens his grip on it). I can’t let it consume me like so many others. (Shuts his eyes). They were all fools, but I. (Opens his eyes and smiles). I shall make her proud. And together we shall make Him pay.


-To Be Continued!

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy-Two

December 10, 2010 at 2:06 am (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 72

“The Momentary Calm”

Recap: Last time, Chris and Derek managed to infiltrate the Regime’s last Zanrethan stronghold and completely topple it, causing Octavious to order a full retreat from the country, but not before forcing a confrontation with Syrus that left him spinning into the distance while Octavious and the Octa-Ranger rounded up their men. Could things finally be at a resolution point? You’ll have to read on, today, on Eclipse Star!

-Syrus slowly gets to his feet after being hurled miles and miles by Octavious’ blast. He dusts himself off, being more or less unharmed. A deep sigh, a few looks around, and some careful planning behind him, Syrus sets out for the south where the red light previously ripped across the sky.

-In the complete opposite direction, Chris and Derek land in the snow with a soft crunch outside the Northern Lodge, still wearing their stolen Octa-Ranger uniforms.

Chris: (Exhausted). Who’s up for some sleep?


Derek: I second that.


-As they walk through the main doors, they come across Austin, Kyle, and Joshua fast asleep on the couches.

Chris: Aw, isn’t that cute?


Derek: Well, at least they didn’t wait up for us.


-Jack and Lindsey walk in the back door, quietly giggling and looking half-froze.

-Once they see Chris and Derek they actually freeze.

Jack: Oh, hey guys, you made it back.


Chris: Yeah.


Lindsey: (Awkwardly making conversation). How’d it go?


Chris: Fine.


Lindsey: Did you-


Chris: (Cutting her off). Were you two out in the woods this whole time?


Lindsey: What? What makes you say that?


Chris: You’re just walking inside now.


Derek: And your hair’s a mess.


Chris: And you’re half blue.


Derek: And your shirt’s not tucked in. (Points at Jack).

Jack: So? Since when do I have to tuck in my shirt?


Chris: Since always, especially when staying outside in below zero temperatures. The hell is this?


-As Chris becomes obviously bothered, the three sleeping beauties wake up.

Austin: What’s going on?


Kyle: Cinnamon buns are not currency…


Chris: These two are just now coming inside after doing…who KNOWS what.


Austin: And who cares? I’m happy to see you and Derek back safe.


Joshua: The pink outfit is a little much, though it is certainly slimming.


Chris: I know, right? (Shakes his head). Okay, to summarize, we managed to get into the Regime’s base, we imploded it, and that’s about it.


Derek: And we saw a red light waaaay to the south.


Chris: Yeah, we did see that.


Joshua: What sort of red light?


Chris: Some crazy light, like a pillar that shot straight into the sky. Looked like it nearly shredded thin air.


-Jack becomes rigid at this.

Jack: Hold on, a weird sky-piercing light appeared and you two, both of you, witnessed it?


Chris: Yes. Josh, have any ideas what it might be?


Joshua: Yes and no. (Looks to Jack, then to Derek, then to Lindsey and Chris). It just doesn’t exactly make any sense though.


Austin: So right when we resolve everything, something else pops up to create trouble?


Kyle: Isn’t that just always the way?


Jack: We might want to ask Max a few questions.


Chris: That actually makes sense. Derek, go get him.


Derek: Me? Why me?


Chris: Because I’m not done talking here with these two.


Lindsey: Chris, stop, stop it right now. I really don’t want to turn this into a thing, whatever it may be.


Chris: Just tell me what you two were doing.


Jack: Talking, making out, and more talking. We are dating; is that so surprising?


Chris: How much making out are we talking?


Lindsey: (Frantically runs her fingers through her hair). I’m not doing this. I’m getting some sleep. (She walks upstairs as Max and Glitch come down).

Glitch: Something wrong, Lindz?


Lindsey: Always, apparently.


Glitch: Well, hope you sleep well.


Max: (Walking up to a couch and slumping). Okay, so the robot overheard you guys saying you needed to talk to me. What ended up happening?


Chris: The Zanrethan Regime base collapsed.


Max: Good. I didn’t understand why we needed an underground base anyway.


Jack: They said they saw a red light in the sky to the south after blowing up the base. Any idea what that could be?


Max: Red light? (Thinks). Could be Stigma’s special buster?


Derek: This beam was a lot further south than the city, plus the beam was large enough that I can safely say none of the Octa-Jackasses fired it.


Max: Then I have no clue. (Snaps his fingers). Wait, didn’t some blue light blow up our base in the desert?


Jack: Yeah, but that was a result of chemicals.


Max: Chemicals? Really?


Jack: You didn’t get my debriefing while you were in the Legion?


Max: I didn’t think I needed to. Why? What’d you say?


Derek: That the crazy lightshow was caused by him mixing chemicals in a desperate attempt to escape.


Austin: I remember seeing that light. Scared the hell out of Syrus. It’s the reason he let us go, actually, otherwise he was ready to kill us.


Max: Well, there were four of you at the base. Who else was there?


Kyle: I was, but, uh, I was unconscious.


Chris: So was I.


Jack: And so was Lindsey.


Derek: You sure about that?


Jack: Yes.


Austin: Hey! I’ve got it! Glitch, you’ve got our memories from that time, don’t you?


Glitch: I should, yes.


Austin: Maybe you can confirm what happened?


Glitch: I’ll give it a try. (Glitch holds his hand up to his right ear as he processes the data). Okay, I see you guys running, running, running, and I see the blue light from three angles, but none of them show where it’s coming from.


Chris: Can you look at individual memories?


Glitch: Sure. (Moments pass). Oh, oh wow.


Derek: What is it?


Glitch: Everyone at the base has their eyes closed, so the memories are black with just a bunch of noise. Except for yours. (Points at Chris).

Chris: Mine?


Glitch: Yeah. Your memory is just super screwed up. I have no clue what I’m looking at.


Jack: He had just been implanted with the Locus Virus, so yeah, he would have been pretty screwed up.


Joshua: (Just sitting back, listening). Hm, this is so fascinating.


-Everyone turns to him.

Chris: Why?


Joshua: No reason. I’m just enjoying everyone talk.


Austin: (Getting up and stretching). So we don’t know what the red light is, and Max doesn’t know either, so what do we do next?


Jack: I want to see this thing for myself.


Derek: Not happening. The light’s already gone.


Jack: But you at least know where it was coming from, right?


Derek: Nope.


Austin: South? Only thing from the south I know of is, well, was the Regime’s base. That and the Forest Temple.


Max: Wait, what Forest Temple?


Austin: You know, the one in the forest. It was like, what, hundred miles from your base?


Max: We didn’t know about anything like that. What did it look like?


Austin: This thing was huge. Looked like a structure made thousands of years ago. I mean even longer than that. The rock was pretty eroded, but you could see hieroglyphs all over the walls. Damnedest thing.


Chris: That’s right, you told me about that place. It’s where you got the spiritual stones, right?


Austin: Yup.


Max: (Entirely fascinated). Can you point this place out on a map?


Austin: Maybe? What does it matter? You really want to do spelunking at this hour?


Chris: Glitch, can you access Austin’s memories?


Glitch: Sure. (Focuses again while he processes the data). Yup, this one’s totally clean.


Max: Robot, patch that through to the TV screen.


Glitch: Yeah, sure.


-Glitch slowly walks over to the large TV in the middle of the room and hooks himself up to the AV ports.

-The memory appears on screen as if it were coming through Austin’s eyes. He’s looking back and forth between Clinton, Willy, Scott, and Leena.

Austin’s Voice: You guys sure you don’t want to keep exploring?


Leena: Positive.


Austin: (Watching his own memory, blushing). This is so trippy.


Austin’s Voice: Aw c’mon! When are we ever coming back here, huh?


Scott: Hey, we got some fancy rocks out of the deal. (Holding up the yellow stone). How much you think I can pawn this sucker for?


Austin’s Voice: No pawning the rocks!


Clinton: We should get going.


Austin’s Voice: Fine, fine. Everyone wave bye bye to the Forest Temple.


Everyone: (Mockingly). Bye bye.


-Austin’s POV looks up at the temple, getting it in full view.

Max: Wait, stop. Freeze the image.


-Glitch freezes the image on the Forest Temple. Max stands up, getting frantic.

Max: That’s it. That’s the shrine.


Austin: Shrine?


Max: (Extremely excited). You thought it was a temple? He thought it was a temple. I can’t believe it. I don’t even know what to say about this. Robot, what are those coordinates?


Glitch: Jack?


Jack: Shut off the image. You. (Points at Max). What is that temple, really?


Max: You don’t know?


Austin: It’s just a place we found some special stones.


Max: But not the special stone.


-Everyone seems to piece it together.

Kyle: Okay, I’m lost. Someone want to fill me in?


Jack: That’s where…?


Max: That’s where the Eclipse Star’s default resting place is.


Kyle: Oh. Well snaps.


Derek: That’s it? So what? The Eclipse Star’s gone anyway. Chris threw it out the window when your guys tried raiding the museum. It flew out into the sky and disappeared.


Jack: (Sighing). That would mean it would revert to its default location, correct?


Max: Exactly. The Regime’s been looking for this ever since the Eclipse Star got lost again. The archeologist who found it died shortly after returning.


Kyle: Curse?


Max: No, hung himself.


Kyle: Yikes.


Chris: Glitch, if you had this memory, why didn’t the Regime know about it?


Glitch: Charles was the only one that looked over our memories. He reported only what seemed relevant. He must not have known what that place was. I certainly wasn’t programmed to know.


Joshua: This is most fascinating indeed.


Derek: Okay, then that’s where the Eclipse Star is. No problem. We head over there and go bring it back. Simple as that.


Austin: I suppose it really would be that simple. What do you think Chris? (Looks over. Chris is standing still, clearly thinking). Chris?


-We zoom into Chris’ memory. He’s thinking back to seeing the red light, then the second explosion (Octavious’ blast). The image of Syrus getting hurled by the blast flashes across his head. He gasps.


Chris: Oh shit.


Derek: What?


Chris: The other explosion we felt.


Derek: What about it?


Chris: I just saw what it was.


Derek: How did you-?


Chris: (Pacing, panicked). Don’t-don’t ask me. I just know. It was Octavious. He hit Syrus with a massive energy blast that threw him south.


Derek: So he’s dead. That’s good news.


Chris: No he’s not. He’s fine.


Derek: Again, how do you-


Chris: Can’t explain. Oh God. Oh God oh God oh God. Syrus knows where it is, too. He went to the red light; he had to. Shit. SHIT! If he gets that…shit!


Jack: Then we need to go. Now. Glitch, go wake everyone up and tell them to meet downstairs ASAP.


Glitch: Right. (Runs upstairs).


Derek: Still, I don’t see the big deal. So Syrus gets the Eclipse Star; what’s he gonna do with it, huh?


Max: Hah, you really have no clue what that thing does, do you?


Derek: I know it’ll give him a power boost, but I’ve fought him multiple times and I know, he’s not that tough.


Chris: No, you’re wrong. You even understand how much he’s withheld? And add on whatever the Eclipse Star can add…I don’t want to think about that.


Max: Your friend’s right. If Syrus gets a hold of that stone, it’s all over for you and this little crusade of yours.


-Hundreds of miles to the south…


-The Forest Temple, now known to hold the Eclipse Star, stands quietly as the sun slowly comes up. Suddenly, the sounds of footsteps begin to pat through the brush. Dozens of figures step through the clearing.


Syrus: I need to get to the bottom-most chamber of that shrine. You’re not to touch anything unless otherwise advised. Am I clear?


-Around fifty soldiers salute to Syrus and nod.


Soldiers: Yes Syrus!


Syrus: Good. Now go find me that gem.


To Be Continued…

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy-One

November 24, 2010 at 1:04 am (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 71

“Dishonorable Discharge”

Recap: Previously on Eclipse Star, the Demon Regime sent an army of Hex-Duo robots to attack Trillium City, ultimately getting shut down by Joshua’s Teens (team-name pending). But that wasn’t all, as the Octa-Rangers were thrown into the fray as well, though they, too, were defeated. In the battle, Maximilian, Octavious’ son, was taken captive and brought to the Northern Lodge. Chris and Derek snatched his teleportation belt and made for the city one last time to put things to rest. They hit the teleport button and disappeared, but where did they end up? Those answers and more, today, on Eclipse Star!

-Chris and Derek reappear in an open chamber of what appears to be a sewage system. They take a second to recalibrate and then look around.

Derek: Damn, your head spinning, too?


Chris: (Looking noticeably sick). Way more than you know.


Derek: (Coughs and shakes his head, reorienting himself). Okay, I’m fine now. (Looks around). Sewer system?


Chris: (Propping himself against the brink wall). That’s what it looks like anyway.


Derek: Well, we did say it’d probably send us underground. Funny thing is, sewer systems like this don’t really exist.


Chris: What?


Derek: It’s fantasy. Sewer systems are generally no larger than a few feet. One sewer worker can barely fit through pipes to perform maintenance, but open catacombs like this don’t exist in things other than movies or comic books.


Chris: I swear I saw a documentary about New York where they showed wide-open sewers.


Derek: Look, we can debate the existence of a fictional city like New York again, or we can get on with this.


Chris: Agreed.


-Chris and Derek begin walking down the open catacombs of the strange sewer system, quietly stepping, only the slightest sound of their feet pattering on the ground echoing around.

Chris: So how long do we want to walk until we-


Derek: (Holds his hand up). Shh. (Pause). You hear that?


-Chris listens intently with Derek, neither of them breathing.

-A few yards down around the bend the sounds of two more footsteps can be heard, along with casual conversation.

Ranger Sampi: (Rounds the corner with Ranger Qoppa, both wearing their full uniforms while carrying new helmets). So he’s like, “Look, you wanna put on spandex and fight teenagers, go for it, but you’re killing your mother,” and I’m all, “No way man, you’re not my real father.”


Ranger Qoppa: Strange. My dad was totally supportive. He even picked out my suit’s color.


-Chris and Derek duck into a side drainage pipe before the two Octa-Rangers can see them. They walk past the hidden pair, still chattering away.

Qoppa: I mean, salmon’s cool and all, but I think it sort of undermines my intelligence.


Sampi: Nah, you’re just over-thinking things.


-Chris and Derek slowly crawl out of the duct and step lightly behind the two.

-The four round another corner, leaving the scene and casting only a shadow.


-Two silhouettes slump out of frame as another two drag something out of sight.

-Quick shuffling noises can be heard as two shadows reemerge once more.

-Chris and Derek round the corner again, now wearing the outfits of the unconscious rangers.

Chris: (Slipping the gloves on his hands. He’s wearing the pink uniform). Well that was simple enough.


Derek: (Wearing the blue, sifting around his chest plate). These must be the new armor upgrades they were talking about.


Chris: Don’t really feel like much.


Derek: I don’t think they’re on right now.


Chris: And the belts are missing. (Clips Max’s belt around his waist). Anything happens, get back to me and we port out of here.


Derek: That thing goes both ways?


Chris: (Shrugs). I just naturally assumed.


Derek: Glad to know our escape plan is a hunch.


-Chris starts looking himself up and down.

Derek: What the hell are you doing?


Chris: I just noticed how slimming this material is.


Derek: Christ, you’re kidding, right?


Chris: I mean, look, my hips are totally concealed.


Derek: Pff, fag.


Chris: Just put on your damned helmet.


Derek: Least I picked the blue outfit. (Puts his helmet on as Chris does the same).

Chris: Can you hear me through this thing?


Derek: Yeah, just fine.


Chris: Good. Let’s make this quick then. We get in, we find some way to bring this structure down, then we leave.


Derek: Split up?


Chris: Nah. Let’s play this close.


Derek: Gotcha.


-Chris and Derek walk off to search further down the sewers.

-Meanwhile, back in the Northern Lodge’s couch room, Austin and Kyle are slumped in front of a glowing fireplace.

Kyle: Okay, how about this: “Hey Chris, you know that girl Rachel you knew? What’s up with her?”


Austin: It’s direct, and I like that, but it’s also insensitive, which I’m against.


Kyle: How about, “Chris, I ever tell you about my grandfather and how he died of cancer?”


Austin: What’s the context?


Kyle: Context of what?


Austin: Of the telling.


Kyle: Breakfast, probably.


Austin: Did you grandfather really die of cancer?


Kyle: He died of something, might as well have been cancer.


Austin: Where you close?


Kyle: To my grandfather?


Austin: Yeah.


Kyle: Which one?


Austin: The one who died of possibly cancer.


Kyle: Oh, not really.


Austin: Hmm, no go. Chris will totally pick up on that.


Kyle: Your turn then.


Austin: (Sits up a bit). “Chris, your grandma told us a story about a girl you once knew named Rachel. How is she?” (Instantly stops). No, that’s horrible.


Kyle: I think you had something there for a while, until you added that stupid part at the end.


Austin: You think?


Joshua: (Walks in). Ooh, let me try: “Chris, are you aware that you have unresolved issues with death as brought upon by a childhood friend’s terminal illness?”


Kyle: That could work.


Austin: The whole situation sucks at any rate. I mean, who lets a little girl die of cancer anyway?


Joshua: (Sits down). We slamming God for that one?


Austin: Unless someone else could have cured the little girl.


Joshua: You going to keep repeating the fact that she was a little girl?


Austin: A little girl.


Joshua: How do you know God didn’t help her?


Kyle: I know this one, don’t tell me.


Austin: Because then we’d have another teammate named Rachel following Chris around wherever he went.


Joshua: Would anything have been accomplished the past few months if Rachel were still alive?


Kyle: I bet you if they were together, Chris wouldn’t have acted like a dimwit and bumped the Eclipse Star off that pedestal.


Austin: And that justifies letting a little girl die?


Joshua: Ah-ah, you’re just looking at it from the perspective of someone looking backward. It’s like playing armchair coach at a football game.


Kyle: You lost me.


Joshua: Anyone can tell you what play a team should have run after the play is already run. Don’t you think a smart coach would have just told his team to score a touchdown?


Austin: We’re not talking football; we’re talking about-


Austin and Joshua: A little girl.


Joshua: Yes, I know. Do you think that little girl is currently suffering from cancer?


Kyle: She died, right? I’m not missing something here?


Austin: No, technically she’s not suffering anymore, but I don’t see why she should have die in order to be cured.


Joshua: So you’d rather her body be cured and her soul turn black and die?


Austin: She should get to have her cake and eat it too.


Joshua: First, you’re getting that backwards; It’s “to eat your cake and have it too” since having a cake and eating it doesn’t mean much but eating a cake and getting to somehow keep it is a magical entitlement wish.


Kyle: That does make more sense…


Joshua: Secondly, this life isn’t the important one.


Austin: Little girl, dead.


Joshua: I’m not saying God wants to see little girls die. That’s awful. But that same little girl now gets to spend the rest of eternity sitting beside Him and enjoying His majesty? How can you not cheer for that?


Austin: So it’s a case of the ends justify the means?


Joshua: You should be aware, the guy who wrote that book did so as a satire. You know that, right?


Austin: I know that, uh, no, I didn’t pay much attention when we read that book.


Kyle: Was Italy a real place?


Joshua: That’s where Italian comes from, yes.


Kyle: Oh. (Beat). What’s Italian?


Joshua: So who talks to Chris?


-The three begin hemming and hawing again thinking of how best to broach the subject.

-Back in the subterranean lair, Chris and Derek find themselves walking into a much larger, vastly open main chamber with multiple buildings stretched out as far as they can go.

Chris: Wow, I didn’t expect to see this here.


Derek: You certain that belt was a short-range thing?


Chris: No clue.


Ranger Stigma: Hey! There you guys are! Why’d you turn off your communicators?


-Chris and Derek stop for a moment as they look back and forth between each other, silently. Finally, Chris looks over at Stigma and shrugs.


Stigma: Yeah, I’m not really surprised. C’mon, Octavious wants us for another debriefing.


Chris: Last one wasn’t brief enough?


-Chris slaps his gloves over the mouth of his helmet as Derek stares him down.


Stigma: Heh, that was almost clever for you. Then again you do wear pink. Now get your asses in there.


-Chris and Derek nod as they follow Stigma into one of the larger buildings.


-Once inside, they begin passing armed Demon Regime soldiers as they go about their business.


-Finally they enter a room where Octavious is pacing back and forth.


Octavious: ‘Bout damned time!


Stigma: Sorry sir, we’re a little on edge right now.


Octavious: Why are you two wearing your helmets?


Chris: (Quietly imitating Qoppa’s voice). Uh, his face got smashed pretty badly during the fight.


Derek: (Not disguising his voice at all). Yeah, and he’s just fuck-ugly.


Octavious: (Grinning). Ahaha. Okay, fine, keep your silly space helmets on. You can clearly still hear me talking through those, and I don’t particularly care about hearing you speak, so shut up and listen. Wait, where’s Syrus?


Stigma: He’s in his room.


Octavious: You, the fuck-ugly ranger.


-Chris cautiously points at himself.


Octavious: Yeah, you, go fetch him.


-Chris slowly salutes and turns around. He stops for a second and turns back toward Octavious.


Chris: Uh, where…?


Octavious: Oh, uh, building D, room 12.


-Chris salutes again and leaves the room.


Octavious: Whatever. Anyway, where was I?


Stigma: I assume this is about Max again?


Octavious: Shit! Yes! Who let him get kidnapped?!


Derek: I’m guessing Syrus.


Octavious: Right! Jeez, you’re really on today. The hell is your name again?


Derek: Fuck if I know.


Stigma: That’s Ranger Sampi, and he’d do well to remember to whom he speaks.


Octavious: Yeah yeah, whose idea was it to name you guys after stupid obsolete letters? (Waves his hand in frustration as Stigma begins speaking). Fine, doesn’t matter, more important things. We need my son back. Mind you, not for personal reasons, but it looks bad for a nation’s leader to lose his son in a failed attempted-conquest.


Stigma: How do you propose we get him back?


Octavious: Didn’t I teach you rangers some failsafe maneuver?


Stigma: Formation Omega-Omega 2. It’s rather deadly.


Octavious: Right, so how again do you pull it off?


Stigma: Uh, I actually don’t know. San, you remember?


Ranger San: Oh, uh, yes. Ranger Sho, could you assist me?


Ranger Sho: No way man, I ain’t messing with this failed move.


San: Okay, Sampi, could you please?


Derek: Yeah why not.


-Derek and Ranger San step forward, standing a few feet apart. Derek watches San as he starts moving in some elaborate dance formation until finally stopping.


Derek: Jeez, are you serious? That’s super gay.


Octavious: I agree. What the hell is that?


San: Formation Omega-Omega…2?


Octavious: Did Syrus teach you that one?


San: Uh, you…did?


Octavious: You, back of the room.


-San cringes and slinks to the edge of the room.


Octavious: I assume the teleportation belts worked?


Stigma: Yes, perfectly.


Octavious: Well that’s good news. At least Charles didn’t screw that part up.


Sho: Then Max must still have his belt on. We could get Charles to reverse the signal and suck him back here.


Octavious: Now that sounds like a plan that could work. None of this “Omega-Omega” crap.


San: (Raises his hand). “Omega-Omega 2.” The first one didn’t work and…uh…I’ll shut up now.


Octavious: Stigma, get Charles up on the intercom. Might as well kill some time before Syrus gets here.


-Chris, still dressed as Qoppa, walks slowly out of the main building and looks around.


Chris: Great, “building D” means nothing to me. And why the hell am I going along with this anyway? Oh well. (Taps a nearby guard). Hey, which building’s D?


Regime Solider: Building D? Third on the right.


Chris: Thanks. (Starts to walk away but suddenly stops). Hey, do I outrank you?


Regime Solider: Technically, yes, in this division I think so.


Chris: Oh. Okay, just curious. (Starts to walk away but stops again). Which division is this again?


Regime Soldier: Zanrethan Division Alpha. That’s…that’s why we’re stationed in Zanretha.


Chris: Well duh, I knew that. Carry on.


Regime Soldier: (Quietly). Jeez, that pink ranger’s an idiot.


-Chris walks off toward building D, shaking his head.


Chris: Why am I talking so much? And why haven’t Derek or I been caught yet? They’re almost making this too simple.


-Chris walks through the doors of building D and watches the room numbers as he passes them


Chris: 9…10…11… (The hallway stops). And no 12, of course. (Looks all throughout the hall). If this were anyone but Syrus I’d assume he’d have his room protected with some ridiculous passcode like “Alpha-Beta-Theta.” (Waits. Nothing happens). See, my suspicious are confirmed.


-Chris keeps walking, finding room 13 instead.


Chris: Well, this is as good as any.


-He pushes the doors open. The lights are off. A brief feel around the wall yields the light switch.


-Once illuminated, the room appears to be filled with video screens left and right with the largest monitor sitting in the center. Every screen clicks on and showcases footage of the kids fighting at various times with the center screen displaying Chris’ fight with Hex-Duo 6.


Chris: Wow. This is almost sick…


-Chris becomes entranced just watching the center replay over and over.


Syrus: Is there something you need in here?


-Chris whips around, somewhat surprised to hear Syrus’ voice without warning.


Chris: Oh, Syrus, there you are. Octavious wants you for some meeting.


Syrus: He wouldn’t if his son wasn’t a fool. (Stops). Wait. Did you call me “Syrus?”


Chris: That’s…that’s your name, right?


Syrus: Yes. But you didn’t call me “sir.”


Chris: Oh. You outrank me then?


Syrus: Yes, but I hate being called “sir.” You’re supposed to be the stupid one…


Chris: Well I can’t be that stupid.


-A moment passes as Syrus eyes Chris up and down.


Syrus: Take off your helmet.


Chris: Why?


Syrus: Because I’m your commanding officer and I order you to do so.


Chris: I’d rather not.


Syrus: Can’t you feel it?


Chris: Feel what?


Syrus: That humming?


Chris: No, I don’t.


Syrus: The last time I felt this humming was in the failed museum raid.


-Chris begins stepping toward the door.


Chris: Octavious wants us-


Syrus: How stupid do I look?


-Syrus leaps at Chris, throwing a strong punch.


-Chris ducks as Syrus takes a chunk out of the wall.


-Chris throws his hands up and hits Syrus with a quick energy blast to the chest.


-Syrus is thrown through to the next floor as Chris begins running.


-The top floor is ripped up in a wave chasing Chris with Syrus crashing down in front of him.


-Syrus reaches out and grabs Chris by the throat, pulling off his helmet.


Syrus: (Visibly happy). I knew it. (Laughing). I knew it! This is just so…exciting.


-Back in Octavious’ briefing room.


Charles: (On screen). I suppose it’d be no problem to zero in on Max’s signal and force him to teleport back. You want him in your briefing room?


Octavious: Yes.


Charles: Alright, give me a second to pinpoint him…there. Right now?


Octavious: Oh yes.


Charles: Then here we go.


-Charles presses a few buttons and punches in the warp code.


Syrus: Do you realize how long I’ve been waiting for this?


Chris: I don’t really care.



-Chris and Syrus suddenly appear in Octavious’ briefing room. Everyone looks around confused.


Octavious: This isn’t Max. This is just Syrus and the pink ranger.


Derek: (Notices Chris’ helmet missing). Uh-oh.


Syrus: What did you-?


-Chris grabs Syrus’ hand with one hand and pounds Syrus in the head with the other, knocking him into Octavious.


Chris: Derek, we’ve gotta bail!


Derek: I figured.


-Chris charges an energy blast in his hands and fires it into the room as he dives out with Derek doing the same.



-Syrus and Octavious get up from the smoke, shoving each other away. The room is totaled.


Octavious: What just happened?!


Syrus: Don’t pay it any mind. I’ll take care of things.


-Syrus vwings away as the other three Octa-Rangers sit coughing.


Derek: We still need to take this place out.


Chris: Yeah. (He grabs the Octa-Rangers emblem on his chest plate and twists it, powering his suit on). We’ll need the extra oomph here.


Derek: (Powers his suit on as well). I say we do what we did to the warehouse.


Chris: This place looks too stable for that. We need a different plan.


-Syrus erupts from the building, flying directly toward Chris with his arm extended.


Syrus: You can’t run from this!


Chris: Crap!


-Right as Syrus is about to grab Chris, Derek grabs Syrus’ hand and swings him into the ground.


Derek: Well well well, look who showed up again.


-Derek nods at Chris and Chris keeps running.


-Syrus looks up, noticeably bothered.


Syrus: No, I want this now!


Derek: You’ve still got a rematch with me buddy boy.


-Derek clenches up with Syrus, holding his ground thanks to the suit’s added power.


-Chris keeps running, ducking into building D.


-Soldiers look at him, suddenly realizing something very wrong is happening.


-He leaps at them, taking out foes left and right in a flash. Guns begin firing after half the troops are unconscious, but it’s too late for them as Chris has become a blur, skimming across the room.


-He explodes through the walls, skidding to a halt in front of a series of mail tubes.


Chris: Now there’s an idea….


-Chris starts charging Pulse energy in his hand. He opens the mail tube and begins placing energy balls inside as they get sucked through the system.




Chris: This had better work…


-Back outside, Derek and Syrus are exchanging blows.


Syrus: Why are you wasting my time?!


Derek: Wasting? You’re not exactly winning at the moment.


-Syrus catches Derek under the chin with a palm strike, sending him toppling over.


-Syrus dives on his chest and plunges his fist into the armored chest plate, tearing out a chunk of circuitry and wires, shutting the suit down.


Derek: The hell?!


-Derek cups his hands together and jams them into Syrus’ chest, unloading everything he can charge in an instant.



-Syrus is rocketed up into the ceiling of the underground chamber.


Syrus: (Grabbing hold of some hanging ladders to regain his stability). I should have expected that. I must be getting too excited.



-The buildings all around begins exploding, completed eradicated as energy balls suddenly serge through them.


-Syrus shields his face, looking down to spy Chris coming from building D as it, too, explodes.


Syrus: There.


-Syrus turns upside-down and kicks off from the roof at Chris.


-Chris dives at Derek, hand outstretched.


-Derek throws his hand out as Chris presses the button on his belt.



-Syrus slams down into the concrete where Chris and Derek once stood. He stands up from his crater, no dead children under his fist.


Octavious: (Coughing). Syrus! Hah! Where’d they go?!


Syrus: They’re gone.


Octavious: So go after them!


Syrus: I don’t know where they went.


Octavious: You’re kidding me!


Syrus: We need to get everyone out of here before the ceiling caves in.


Octavious: Dammit!


-Somewhere over the city…



Derek: Holy jeez! Hahaha! I can’t believe that worked!


Chris: (Trying to catch his breath). Oh man, I didn’t think it would. (Takes off Max’s belt and crushes it in his hand).


Derek: Why’d you do that?


Chris: It sucked me back once; I don’t want it happening again.


Derek: Okay, that makes some sense.


-Chris grabs the emblem of his chest piece and tears it off, shutting the armor off.


Derek: Okay, now explain why you did that.


Chris: I don’t know what these suits do, but it didn’t feel like something that should be constantly pulsing through our body.


Derek: You kidding me? All they were pulsing was extra power. We coulda used that!


Chris: Look, you want shortcuts, fine, but no good will come from that.


Derek: This from Mr. Three Days?


Chris: Your point?


Derek: Whatever, your dad’s dead.


Chris: Ooh, and where’s your dad?


-Awkward pause.


Chris: Sorry, that was uncalled for.


Derek: Just shut up. We annihilated the Regime’s base, so let’s go.


-A strange twinge hits Chris and Derek.


Chris: You feel that?


Derek: Yeah. The hell is it?


Chris: I don’t know.


-They look off toward the South as the city beneath them rumbles very faintly.


-While they can’t hear it, they see a red light rip the morning sky wide open off in the horizon.


Chris: What is that?


Derek: It looks just like that light I saw in the desert, except this one’s red, not blue.


Chris: You saw a light in the desert?


-The light fades.


Derek: C’mon, this isn’t our concern.


Chris: You kidding me?


Derek: Do you really want to go deal with that right now?


Chris: No.


-The two point themselves North and begin flying back to the lodge.


-Meanwhile, emerging from the Regime’s bunker base…


Octavious: That’s it, we’re ruined.


Stigma: Sir, we can rebuild, we can-


Octavious: No, we’re done here. Zanretha isn’t right for the taking anymore. We’ll deal with things elsewhere. (Notices Syrus staring off to the south). And just what the hell are you doing?


Syrus: There was a red light just now.


Octavious: Oh wow, a red light. Do I look like I give a damn?


Syrus: Something isn’t right.


Octavious: You know what? I know exactly what isn’t right. In fact, I’m looking right at it.


Syrus: (Looks over, somewhat confused). I don’t-


Octavious: You know how many times you’ve failed me now?.


Syrus: I’ve failed you? (Laughs to himself). You must be joking.


Octavious: No, as far as I’m concerned, the only reason none of our recent plans have succeeded is because you’ve managed to strew them up.


Syrus: (Irritated). Choose your words carefully…


Octavious: Who just let a couple of fucking children blow up our last refuge? Who stood idly by as my men and my robots attacked the city? Who fought his own men, watched as a multi-billion piece of machinery was destroyed, and lost a tournament to a 16-year-old boy?


Syrus: You don’t know what you’re talking about.


Octavious: Then why am I not holding the Eclipse Star in my hand right now? Tell me, whom did I put in charge of a simple museum heist?


Syrus: (Gritting his teeth). All of those plans were ill advised to begin with.


Octavious: Face it; you’re no good to me anymore.


Syrus: You know whom I serve.


Octavious: Yeah, and so do I, but you go through me to get to her, and my orders haven’t been to fuck up every step of the way!


Syrus: I wouldn’t-


Octavious: Wouldn’t what? Challenge you? The fuck are you? A solider, in my army! You don’t think I can’t kill you if I decide?!


Syrus: (His body is beginning to shake with rage). I’d relish the attempt.


Octavious: Then come at me, or are you still too brainwashed by some fucking dead carpenter?


-Syrus leaps at Octavious in a blind madness.



-Octavious puts an arm out and detonates a ridiculous amount of energy all at once.


-Syrus takes all of this without being able to cover himself. He’s thrown miles and miles through debris, disappearing from sight.


-Octavious lets out a sigh and holds his hand out to Stigma.


Octavious: Fucking peasant. Made me dirty my hands. (Stigma pulls out a cloth and begins cleaning Octavious’ hand). Good boy. Now round up every last solider you can and tell them to pull out of Zanretha. We have some rebuilding to handle.


Stigma: Yes sir.


-Chris and Derek look back after feeling Octavious’ blast.


Chris: That one was a lot closer.


Derek: And a lot more powerful. (They look at each other silently for a moment). Let’s get the hell out of here.


Chris: Right.


To Be Continued…

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Seventy

October 20, 2010 at 7:19 pm (Eclipse Star: Genesis) ()

Eclipse Star: Chapter 70

“Deep Breaths”

Recap: When we last left off, the Hex-Duo army was finally put down for good. All Charles Robotics facilities in Trillium City were wiped out and every robot was turned to scrap. Even the Octa-Rangers and their Super Octa-Zord didn’t stand a chance. Now the group flies back to the Northern Lodge to meet up with Iess and his group, though they’re two members larger: Chris’ grandmother and Octavious’ son, Maximilian!

-The group lands outside the Northern Lodge, setting Chris’ grandma down but keeping a firm grip on Maximilian.

-Jack greets them, walking out the front door on his own.

Jack: Mission accomplished, eh?

-Lindsey’s eyes grow huge as she realizes Jack is walking again.

Lindsey: Jack! Holy cow, you’re walking! (She dives at him and gives him a big hug). When did this happen?

Jack: A few hours ago. Joshua helped.

Austin: Hey, great to have you back on your feet.

Joshua: (In Jack’s earbud). Glad to hear you finally trust me!

Jack: (Surprised, holding his ear). What the heck? How are you…?

Joshua: Hey, you made these earbud things sound so cool, so I made one for myself. Sounds like it works great!

Jack: Yeah well, the others are back.

Joshua: Oh good! I’ll be out right- (Walks out the front door). Now. (Opens his arms wide). Welcome back! How did the mission go?

Kyle: If I may speak for everyone, and I will, I’d say this was a smashing success.

Chris: We even managed to nab Max, too.

Joshua: Max? New team member?

Leena: No, we don’t need any more of those.

Jack: Max is Octavious’ son. (Smiles). This is great. Now we have leverage.

Chris: Should we wake him up?

Joshua: Bring him into the couch room.

-Everyone follows Joshua as he leads them into the main sitting room with all the comfy couches.

Joshua: Go ahead and put him there on the blue couch. And who broke his arms?

Lindsey: (Sheepishly raises her hand). Uh, that’d be me.

Jack: (Whispers). Nice.

Lindsey: (Whispers back, giggling). Thanks, those elbow blades you gave me really helped.

Jack: Glad to hear it.

Joshua: First then, we fix those arms. (Joshua pulls out a first-aid kit and bandages Max’s arms, then moves his hands over the wounds while humming). Okay, now we can wake him up.

Derek: Wait. (Walks up to Max and grabs his belt, pulling it off). There, now he’s fine.

Danny: Uh, should we all start taking parts of his clothing off?

Derek: No you moron! What do I look like? Some sort of gay dude?

Joshua: Hush Derek.

Austin: Danny, Max has one of those belts that can teleport him somewhere. The other Octa-Rangers had those, remember?

Danny: Oh yeah!

Jack: So let’s wake him up. Who’s doing the honors?

Scott: (Walks up to Max, pulls some smelling salts from his pocket, and waves them under Max’s nose). Wakey-wakey, eggs and bakey.

Max: (Slowly comes to). Wha…? (Realizes where he is). Whoa! How did I get here?!

Leena: Where did you get smelling salts…?

Scott: I’ve found it’s always a smart idea to keep something like that around, knowing my habits and all.

Jack: (Sits himself down in front of Max). Do you recognize my face? Do you remember me from the Legion?

Max: (Squints). …Yes, Jack Voss. (Looks around). And the other kids famous for ruining my father’s plans. I assume this means I’m your captive?

Chris: It would sure seem that way.

Max: Oh, and then it was you that beat me, again?

Chris: Nope, it was her, again. (Nods toward Lindsey).

Lindsey: (Waves). Hey Maxie.

Max: Ugh…my father will never let me live this down…

Jack: You’ve got bigger problems to worry about. We need to know a few things, the first concerning the Demon Regime’s next plans.

Max: May I have a glass of water.

Jack: (Acting tough). You haven’t earned the right to have water.

Kevin: I’ll go get him some water.

Jack: Hey, no, you’re undermining my interrogation here!

Willy: Jack, he’s completely docile. I think some water is fine.

Max: I’m severely outnumbered, I don’t know where I am, and at the moment I’d rather not see my father, so I’m your prisoner as much as you’d like me to be. Tie my hands if you don’t believe me.

Barbara: He seems like a pretty nice boy. You should ask him to join your little club!

All: (Annoyed). No.

Kevin: (Hands Max a glass of water). Here you go.

Max: Thank you. (Drinks). So, you wanted to know what the Regime does next?

Jack: Yes.

Max: No idea. That’s father’s business, not mine.

Jack: Where is the Regime stationed in Trillium City?

Max: What makes you think we’re stationed there?

Jack: Your attack came from within the city and the others escaped via those teleporter belts, which couldn’t have let you travel very far.

Max: So you know about the teleporter belts? I mean specifics and the like?

Jack: A friend of mine gave me some prototypes to play with about a year ago. The tech wasn’t all there, but the application showed that the best hope was short-range teleportation. Long-range wasn’t possible.

Max: True. There’s a base in Trillium, just like there’s a Legion base in Brooksboro.

Jack: How much do you know about that?

Max: I was in charge of the Legion for a brief few days; I know about the fallback plans. (Takes another drink of water). And no, your next question regards my level of control over the Legion and the answer is no, I’m completely disconnected. The Oca-Ranger stunt a few months ago insured I was shamed away from that position, thankfully.

Derek: Wait, “thankfully?” If I were in charge, I wouldn’t be so happy to let it go.

Max: Yes well, I assume you’d be in charge for legitimate reasons, right? See how loyal everyone acts when you gain a leadership position by happenstance.

Jack: Family-related conspiracy isn’t what I’d consider happenstance.

Max: It is if you’re not the one planning it.

Kyle: This is getting boring. I’m getting a sandwich. Anyone else want a sandwich?

Max: Look, use me as your bargaining chip or whatever, but I’m in no hurry to leave, so tie me up and plan this rationally. You have my father in the perfect position for your side, so don’t waste it.

-At this moment, the sound of four new party members landing just outside can be heard.

Chris: That sounds like Iess and his group.

Joshua: I’d better go speak with them. Glitch?

Glitch: Yes Josh?

Joshua: Could you take our new guest up to one of the rooms on the top floor?

Glitch: Sure thing.

-Joshua leaves the room. Glitch grabs Max and takes him upstairs. Jack, Chris, and Derek follow.

Lindsey: I think I’ll join them up there. You coming?

Leena: Pass. I’d rather not be around all your various crushes at the same time.

Lindsey: What? I’m only dating Jack.

Leena: And toying with Chris and now you’re fawning over Max. Whatever.

Lindsey: Yeah, whatever indeed. (She walks upstairs).

Leena: You forgot your bladey things!

Lindsey: So go sharpen them or something! (Gone).

Leena: Oh she’s funny.

Chris: (Walking down one of the upstairs hallways with Derek). Hey Derek, you feel like going on a totally reckless mission, just the two of us?

Derek: (Sees Chris holding up Max’s teleportation belt and smiles). Progressive action. You’d think you were a whole new character.

Chris: Sooner we get this whole larger thing over with, the sooner we can focus on finding your dad.

Derek: Deal.

-Chris and Derek nod to Glitch as they run into a side room and leap out the window, taking off at full speed to the city once more.

Lindsey: (Joining Jack and Glitch in Max’s new room). Hey, where’d Double Dragon just fly off to?

Max: (Settling in). Double Dragon?

Lindsey: Oh right, a girl can’t make geeky references? Also, shut up.

Jack: They’re taking care of any loose ends from the Hex-Duo fallout, which is surprising. Chris isn’t usually the assertive one, but that’s what I like to see.

Lindsey: Feeling jealous?

Jack: Right now I’m just happy to walk again. (Smiles). Hey, come outside with me.

-Lindsey smiles and follows Jack as they hop out Max’s window.

Max: Does anyone around here use stairs and doors or are you all a bunch of savages?

Glitch: (Shrugs). Savages, mostly.

-Jack grabs Lindsey’s hand and flies into the woods a bit with her.

Lindsey: So where we going?

Jack: There’s something I want to show you.

Lindsey: It isn’t in your pants is it? Because this isn’t the sexiest way to introduce me to that.

Jack: No, nothing like that. (Thinks). No, nothing like that.

-They land in between some trees a ways from the lodge.

Lindsey: So?

-Jack grabs her and presses his body against hers, throwing her up against the side of a tree as he begins to make out with her. She doesn’t put up any sort of a fight.

-After a few moments of non-cool non-superpowered-action stuff, the two can’t help but smile at each other like idiots.

Lindsey: You should really tell me stuff like that more often.

Jack: Wait, bigger surprise.

-Jack grabs Lindsey’s hand again and places it on his chest.

Lindsey: Uh, I still stand by what I said earlier…

Jack: Shh.

-Jack closes his eyes as he begins breathing heavier. The hairs all over his body prick up as a current of energy rushes to Lindsey, prickling her hairs as well.

-Jack’s chest glows intensely bright, enough so that Lindsey has to shield her eyes with her other hand.

-The ground starts humming from the output of Jack’s Pulse.

Jack: So, what do you think?

Lindsey: Wow, I don’t get it; you haven’t been training for months, so how are you this strong now?

Jack: I’ve been paying attention. What you guys did wasn’t purely physical. I noticed a lot of it was mental and did the exercises myself at night.

Lindsey: This is just…I don’t know.

Jack: You sound disappointed.

Lindsey: No, I’m really not. (Smiles). I just can’t figure you out.

Jack: I’ll try and help more.

-They continue to engage in really boring, high school romancy make out sessions with cooing and ahhing and blah, ugh, forget them, making-out’s gross! More plot!

Barbara: (Back with the plot in the sitting room). What’s all this about toying with Chris?

Austin: It’s a long story.

Barbara: So Chris finally said something to her?

Austin: Not exactly. (Thinks). No wait, I think he did. I forget how it happened. Anyway, things are out in the open but nothing got resolved.

Barbara: That’s a shame; I always thought they’d be cute together. She’s dating this Jack guy?

Danny: Yeah. He’s sort of a jerk.

Barbara: Ah, so that’s why she’s dating him.

Leena: (Slumps down). Pretty much, yeah. (Picks up Lindsey’s elbow blades). Jack even found her some weapon things.

Kyle: Oh yeah! I forgot something! (Runs up to Leena and pulls out some bladed throwing objects). I got these for you yesterday from the same place Chris got those elbow blades for Lindsey.

Leena: Hold on, Chris got Lindsey those stupid things? (Pause). And you’re just now giving me my gift? Gimmie.

Danny: Why didn’t Chris use his sword today?

Austin: What, the Rachel Blade? (Snickers). Probably better that way.

Barbara: The Rachel Blade?

Kevin: Last night a number of us found a cave a few miles north of here. One of the larger rooms was filled with weapons of all sorts, so Chris selected a sword and named it Rachel.

Austin: He seems to love that name.

Willy: Probably just a placeholder for “Lindsey.”

Barbara: No, I don’t think that’s it.

Austin: I know he’s your grandson, but you’ve got to understand, he’s still kind of a goober about Lindsey.

Barbara: Oh I understand that he’s a goober, but this is something else. Has he ever mentioned Rachel before?

Leena: He tries to name things Rachel all the time.

Barbara: No I mean the actual Rachel.

Austin: (Intensely curious). Actual Rachel? No, never.

Barbara: (Sigh). Rachel is a friend of his from childhood.

Danny: Imaginary?

Barbara: No, very real.

Leena: And what, she wasn’t in love with him, either?

Barbara: No, she passed away.

-The room is awkwardly silent.

Barbara: He was around seven when it happened…

-The scene fades to white as Barbara continues talking, flashing back to Chris’ childhood.

Barbara Narration: Rachel was a neighbor girl who lived just down the street. We went to church with her family every Sunday and the two of them would usually play when they got home. They were also very cute together. Chris didn’t really have any other friends at the time. It was hard for him since he liked to stay indoors if he could help it. He just wasn’t the adventurous time back then.

-The scene shows Chris lying on the living room rug playing with action figures as a knock comes at the door. He runs to it.

Chris: Who’s there?

Rachel: (From the other side). It’s me! Chris, come out and play!

-Chris opens the door and reveals a seven-year-old girl about his height with brown hair hanging past her shoulders. She’s dressed in outdoorsy clothes.

Barbara Narration: Rachel was the only one able to get him to do anything. Her parents let her run around all the time and she felt the need to drag Chris around with her to the woods and stuff. It was good for them.

-Rachel leads Chris by the hand into a heavily forested area across a field.

Rachel: C’mon! I wanna show you something!

Chris: What is it?

Rachel: Something cool!

-Rachel stops running and begins coughing.

Chris: Rachel? Rach? What’s wrong?

Rachel: Just a cough. (Stops coughing and smiles again). Now don’t lose me!

-She takes off running, leaving Chris in the dust. After running a ways they come across a church in the middle of nowhere, completely rundown and abandoned.

Chris: (Entirely out of breath). This…this is it?

Rachel: Yeah! Isn’t it cool?!

Chris: It’s just a building.

Rachel: It’s a church! Isn’t it weird that there’s a church in the middle of the woods?

Chris: I guess?

Rachel: What do you think it was for?

Chris: Sunday School?

Rachel: Ew, who would build a church out here for Sunday School?

Chris: Rabbits?

Rachel: Or bandits! OOH! Bandits!

-Rachel takes off running into the church, completely disregarding how dilapidated it is.

Chris: Hey we shouldn’t be here!

Rachel: But I wanna check for bandit gold.

Chris: Bandits don’t go to church though.

Rachel: They go to bandit church. Who else would build a church out here?

-As Rachel starts to look around, she begins coughing quietly again. She takes a few steps forward and trips as a few floorboards give way.

-The sound of hissing instantly begins coming from everywhere as it becomes apparent that Rachel has stepped into a den of snakes.

-She becomes silent as a large snake sits up, ready to strike.


-Chris slams a chunk of wood down on the snake’s head. He grabs Rachel’s hand and runs her out of the church.

Rachel: I don’t think bandits went to church there.

Chris: Why?

Rachel: Because bandits hate snakes.

Chris: Jesus hates snakes, too.

Rachel: Only bad snakes. Those were good snakes.

Chris: How can you tell?

Rachel: Because they let you smash them. Bad snakes bite first.

-The two run back home as the scene fades into the next, showing Chris and Rachel seated next to each other at church.

Barbara Narration: The two of them always sat together during Sunday services, and afterward they’d sit and try to make sense of whatever the pastor said that morning.

Rachel: So do you think Heaven is really that bright and shiny?

Chris: I don’t know why it wouldn’t be. Why would he lie about all that?

Rachel: Well, he’s never seen it.

Chris: I haven’t either, so I don’t know.

Rachel: I think I saw it once. It was really nice. (She starts coughing again).

Chris: Do you think killing that snake is going to keep me from getting into Heaven?

Rachel: No, God knows you did it because you were scared.

Chris: I wasn’t scared!

Rachel: Then why did you kill that snake?

Chris: It was gonna bite you!

Rachel: Maybe. Oh well, God will forgive you. He knows you didn’t mean it.

-Rachel begins coughing again. It sounds worse than the previous times.

Barbara Narration: At one point Chris and I went to church but Rachel wasn’t there. We asked the pastor and he told us her family was in the hospital with her. I took Chris over after the service but when we got there things didn’t look good.

-Barbara walks Chris into a hospital wing to see Rachel. She is hooked up to a number of machines with her mother and father looking distraught.

Barbara Narration: Rachel always suffered from coughs but it just seemed like she had asthma.

Chris: What’s wrong with her?

-Rachel’s mother begins crying. The father holds his wife and turns away.

Doctor: Who are you?

Chris: I’m her friend! Tell me what’s wrong with her!

Doctor: Look, if you’re not family, you need to leave.

Barbara: Tell the boy what’s wrong with his friend. What’s so wrong with that?

-Rachel looks over from the bed and sees Chris. She starts waving at him as she takes off her ventilator.

Rachel: (Extremely weak). Chris…c’mere.

-Chris walks over to Rachel’s side. As the doctor starts to say something, Barbara grabs his shoulder and gives him a dirty look. He shrugs and walks away.

Chris: Why are you in the hospital? Did you go back to see the snakes?

Rachel: No…

Chris: Then what’s wrong?

Rachel: I don’t know… It hurts to breath…

-The scene elapses over time showing Chris coming and going day after day, month after month as Rachel gets progressively worse.

-Things stop for one last scene.

Rachel: Do you think I’m gonna die…?

Chris: No. I’ve been praying for you, so God won’t let you die.

Rachel: You think that’ll work…?

Chris: It should.

Rachel: Then why am I still sick…?

Chris: Because…maybe because I killed that snake. This is all my fault I bet.

Rachel: (She weakly shakes her head). You saved me…

Chris: Then I’ll save you again! (Chris dives onto Rachel’s bed and starts praying over her). If I pray hard enough, it’ll work! God will help! He has to!

-Rachel begins coughing again.

Chris: He wouldn’t just let you die! He can’t! He’s not like that!

Rachel: Do you think Heaven looks really nice…?

Chris: No! I don’t! And you don’t need to see it! (He closes his eyes and keeps praying as tears stream down his face).

Rachel: What if God doesn’t fix me…?

Chris: He always fixes people.

Rachel: What happens if He doesn’t…?

Chris: He will. I know He will. He has to.

Rachel: You can’t help me…

Chris: Yes I can!

Rachel: God isn’t going to help, either…

Chris: He has to! He has to…

Rachel: I can’t see anything anymore…

Chris: What?

Rachel: I…I can’t breathe…

Doctor: (Walks into the room). You need to give her some time to rest.

Chris: She’s going to be okay!

Doctor: Come back tomorrow and you can see her again.

-Rachel’s eyes flitter closed as she struggles to breathe. The doctor takes notice and starts checking her.

Doctor: Rachel, hon, is everything okay?

-She doesn’t respond. Suddenly all her monitors begin going nuts as she begins seizing.

Chris: What’s happening?

Doctor: (He hits a call button next to the bed). Code Blue! I need some help in here!

Chris: What’s happening?!

Doctor: (Trying to help Rachel wake up). You need to get out of here.

Chris: But I can help-

Doctor: No you can’t! Now go wait with your grandma!

-Chris gets shoved out of the room as nurses flood in to help Rachel. He stands right outside as she cotinues convulsing and eventually stops moving altogether.

-After a few minutes of desperately trying to resuscitate her while the monitors blare a flatline tone, the doctor finally stops and checks the clock.

Doctor: Time of death, 3:18 pm.

-Chris stands dumbfounded, looking at his lifeless friend lying there.

-The doctor looks up and realizes Chris is still standing in the doorway. He walks over and tries to pull him away.

-The scene plays in silence as Chris breaks free from the doctor and rushes to Rachel’s side, crying and screaming as he tries to do anything to wake her up.

-The doctor and some nurses restrain Chris and pull him away as the scene fades out.

-The scene fades back in at the Northern Lodge.

Barbara: Rachel died from a terminal form of lung cancer. There was nothing anyone could do.

Austin: I never heard about this…

Barbara: I don’t suppose you would. Chris hasn’t brought it up since he was little.

Kevin: Is that why he stopped coming to church?

Barbara: We had a few shouting arguments when he was still young, but ultimately I agreed with him that there was clearly no point to go back. All it did was make him miserable to go to church without his best friend. It wasn’t helping his already strained relationship with God to associate his place of worship with awful feelings.

Kevin: I can understand that much.

Scott: Uh, I don’t want to sound like a jerk…no more than usual…but was it, uh, (he coughs and pulls out a pack of cigarettes, pointing at them quietly).

Barbara: No, Rachel’s family never smoked.

Scott: Oh good. Well I mean, not good, but at least, yeah…

Leena: Well then what caused the cancer?

Barbara: No clue.

Danny: The moral of this story isn’t that God causes cancer, right?

Austin: Well, He sure as hell doesn’t cure it.

Barbara: The moral of this story is that Chris is kind of a goober and he doesn’t handle death very well.

Kevin: (Thinking to himself). That’s why he hates being in a leadership role.

Austin: What?

Kevin: Well isn’t it obvious? He doesn’t trust that God has his back in any situation, so whenever we push him forward he feels that he’s standing completely alone.

Leena: May I point out this also explains his obsession with Lindsey’s well being?

Austin: (Smacks his head). Oh man! Of course! He’s using Lindsey as a substitute for Rachel! Since he couldn’t save Rachel, he has to save Lindsey. Or at least, he thinks he has to. This makes so much sense!

Willy: So do we tell her?

Leena: No. Absolutely not.

Kyle: Wouldn’t that solve everything though? Lindsey’s a girl and girls melt at that sort of sentiment, therefore she’d leave Jack and be with Chris, making him and by proxy all of us very happy.

Danny: I like this plan!

Leena: Well I don’t. It’s manipulating emotions and we don’t even know if this is really as deep-seeded as it sounds.

Willy: She at least deserves to know.

Austin: Not until we talk to Chris about it.

Barbara: Please, don’t make Chris talk about it if he doesn’t want to. I’ve seen it shred him up inside and I’d rather not see it happen again.

Kyle: So this is going to wind up being one of those “Keep it under our hats until it has to be said” sort of things, huh?

Austin: I Guess so.

Clinton: I don’t buy it.

Austin: What don’t you buy?

Clinton: I don’t agree that this explains everything about Chris. If he’s driven to save everybody, wouldn’t he want to be in a leadership position? It only makes sense.

Leena: Nothing anyone ever does makes sense to anyone other than the person doing it, and usually not even that. End rant. I’m going to bed. (She walks up the stairs and into one of the rooms).

Joshua: (Walks into the room at this point). Well that was a total waste.

Austin: What was?

Joshua: Oh nothing. Iess and his group are gone though, so you don’t have to worry about them anymore for a while.

Scott: Hey, that’s good news. (Unsure). That’s good news, right?

Willy: (Also unsure). Uh, I think so.

Kevin: So what do we do now?

Joshua: Leena has the right idea with sleep. There’s not much anyone can do until Chris and Derek get back from whatever they think they’re doing.

Barbara: Where did Chris go?

Joshua: Fighting the good fight. He’ll be fine. You’re welcome to stay here if you’d like, by the way.

Barbara: Thank you. I might as well since my house is in splinters.

Austin: You know, we can help you rebuild that when we get the chance.

Scott: Better idea: We get the Legion to build her a new house.

Barbara: With the shoddy work they’ve been doing lately, maybe not.

Kyle: Hahaha, I like Chris’ grandma.

Barbara: Alright, I’m picking a room and setting up camp. Goodnight everyone. (Walks up the stairs and into a room).

Austin: Well Josh, what’s the most important thing we need to know?

Joshua: Hmm…you need some sleep. Badly.

Danny: Ah! That means something really bad is going to happen! …Right?

Willy: I think it means we need sleep.

-Everyone seems to filter out of the room. Only Austin and Kyle remain.

Kyle: So.

Austin: So.

Kyle: Who talks to Chris about Rachel?

Austin: I’ll do it. Just not right away. I’ll give him a few nights to recover, then I’ll approach the subject gently.

Kyle: (Leans back into the couch). How long you think it’ll take the Wonder Twins to wrap things up?

Austin: (Leans back as well). Probably close to morning. It takes about three hours to fly down and three to fly back, assuming they aren’t exhausted. Plus add a couple hours for dealing with…whatever they’re heading into. So yeah, morning at the earliest if everything goes well.

Kyle: Then let’s hope it goes well.

-The scene shifts to Chris and Derek flying south toward the city.

Derek: I bet this belt’s gonna teleport us underground.

Chris: I’d be disappointed if it didn’t.

Derek: Chance we’ll be severely outnumbered?

Chris: Pretty high.

Derek: Good. I was worried this might be boring.

Chris: Do we have a specific plan on what to do when we get in there?

Derek: Take out the base, head back north, victory Sundaes. That’s my current schedule.

Chris: Sounds good to me. (Pulls out Max’s belt). Shall we?

-Derek claps a hand on Chris’ shoulder as they near the city.

Derek: Let’s do this.

-Chris presses the button on the belt, causing he and Derek to vanish without a trace.

To Be Continued…

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Sixty-Eight

July 24, 2010 at 1:54 am (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 68

“Hard Restart”

Recap: Last time, both groups ran into hardships shutting off the army of Hex-Duo robots when their respective control consoles were utterly destroyed. Now, Lindsey’s group must deal with a huge robot in a robot factory while Chris’ group gets to deal with the same problem in a massive underground warehouse. There’s got to be a way to shut these robots down, today, on Eclipse Star!

Chris: Alright Derek, you ready to pull out the flavor?

Derek: You know it.

Chris: Awesome.

-Chris and Derek both power up to their maximum power as the monster Hex-Duo robot lunges toward them.

-They both hit max at the same time and lay the robot out with two full-powered haymakers to the head.

-The huge robot flips back and smashes into a row of crates, spilling the contents everywhere.

Willy: Great, the crates down here are filled with more robots.

Chris: Well what else are they gonna be filled with?

-Derek shoots past Chris, leaping over the Hex-Duo before it can get to its feet, and fires a blast straight down.

-A giant robotic hand rockets up from the beam and grabs Derek, smashing him into the thick ceiling.

Kevin: Come on, we’ve got to find another active console around here.

Willy: Right.

-As those two run off, Chris throws a blast at the downed robot as Derek breaks open the robot’s grip and flies straight down again, smashing the robot with everything he’s got.

-The robot manages to hit both attackers at once with a chest beam, sending them flying.

Chris: Great. That’s just great. (Gets up). It’s like this thing doesn’t want to be destroyed.

Derek: Fine, that makes it more fun.

-Meanwhile, at the Charles Robotics factory where the other group is standing their ground…

Lindsey: Glitch, where’s the next nearest console?

Glitch: Charles’ office. That’s the only other one I can think of.

Lindsey: Where is that?

Glitch: It’d take too long to explain.

Lindsey: Then show me.

Glitch: Fine. Come on!

-Kyle keeps jumping right out of the way as the one big Hex-Duo robot tries to destroy him.

Leena: Kyle! Keep doing that! I think it’s helping!

Kyle: How?!

Leena: Because I’m not having to do anything!

-Another batch of Hex-Duo robots exits the assembly line and begins attacking.

-Leena throws a gust of wind near her feet and shoots out of the way as the new robots start firing at her.

-Austin and Danny run next to each other, smashing robots as they go. Danny bursts into flames as Austin throws him at the biggest Hex-Duo.

-Danny hits his target and explodes in its face, knocking it backward.

Danny: Hey Kyle.

Kyle: Hey Danny.

Danny: You think I got it?

Kyle: Oh probably not.

The robot turns itself over and gets up, pointing its canon at Danny and Kyle.

Danny: Well darn, I really thought I had him.

-The robot prepares to charge its canon, sucking up energy.

-Kyle looks at this and smacks Danny in the back of the head.

Danny: BLAH!

-Danny accidentally fires a mouth blast at the robot’s canon, colliding with the part still charging.


-The canon backfires and blows the arm clean off the robot.

Danny: Why’d you hit me!

Kyle: Hey, can’t argue with results.

-Lindsey and Glitch rush down a narrow hallway toward the end. Glitch leads as Lindsey follows, firing blasts to clear their advance since Hex-Duo robots keep popping up.

Lindsey: How much further?

Glitch: Luckily, just the end of this hall.

Lindsey: Well good, because I don’t know how much more I can do about these stupid robots. Uh, present company excluded.

Glitch: Right.

-On the factory level, the large Hex-Duo is working to reform its arm, slowly rebuilding from discarded pieces of other Hex-Duo.

Austin: We’ve got to take that thing out for good.

Leena: You got a plan?

Kyle: Well let’s see, you can fire bend, and Leena here seems pretty good at airbending.

Leena: What the heck are you going on about?

Kyle: Oh right, forgot, we’re based off Dragonball Z, not Avatar. Uh, I mean, totally original.

Danny: Why don’t we just hit it at the same time with some big explosion?

Kyle: This is a good idea. I like this idea. This is my favorite idea ever. Imma start chargin’ mah Dammit Blast.

Austin: Clinton, what was that crazy finger cannon thing you did before.

Clinton: The what now?

Leena: OH YEAH! That was like, what, back when we were running from the Demon Regime? Heck yeah! That was awesome!

Austin: Yeah why don’t you do that anymore?

Clinton: I don’t get much reason to.

Danny: Hey! I just thought of a good reason!

-The Hex-Duo Master Bot finishes repairs and stands up straight.

Danny: Yeah that thing!

-The Master Bot lets out an ear-piercing screech.

Austin: FIRE!

-Clinton fires his rapid-burst cannon, an attack that he fires from his index fingers like a gun, while Danny fires another mouth blast.

-The attacks hit the Master Bot, taking it off balance, allowing Austin to blast a stream of lava which Leena cools via her air gust.

-The Master Bot is ripped to bits from the flying shrapnel, still screeching as it’s destroyed.

Kyle: Dammit Blast fire!

-The world famous Dammit Blast makes contact with its foe and explodes the remaining parts, sending the twisted chunk spinning across the floor and into the far wall next to the hallway.

Austin: Not bad work guys. That almost looked like we knew what we were doing.

-The Master Bot explodes, taking down the wall next to the hallway, sealing it up.

Lindsey: What the heck?!

Glitch: No time, this might work better anyway.

Austin: Ah. We just trapped our team leader and tech guy in a one-way hallway, didn’t we?

Leena: (Sigh). Yes we did.

Clinton: And we still have more robots.

-The five get back-to-back as they’re circled by a mob of Hex-Duo robots.

Danny: How is Team Stingrays gonna make it out of this one?

-Leena facepalms.

-Back in Brooksboro, Chris and Derek continue exchanging blows with their own Master Bot.

Chris: We’ve got to work together on this or we’re not going to do enough damage!

Derek: Maybe you won’t, but I’m not done pushing harder!

-Derek fires a gnarly blast that connects with the Master Bot, though it holds its ground somehow.

Chris: We’ve got to get it off balance!

-Derek continues firing blasts at it head-on, doing nothing.

-Chris runs around behind the Master Bot and starts charging something.

Chris: It’s all about weight ratios really.

-Chris creates two balls of energy connected with an energy tether and throws it at the robot’s legs. The energy bola wraps around, connecting behind at the leg joints and exploding.


-Derek fires his blast once more at full power, hitting the robot as it falls backward.

-The Master Bot is thrown onto its back.

-Chris and Derek leap onto its chest and both fire straight downward, putting everything they can into a huge explosion.


-In one big explosion, their problem is eliminated. They finally take a moment to rest and breath again, panting heavily.

Chris: Heh, heh, that was, ha, that was pretty good, Derek.

Derek: Heh, phew, yeah. (Inhales deep). You think we’ll see any more?

Chris: Definitely. (Looks around). This whole warehouse down here needs to go.

Derek: Yeah.

-Derek and Chris stand back-to-back and take a deep breath. They charge up again and both fire straight ahead, turning clockwise to blow up everything in sight as far as they can see.

-Glitch and Lindsey make it to the end of the hallway where Glitch changes his arm into a railgun and starts firing, tearing open a hole in the door.

Glitch: Good, the console in here is still fine.

Lindsey: So now what?

Glitch: I’ve got to hack into their collective mind.

-Glitch starts ticking keys as fast as possible.

Glitch: Willy? You there?

Willy: Yeah, we’re alright. Chris and Derek just blew up a hell of a lot on our end.

Kevin: Duck!

-Kevin and Willy hit the deck as another sweep of energy beams rips by them.

Willy: We’re in some sort of sub-sub-basement level that looks like a warehouse. Any clue where we could find another console?

Glitch: Hold on. (He ticks some more keys and brings up the blueprints for Willy’s location). I’ve got good news. That new building is littered with access terminals.

Willy: Awesome! Where are they?

Glitch: According to this the upper levels are essentially mainframe storage.

Willy: This whole building is one big ROM?

Glitch: If I’m reading this correct, yup.

Willy: Kev, Glitch says we gotta go up.

Kevin: That, uh, could be a problem.

-Chris and Derek stop blasting.

Derek: That looks like everything.

Chris: If any robot pieces come back to life, I owe you five bucks.

Kevin: (Runs up to Chris with Willy). We have to get back to the upper levels.

Derek: Why?

Willy: This whole building is a backup unit for the Hex-Duo system and the upper levels contain the important data.

Derek: You’re kidding me! Why the hell did we come all the way down here then?!

Chris: Hey, this works out alright. We just totaled more equipment and material than I know what to do with, and I don’t think we were cracking this from street-level.

Derek: So let’s fly up and destroy this building, eh?

Willy: Uh, one problem.

Kevin: We could do without problems right now.

Willy: While you guys were fighting, those chutes we used to get down here closed up completely.

Derek: How do we open them?

Willy: My guess? Some basic terminal. (Deadpan). See if you can spot it.

Derek: Fine.

-Derek looks around and sees everything completely destroyed and scared.

-He turns and sees Willy just staring him in the face.

Derek: Alright, you’ve made your point smart guy.

Chris: Something’s got to be out of place…

-Chris looks around for anything that will get them out. His eyes come across a pipe sticking out of the wall, leaking.

-He stops for a moment on it before looking up at Kevin. Kevin smiles. Chris sighs.

-Austin’s group of five continues fending for themselves in the main factory room, smashing robots as they advance on them.

Leena: What’s taking them so long? (Smash).

Austin: They couldn’t get the shutdown code to work the first time, so it’s probably going to- (Smash) –probably going to take a few more minutes.

Danny: You think Chris and the others are okay? (Smash).

Austin: Oh definitely. (Smash. Smash-smash).

Kyle: They’re probably fine.

Austin: Ahem.

Kyle: Oh right. (Smashy-smash). There.

Leena: You know what I really wish we knew right now? Jack’s barrier move. (Smash).

Kyle: Pff, that thing’s overrated. It’s not like it has an awesome name or anything, like my Dammit Blast. (Smash).

Leena: You’re the only one with names for your moves.

Danny: Chris has got a move name! (Smash, spin, smaaaash).

Austin: He does?

Danny: Yeah! The Gigadoom Beam! (Block, smash).

Leena: The what?

Danny: That’s the sound his big attack makes. Giga-doom!

Austin: Catchy.

Clinton: We’re still outnumbered here. They’re getting pumped out faster than we can deal.

Austin: So you wish we had a barrier technique? I think we can manage that.

-Austin’s arms begin glowing bright orange before they turn to magma. He sprays it in a ring around the five before lifting his arms to create a lava dome.

-He looks to Leena and nods. She acts stunned for a moment before blowing a wind gust inside the dome, causing it to harden.

-Clinton flicks on his fingers with a little energy ball.

Danny: Whoa, Austin, that was pretty cool.

Clinton: It’s not going to hold for too long.

Austin: It just needs to hold for long enough.

-Back in the Brooksboro annex, on the upper levels of the building, a wall starts to bubble and crack before bursting open and shooting water everywhere.

-The water reforms into the four teenagers.

Chris: (Coughing). Alright, Willy, tell me you see a mainframe somewhere.

Willy: (Coughing). Kah! Yeah, hold on.

-They get a chance to look around and see nothing but mainframes.

Willy: Oh that’s just sweet.

-He runs to the nearest mainframe and begins punching buttons.

Willy: Glitch, I’m at a mainframe, guide me through this.

Glitch: Right.

-Hex-Duo robots begin pouring into the upper levels of the building.

Chris: Any time you’re ready there, Will. (Smash).

-In the little office where glitch is working, Lindsey is doing her best to stop Hex-Duo robots from entering.

Lindsey: I’m not holding out forever!

Glitch: Then your wish is my command.

Willy: Alright! Anyone got a shutdown code?! (Smash next to him).

Chris: Shut down code?

-Chris rushes over to the console and yells into the mic.

Glitch/Chris: Emergency Shutdown Code One-Nine-Eight-Six!

-A ripple effect seems to go out from both buildings as every Hex-Duo robot suddenly shuts off and falls over.

-Austin peaks his head out of his makeshift barrier once they stop hearing noise.

Austin: Uh, I think they did something.

Derek: (Socks Chris’ arm). Hah, so you just happened to know a “special” shutdown code?

Chris: I just now remembered what Charles used to stop the Hex-Duo last time.

Kevin: Well the important thing is, they stopped.

Chris: Yeah, but we’re not done.

-Derek blows a hole in the side of the building, allowing the four to fly out over the top.

-They share a nod and all fire energy beams down at once.


-The building a smoking crater, they exhale and fly off toward the city.

Lindsey: (Opening the office door). Yeah, whatever you did worked this time. They’re down.

Glitch: I don’t know for how long, though.

-Glitch runs up to the caved-in entrance of the hallway and slams his hands against it. A section comes off of each forearm and pounds the concrete like a piston, blowing a hole wide open.

Leena: Hey, nice of you two to join us again.

Lindsey: We need to take this place out.

Glitch: Shouldn’t be a problem.

Lindsey: Why?

Glitch: I set the self-destruct to go off in a few minutes.

Lindsey: Okay, that’s info we really need to know ahead of time.

-Everyone hurriedly gets back into the elevator and hit the button for ground floor.

-The elevator reaches the main floor, spilling the seven out into the original hallway. They book it as fast as they can to the main entrance, getting welcomed by a Master Bot-size Hex-Duo shut down in the space between the main doors.

-They get outside just in time for the whole building to detonate.


Austin: Hah. Hahahaha! That was AWESOME! We won!

Lindsey: (Looking around and yelling). Scott! Are you okay?!

-Scott walks out from an alleyway smoking a cigarette, carrying a young woman.

Scott: You kidding? I haven’t had a smoke since we went up north. I’ve never been better.

Leena: Uh, who’s that?

Scott: Who? (Looks down). Oh yeah, I saved her from that big-ass Hex-Duo in the front entrance there. Everyone meet, uh, what’s your name hon?

Girl: It’s-

Scott: Second thought, it’d just be weird if I knew your name now. Run along and tell your sisters to meet me when this is all over. Triplets. Gotta love ‘em.

-Scott sets the girl down and she runs off.

Danny: You didn’t, you know…relations…?

Scott: That chick? Hell no. I hardly had time to get her clothes off, what with the shit going on around here.

Leena: Well great. Glad I didn’t waste any time worrying about you or anything.

Scott: Hey, you want to get naked, you’ve got all the time in the world now.


-A distant explosion can still be seen over the buildings.

Lindsey: There’s no way. We stopped this!

Austin: I don’t think this is Hex-Duo work.

Jack: (Coming in over Glitch and Willy’s earbuds). Whatever you guys did brought the news back online.

Willy: Jack?

Derek: Jack’s calling?

Willy: How’d you-?

Jack: Yeah, I knew you swiped some earbuds; I’m Jack. You’ve got bigger problems.

Willy: Bigger problems?

Glitch: What are you seeing Jack?

Jack: The TV stations just came back on. Glitch, you can patch into the feeds.

Glitch: Yeah, so what’s-oh.

Lindsey: I don’t like the sound of that “oh.”

Willy: Help me out Jack; I don’t know what’s happening.

Chris: I think I have a good idea.

-Chris’ group finally gets a look at the city, seeing a ninety-story Hex-Duo robot smashing everything it steps on.

Derek: Okay fearless leader, how do we combat that thing?

Chris: Uh.

Jack: You’re really not going to be happy when you see who’s piloting that thing.

-Jack watches on TV in the Northern Lodge as the monstrosity of a Hex-Duo marches through the city, right as a camera pans up to the head, revealing the pilots.

Octa-Rangers: OMEGA BUSTER FIRE!!!

-Next: The Mega Zord!

-To Be Continued!

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Sixty-Seven

July 9, 2010 at 2:06 am (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 67

“System Error”

Recap: Chris split the group in two, taking Derek, Willy, and Kevin to the Brooksboro Annex of Charles Robotics while Lindsey lead the others to the Trillium City main headquarters. Both teams ran into some trouble with the new model of Hex-Duo robots, but things got worse when they discovered that the destroyed robots were rebuilding themselves bigger and stronger. Things can only get worse, today, on Eclipse Star!

-Chris, Derek, and Kevin watch from the elevator as the robots collect themselves and prepare to fight.

Chris: Hey Willy, how’s the elevator coming? You know, no pressure or anything…

Willy: Can’t talk right now. (Tapping the earbud). Glitch, repeat that last part, a whole lot slower.

-With the other group…

Glitch: Find the alternating current and relay it back to the primary output.

Willy: Yeah, but what the hell does that mean?

Kevin: I think they’re ready to attack again.

Derek: Yup, just about.

Glitch: Willy, just reconnect the three green wires to the purple wires that connect to the V-clips inside the main circuitry.

Willy: Hold on a second. (He looks at the circuitry). Yeah, none of that made any sense. All the wires on my end are gray.

Glitch: Okay, try-

-The two converse on the matter as the first robot lunges at Derek.

-Derek socks it back down but instantly holds his fist.

Derek: Damn, they’re hardening themselves somehow.

Chris: Your hand alright?

Derek: Yeah, but jeez, another upgrade and things are really gonna suck.

-Back with Lindsey’s group.

Kyle: Okay, so if they’re going through all the trouble to rebuild, I say we don’t break them anymore. I think we should just give them a neighborhood to live in peace and we head back the way we came. What do we all say?

Leena: We all say you’re an idiot.

Lindsey: Glitch, how’s our elevator situation?

Glitch: Sixteen more seconds.

Austin: I think we can manage sixteen seconds.

-As the rebuilt robots rush forward, Austin’s arm begins glowing bright red. He aims his arm as lava shoots out, arcing wherever Austin throws it, creating a small moat between them and the attacking robots.

Austin: There. That should hold ‘em.

-The robots look at the lava and float over it, being able to fly.

Austin: Why do I always forget stuff can fly now?

Glitch: Ding! Elevator’s heading down! Everyone coming?

-Everyone rushes to the elevator and tries to squeeze in, but they seem to be having some difficulty fitting.

Lindsey: We’ve still got robots advancing!

-She makes a V with her fingers and points them at the lava, firing a few quick blasts as the robots float above. This slashes lava on the robots.

Lindsey: Now leave us alone for a bit.

-She claps her hands before a stream of water flows from them, spraying the robots and the lava, hardening the bits that have splashed onto the robots and dunking them into the remaining lava before it hardens as well, creating a makeshift trap.

Lindsey: Okay, everyone in.

Leena: Lindz, where the heck did you think of that one?

Lindsey: Science class, freshman year.

Leena: Science class sucked.

Lindsey: But…

Leena: Oh right, the teacher was way hot.

Kyle: Ladies, I don’t mean to pry, but, you know, time is of the essence.

-Everyone crams into the elevator as Glitch takes them down.

-Meanwhile, Chris’ group continues fighting the robots in the lobby as Willy tries just about everything with the elevator’s circuit board.

Willy: How you guys holding up?

Chris: (Struggling to push against one of the robots). Never better, but hurry if you could.

Kevin: (While also fighting a robot). Have you tried zapping the board?

Willy: It’s got a protective coating. I can’t do that.

-More robots flood into the room.

Chris: Gonna have to think of something quicker here!

-Chris grabs the robot’s arm and swings it around and around, smashing smaller robots to pieces.

Willy: Okay, what if I just- (Tries something; the elevator’s lights go out). Okay, that didn’t work.

-As Derek fights with one robot, another comes up behind him, hitting him with a shoulder tackle that carries he and the robot into the elevator, smashing into the far end.

-Derek pulls out his sai and stabs both into the robot, ripping it in two with a loud grunt.

-Willy catches notice of Derek’s sai.

Willy: Hey, those aren’t made of normal stuff, are they?

Derek: What?

Willy: Stab the circuit box with those things.

Derek: Alright, if you say so.

-Derek takes one sai and thrusts it into the call button panel, going clean into it.

Derek: Now what smart guy?

Willy: Here, let me do it.

-Willy grabs Derek’s other sai, shields his face, and slams the sai together.


-A huge sonic boom is generated which ricochets throughout the elevator cart, vibrating the walls.

-Willy pulls the sai out from the button panel and pounds on the lowest possible number.

-The elevator dings and the doors start to close.

Willy: Got it! Let’s go!

-Chris and Kevin are pinned down by robots.

Chris: You kidding me?!

Derek: We ain’t holding this!

-The elevator doors nearly close.

-Kevin grabs Chris as he turns to water, turning Chris into water as well.

-They splash at the door and seep through before they fully close.

-Kevin and Chris reform as the sound of robot fists is heard on the metal doors.

Chris: Okay, whoa, don’t do that to me again.

Derek: Hey look, you made it. Nice of you to join us in the elevator.

Chris: Shaddap.

Derek: Okay, Willy, give me the sciency explanation for why that worked.

Willy: Sciency? Can’t do it. I just figured the vibration would screw up the security current for a few seconds.

Kevin: Good guess.

-They ride the elevator as it makes its descent into the inner workings of the annex.

-Jack, however, is as far from this as he can be, remaining behind at the Northern Lodge, unable to help due to his legs.

Joshua: Jack, you’re just sitting here?

Jack: This is the sitting room, correct?

Joshua: Did the numerous comfy chairs and sofas give it away?

Jack: My team’s out there fighting right now. I trained them and now I can’t be there when they could really use a strategist.

Joshua: And you’re a master strategist?

Jack: In the loosest terms, yes, I have to be.

Joshua: Or rather, you want to be.

Jack: I consider them one and the same.

Joshua: Well, consider your predicament and whose fault it is.

Jack: Yeah, a robot that’s been thoroughly smashed.

Joshua: No, I mean your problem walking. Your legs are fine, Jack.

Jack: That’s what you say.

Joshua: Jack! I’m not trying to trick you! I don’t have some ulterior motive for anything I’ve done, but I have been completely open with anything you’re willing to ask. Why can’t you trust me?

Jack: I have trust issues.

Joshua: Understatement.

Jack: Hey, I didn’t ask for your help here! I didn’t make you do anything for us! I made one simple request and that was to heal me like you did the others! I asked you to make me walk!

Joshua: So walk!

Jack: Fine!

-Jack stands up to show that he can’t walk without trouble. Naturally, he stands up just fine.

Jack: Why aren’t these hurting?

Joshua: Maybe you’re finally tired of sitting around?

Jack: Don’t go telling me this is a miracle.

Joshua: You’re still walking in a year, then I’ll call it a miracle.

-Joshua leaves the room.

Jack: What’s that supposed to mean?

-Chris’ group’s elevator continues heading down.

Derek: How deep did you say this thing was?

Chris: I didn’t. And “very deep” would be the answer you’re looking for.

Willy: Be ready to rip these doors open. I don’t know if the security’s gonna let up when we hit the bottom floor.

Derek: That’s assuming we’re hitting the bottom floor.

Chris: If you could punch through the panel with your sai, they might work on the doors, too.

Kevin: Wouldn’t that cause the elevator to be inoperable?

Chris: True.

-The elevator stops and the doors open.

Willy: Huh, guess the security’s off then.

Derek: Convenient.

-They step out to the long hallway that Chris first walked with Charles not long ago.

Chris: The room at the end of this hall should be where we’re going. I can almost guarantee there’s a kill-switch in there somewhere.

Kevin: How big is the room?

Chris: Size of a small office.

Derek: So basically, this won’t take a lot of time, right?

Chris: Presumably.

-Robots spill out from the side chutes, almost on cue.

Derek: (Pulling his sai out again). Goodie, I thought they’d forgot we were here.

-Chris nods at Derek. Derek clashes the sai together and sonic booms the hallway in front of them. The concrete refuses to divot next to them, though.

Willy: Hey, anyone else noticing the surprising structural integrity in here?

Chris: Why?

Willy: I’m just saying, these walls are built pretty damn solid.

Derek: Who cares? That just means we aren’t getting blindsided by someone smashing through at us.

Kevin: That also means we’re not smashing our way out.

Derek: Duly noted.

-More robots continue flooding the hall as Derek presses forward, throwing them aside with his shockwaves.

-Lindsey’s group is having a bigger problem. As they reached the bottom floor, the elevator has spilled out to a massive factory room of machines and conveyor belts.

Lindsey: Which way, Glitch?

Glitch: We need to get down to the main controls.

Kyle: Other side of the room?

Glitch: Yup.

Kyle: Figures.

Leena: Oh right, like they’re gonna install a vital control panel right next to the entrance?

Kyle: I would, yes!

Leena: Well then you’re an idiot!

Kyle: You know, that doesn’t help with my self-esteem.

Austin: Guys, quit it. You’re getting left behind.

-They look up and see Lindsey, Glitch, Clinton, and Danny running through the factory.

Leena: Great, that’s your fault.

-As Lindsey and Glitch take the lead, they get a good look at where the immediate robots are being built.

Lindsey: How do we shut off this production line?

Glitch: This is definitely new…

Lindsey: So you don’t know?

Glitch: Should still be controlled by the central station.

Clinton: Hey, I don’t like the sound of “should.” If it isn’t, what’s our next option?

Glitch: Another panel somewhere. Or manual shutdown.

Danny: That means we smash it, right?

Glitch: Yup.

Danny: Excellent!

-Danny barrels forward over everything in his path, acting as if the whole factory is an obstacle course. As he leaps over a bin, a robot hand shoots up and slams him in the face, throwing him back.

Lindsey: Watch for attacks!

-At this, robots begin marching into the factory, spilling out from various other areas in the vastness of the factory.

-Lindsey takes a look at Glitch and nods for him to guide them. He responds by nodding and rushing toward the conveyor belt.

Glitch: We’ll have the best coverage here!

-Everyone follows his lead as he begins running the gauntlet while robots begin firing at the group as a whole.

-The conveyor belt is filled with half-built robots on their way down the assembly line.

Austin: I don’t get it; I thought the robots were being built somewhere else.

Glitch: They are. These are just supplementary reinforcements.

Clinton: Clearly they figured we’d try attacking the main hub.

Austin: The others dealing with these problems?

Glitch: Yup. They’re down the elevator in Brooksboro, but the annex seems to have a factory as well.

-Glitch leaps over a fixture onto another conveyor belt, only this time the robots are beginning to activate in whatever state they’re in.

Glitch: Watch out! They’re waking up!

-Lindsey leads the charge behind Glitch, blasting as she runs.

-Everyone behind her continues leaping over the wreckages she’s causing.

-A robot from a little ways off picks up a discarded arm and hurls it, smacking Kyle in the head.

-Kyle topples over the edge and down to another conveyor belt.

Leena: You okay down there?!

Kyle: (Rubbing his head). Man, yeah, what the heck?

-Kyle looks down and sees that his new conveyor belt is packing much larger robots, all waking up.

Kyle: Ah c’mon, that’s not fair.

-As the first robot moves toward Kyle, he rolls and destroys its legs, getting to his feet to watch behind him.

-The next robot steps forward, so Kyle rolls through it as well.

Leena: Hey just keep that up, eh?

Kyle: Gettin’ dizzy.

-Kyle keeps rolling his way on the conveyor belt, advancing along with the main belt everyone else is on.

-Clinton and Austin are returning fire to the robots as they’re being shot.

Glitch: There’s the controls!

-Glitch and Lindsey leap off the assembly line onto the floor next to a controller unit.

Glitch: Okay, this may take a few moments to get going. Think you can give me some cover fire?

Lindsey: Naturally.

-Lindsey takes off toward the nearest group of robots and begins attacking.

-Clinton lands next to Glitch and holds his ground, keeping them protected from there.

Kyle: (At the end of his conveyor belt). Ah man, thank God.

Leena: Not bad!

Kyle: Thanks. (Kyle doesn’t notice the ground run out, spilling him down a chute). Dang it!

-Glitch works furiously on the controls.

Glitch: Anything yet?

Clinton: Doesn’t look like it.

Glitch: How about now?

-Glitch clicks a switch and the factory shuts down.

Clinton: I think that’ll at least stop the new flow, but we’ve still got robots rebuilding.

Glitch: Okay then, let’s figure this out.

-Chris’ group presses down the annex’s hallway, reaching the far doorway. Naturally, the door doesn’t open.

Derek: This has got to be a joke.

Chris: Well, the robots seem to finally be at a disadvantage.

-Chris motions to the robots rebuilding themselves. They’ve fashioned themselves into one huge model. Sadly, it can hardly move in the hallway.

Kevin: Hahaha! It can’t even move! That’s fantastic!

Chris: Derek, crack that door, would ya?

Derek: You got it.

-Derek stabs a sai into the door and strikes it with the other.


The door is utterly destroyed, spraying shrapnel into the hallway.

-The four rush into the room as the amorphous robot brings a cannon hand up at last.

Chris: Alright Willy, get on that computer and ask Glitch how to shut things down.

Willy: Right.

-Willy starts to move, but Kevin notices the huge cannon now aimed at the group.

Kevin: Lookout!

-Kevin grabs Willy back as the robot fires.


-The little room is destroyed, the computer console included. Once the dust settles the four take a long, sad look.

Chris: No way.

Willy: That was the computer console, wasn’t it?

Chris: Definitely.

Derek: Well now what?

Chris: We destroy that stupid freaking robot!

-Chris launches himself out from the room and into the amorphous robot, shredding it to pieces just by colliding.

Derek: Feel better?

Chris: Ha, ha, a little. (Sigh). Willy, let Glitch know what happened.

Willy: Right. (Willy taps his earbud). Hey Glitch, we got a new problem. Computer mainframe just got blown up.

Glitch: What? That’s not good.

Willy: Yeah, we’ve figured that much out.

Glitch: Is there another computer console anywhere?

Willy: We can’t see one.

Glitch: Then I don’t know what to tell ya.

Chris: What’d he say?

Willy: He says we’re S.O.L.

Chris: Great. That’s great news. Stupid freaking robot!

-Just for good measure Chris fires another blast at the robot’s remains, scattering them more.

Kevin: There has to be another option. Maybe we could head down the chutes?

Chris: You know, that’s not a bad idea. You guys ready?

Derek: Aren’t we always?

Chris: Good. I’ll meet you at the bottom.

-Chris rips the opening off one of the side-hall chutes and leaps in. The other three do the same.

-Meanwhile, Lindsey’s team seems to be handling themselves well enough, keeping the robots distracted momentarily while Glitch continues working at the mainframe.

Glitch: Okay, I think I’ve figured something that might work, but this might also shut me down, too.

Clinton: If that’s the only way, then we’ll have to take the risk.

Glitch: Alright then. Also, thanks for the support. Jerk.

-Glitch punches some buttons and nothing happens.

Glitch: Heh, kind of glad that didn’t work.

Clinton: You don’t say?

-The ground starts rumbling.

Lindsey: Hey Glitch! What’d you do?!

Glitch: As far as I could tell, nothing!

-Kyle begins yelling from the chute he fell down before scrambling up.

Leena: We’ve you been?

Kyle: I found a thing!

Leena: What?

-The chute explodes as a massive robot climbs out, tearing up the floor.

Leena: What did you do?!

Kyle: I didn’t do anything!

-The giant robot pulls itself out of the floor to a point it can stand up. It raises a large cannon arm and points it at Glitch and Clinton at the mainframe.


-As the blast flies towards Glitch and Clinton, Lindsey leaps in the way and throws up a half-barrier, stopping the blast but throwing her across the factory.

Leena: Lindz!

Lindsey: (She slams into a wall but seems okay). No worries, I’ll be fine.

Leena: (Running up to her). When d’you learn Jack’s barrier technique? Oh God, you slept with him, didn’t you?

Lindsey: No! I figured out how to do half the barrier, just not the whole thing.

Leena: Better than nothing.

Glitch: Okay, this shutdown code should work!

-Glitch presses another button combination, causing all the robots in the immediate area to stop for a moment.

Glitch: Yes! Alright, we’re good.

Lindsey: Phew. That’s a relief.

Austin: Kind of an anticlimactic resolution, don’t you think?

Kyle: Up, there you go, you said a thing.

-The massive robot comes back on, shooting the computer mainframe again.


-Glitch and Clinton leap out of the way, but the mainframe is obliterated. At this, the other robots begin moving as well.

Glitch: Well that can’t be good. Willy, you copy?

-Chris and his group each fall out of a chute into a massive underground room of crates. They land and look around.

Chris: This…wasn’t what I was expecting.

Glitch: Willy, you there?

Willy: (Tapping his earbud). Yeah. What’s up?

Glitch: Something’s wrong at our location. My kill code didn’t work.

Willy: Glitch says his kill code didn’t work.

Chris: Crap. That’s not good.

Derek: Understatement.

Willy: What do we do then? How do we shut these things off?

Glitch: Not sure, I’ve got to find another mainframe before I can even attempt.

Willy: Yeah, we’ve got to do the same thing.

Kevin: Uh-oh.

Chris: What?

-They all look where Kevin was looking, seeing a twenty-foot robot rise up above them to full height.

Chris: Oh. Freaking robots.

Willy: Hey Glitch, we’ll call you back.

Chris: Alright Derek, you feeling like full power?

Derek: (Wicked grin). Absolutely.

Chris: Good, because now would be the perfect time. Willy, Kevin, do me a favor and find us another mainframe.

Kevin: Right. Watch for the cannon.

-Chris and Derek nod to each other and begin raising their Pulse Energies to max.

Derek: It’s show time!

To Be Continued…

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Sixty-Six

June 24, 2010 at 8:43 pm (Eclipse Star: Genesis) (, )

Eclipse Star: Chapter 66

“No One Expects The Metallic Inquisition”

Recap: Last time, Hex-Duo robots poured out into the streets of Trillium City, firing on any and everything. But where were the good guys? Hundreds of miles north. That all changes today as the battle to reclaim Trillium City starts right…NOW!

-Everyone at the Northern Lodge is gearing up for the fight.

Lindsey: I knew you’d eventually come to your senses.

Chris: Don’t I always? (Slinging his new sword over his back).

Lindsey: Whoa, where’d you get that?

Chris: Cavern of Aloneness.

Kyle: Stronghold of Isolation!

Chris: Right, the Ice Temple.

Lindsey: (Walking away). You boys and your awesome adventures that you don’t invite me to…

Chris: Hey Jack.

Jack: What’s up?

Chris: (Pulling out the elbow blades he grabbed for Lindsey). Before we head out, could you give these to Lindz? I’ve got to go talk to Josh.

Jack: (Taking the elbow blades). Yeah, I’ll do that.

Chris: Thanks. (Runs out of the room, tapping Austin on the shoulder and nodding before he heads out).

Austin: Everyone set? We leave in three, alright?

-General agreements.

-Lindsey walks up to Jack.

Lindsey: Jack, I know things haven’t been so great lately, and I just wanted to apologize.

Jack: It’s okay. I spent the past year trying to hold you back but, well, the legs.

Lindsey: Yeah.

Jack: So I won’t be there to hold you back from getting a fist to your face.

Lindsey: Heh, it’s inevitable in our line of work.

Jack: Hey, take these with you.

-Jack hands her the elbow blades.

Lindsey: Oh cool, what are they?

Jack: Elbow blades. They’re mainly a defensive weapon, but you can still do some major damage.

Lindsey: Thanks Jack!

-She kisses him for a moment.

Jack: Hey don’t thank me.

Lindsey: (Coy). Oh yeah? Who should I thank then?

Jack: On second thought, yeah, sure, thank me again.

Lindsey: You got it.  (They continue kissing as the others finish preparing).

Chris: (Running up to Joshua). Josh? We’re about to head out.

Joshua: I know.

Chris: I’m sorry about this. I screwed up, didn’t I?

Joshua: You wouldn’t be human if you didn’t now and then, eh?

Chris: Yeah, I guess so.

Joshua: I can’t go with you.

Chris: I figured as much.

Joshua: But Grid and her group will be backing you up, so use them.

Chris: I’ll do that.

Joshua: And Chris? Be careful, okay?

Chris: Absolutely.

Austin: Hey Chris! Time’s up, let’s go!

Chris: We’ll be back when this is over.

Joshua: I’ll see you then.

-Chris rejoins the others as they’re heading outside.

-A few of them wave to Joshua before taking off and flying south toward the city.

Chris: (Flying at the head of the pack). Okay, can everyone hear me?

Kyle: (Flying near the back). Speak up!

Chris: (Yelling). How ‘bout now?!

Kyle: What?!

Leena: I’ll tell you later, just shut up right now.

Chris: I encountered this new model of robots not too long ago. Charles Robotics has a new annex in Brooksboro, built on top of my old house. We were there three months ago and more or less the rest of the landscape is the same. The building is huge with lower levels going way underground. I have no clue what the inner workings look like, but this building is one possible point where they’re originating. Glitch?

Glitch: Yes?

Chris: We need to know where you were created. That’ll be another point of access.

Glitch: The Charles Robotics facility I was manufactured at is located in the northeastern part of the city near the Lincoln Memorial Playhouse.

Chris: Half of us will need to go there. Are there any more factories?

Glitch: Several, down by the docks next to Jamestown.

Chris: Okay, so we send a group down to make a clean sweep. Give me an exact number of factories.

Glitch: At last count there were six, each roughly the size of a city block.

Grid: My team can take care of those.

Chris: Are you sure of that?

Grid: We’re stronger than you guys, so don’t worry about us. You guys focus on the main two headquarters.

Chris: Team one comes with me to Brooksboro, team two heads to the northeastern facility. Does it have a name, Glitch?

Glitch: Nope, just says ‘Charles Robotics’ on the facility’s building.

Chris: Is there a service network that connects all the robots?

Glitch: There should be a master shutdown code that we can send to all units. I know for sure it can be sent from the original building, but I know nothing about the Brooksboro plant.

Chris: Will that effect your systems as well?

Glitch: No, I’m hardwired completely differently.

Chris: Good, then I want you to hack into their systems with team two. Team two, who wants to lead it?

Derek: Dibs.

Lindsey: What? Just because he’s Derek he gets to lead the team? No way, I want in.

Chris: Derek, I want you in Brooksboro with me. It’s gonna take a lot of firepower to crack the basement levels and I don’t think I can do it alone.

Derek: Fine.

Chris: Lindz, you’ve got that cool water ability, so you can slip around, right?

Lindsey: I suppose.

Chris: Good, anyone else know how to do that?

Kevin: I’m familiar with some water techniques, so I should be able to copy Lindsey’s move.

Chris: Good, Kevin, you’re with me, too. Also Willy, you know some tech stuff, right?

Willy: A little, but nothing like you’re gonna need.

Chris: (Pulls Jack’s ear bud from his pocket and tosses it to Willy). Here. Glitch, sync with that frequency. You two are going to be the only two in direct contact. If we get to a mainframe before your team, instruct Willy how to do it. Can you do that?

Glitch: Yeah, I think I can manage.

Chris: Good. Has anyone figured out Jack’s barrier technique yet?

Austin: Nah, he still refuses to teach us.

Chris: Fine. I’m talking Derek, Kevin, and Willy into the Brooksboro base while Glitch, Lindsey, and everyone else hits the main facility. If Lindsey is unreachable, Austin, you’re next in command.

Lindsey: So I’m team leader?

Chris: Team Two leader.

Lindsey: Team One. You can be Team Two.

Danny: Can we be the Stingrays?

Lindsey: No, we’re Team Number One!

Chris: Fine, Team One, get to the mainframe at all costs. My team will-

Kevin: Team Stingrays.

Chris: Sure, Team Stingrays.

Danny: We wanted to be the Stingrays!

Chris: Wait, what?

-Kevin’s laughing.

Chris: I don’t care, we’ll be trying the same thing. That way at least one of us should be successful.

Austin: And your grandma?

Chris: We don’t have time to look into that right now. Stay focused.

Derek: You stay focused. I’m not gonna be shaken up by your grandma.

Chris: Derek, shut up until I tell you to talk, alright?

Lindsey: Be careful, okay?

Chris: Same to you.

-The groups split as they fly to their various attack points.

-Meanwhile, the city is in heavy chaos with Hex-Duo robots marching the streets, causing massive amounts of damage. Civilians are freaking out everywhere.

-Near the Lincoln Memorial Playhouse a rather large concentration of Hex-Duo robots is herding humans into a central area.

-An energy blast flies down from the skies and blows a few robots apart.

-More energy blasts from Lindsey’s group begin raining down.

-The civilians begin cheering once they see the kids fly overhead.

Lindsey: Alright guys, you know the plan. Glitch? Where’s the facility?

Glitch: Up ahead.

Lindsey: Okay. Someone start clearing a path for us..

Kyle: Whoa whoa, we’re the clean-up crew?

Lindsey: We’re gonna need space to work!

Clinton: I’ve got this.

-Clinton lands in the middle of a robot crowd and starts aiming at various sections, systematically causing Hex-Duo robots to fire at him, miss, and hit each other.

Kyle: See, that’s a good strategy. Make the robots do all the work.

Lindsey: Let’s get through that front door!

-Meanwhile, Chris’ team makes it to Brooksboro.

Kevin: It doesn’t look as bad over here.

Willy: The city was the main goal though. No reason to hit the suburbs.

Chris: They know I know where this location is, so don’t be surprised when hundreds of robots swarm from seemingly nowhere.

Derek: That the building? (Motions to the large building in front of them).

Chris: Yup. Conspicuous, isn’t it?

Derek: Not even a little.

Chris: Derek, shall we knock?

Derek: With pleasure.

-Before they even land, Hex-Duo robots pour out from the front entrance and begin firing immediately.

-Derek charges a blast and swipes an opening in the front entrance.

Chris: Let’s do this fast guys.

-Lindsey’s group is still standing on the front of the Charles Robotics building with no way through. The group continues blasting at robots as they get closer.

Lindsey: Hey Glitch, any luck with that front door?

Glitch: (Futzing with the circuitry on the door panel). You won’t be able to blast this open, and the security has been vastly upgraded since I was last here.

Leena: So find a way already!

Glitch: Patience. Just gotta find the right opening in alternating current patterns…

Leena: What?

Glitch: Got it. (A bzzt of electricity sharks from the panel and the doors begin opening).

Austin: Alright then, shall we enter?

Lindsey: Yes, please. Glitch, shut the door once we’re in.

Glitch: Can’t do that, the door’s broke.

Scott: Go, I’ll play bouncer.

Lindsey: You sure?

Scott: Well I’m sure as shit not gonna run around in a science facility listening to you give orders.

Lindsey: Fine. No one gets in.

Scott: Not until I’m dead anyway.

-Lindsey’s group rushes into the facility.

Scott: (Stretching his arms). Alright, who wants to make the first cheap shot?

-Chris’ group, on the other hand, has made it into the main lobby of the annex but find themselves huddled for cover behind a fountain.

Derek: (In between shooting blasts at the robots). How do we get down to the lower levels?

Chris: There’s an elevator over there, but I have a sneaking feeling it’s not working right now.

Willy: They’ve got to have a stairwell somewhere.

Chris: I don’t think so. They don’t seem to care much about city regulations.

Willy: True, but where are all the robots coming from?

Chris: Good question…

Derek: They’re coming from back rooms is what it looks like.

Kevin: Maybe chutes pushing the robots up from the lower levels?

Chris: I bet that’s it.

Derek: So let’s find one ‘a these chutes and jam an explosive down it.

Chris: Destroying the building isn’t enough for this.

Derek: So then we destroy the elevator and fly down the shaft.

Chris: That might just work.

Derek: Then cover me while I do this!

-Derek runs out from behind cover, leaping into a robot and booting it into a few others.

-The elevator doors open and four more Hex-Duo come out blasting.

-Derek pulls out his sai and creates a sonic boom, throwing everyone and everything away from him.

-He runs into the elevator, hurling the broken robots out the door.

Derek: Going down.

-Derek tries punching through the bottom of the elevator but nothing happens.

Derek: Damnit! They reinforced the elevator, too!

Chris: Willy, can you hardwire an elevator?

Willy: No, but I’m gonna have to learn, aren’t I?

Chris: If it’s not too much trouble, could you?

-Back with Lindsey’s group, getting through the front few hallways has turned out to be the easy part as dozens of Hex-Duo are spilling out from deeper in the facility.

Lindsey: This isn’t good. We aren’t even making a dent in their numbers just shooting like this.

Clinton: The problem is they’ve got hundreds more being manufactured at this very moment. It does no good to destroy them since another will just pop up.

Kyle: At least they’re pretty easy to break. (Kyle smashes a robot apart with a simple punch).

Glitch: This isn’t right. Something feels off about this…

Lindsey: What?

Glitch: Why would the robots be so simple to break?

Lindsey: If they had to make a ton, wouldn’t they have to cut costs and resources?

Glitch: Yes, but these are hardly stronger than the worker drones Charles had built way before my time. That doesn’t make sense.

Austin: I’d rather not question a blessing if I can help it.

Glitch: That’s just the thing. There’s bound to be stronger robots in here somewhere.

Kyle: Oh don’t say that. Whenever someone says something like that-

-A much larger Hex-Duo robot steps out and fires a beam at the group, dislodging them from their current position.

Kyle: See? That sort of thing happens.

-Lindsey runs forward and collides with the robot head-on. It doesn’t seem to be damaged from this attack.

-The robot grabs Lindsey and headbutts her.

-Lindsey kicks at the robot, but this still does nothing to damage it.

Leena: Lindz! I don’t think that’s working!

Kyle: Like she’s gonna listen to you.

Leena: Come on, we need to clear this room.

Kyle: You have a plan?

Leena: Pff, yeah, come over here.

-Kyle runs over to Leena. She stretches her hands out and creates an energy ball in each. She motions for Kyle to do the same.

-Kyle seems to catch on and also creates energy balls in his hands. Leena presses their energy together, then grabs it and pulls, running in the opposite direction.

-The energy is pulled into a long beam between the two as Leena runs towards Lindsey. Kyle gets the picture and starts running as well, keeping his distance.

-Robots are being ripped in half as they get clotheslined by the beam.

Leena: Lindz! Jump!

-Lindsey looks back and jumps, right as Leena and Kyle run past the stronger robot, hitting it with the energy rope. They struggle with it for a moment but tear it clean in two.

Austin: Well, looks like this won’t be so tough afterall.

Kyle: Nope, see, you’re not getting the rule of saying things like that.

-The strong robot’s upper half twitches and springs up. It grabs its lower half and reconnects it as some of the other weaker robots hobble over to it, still broken, but add their mass to it.

-The robot continues to rebuild itself, larger and stronger.

Austin: Okay, that might just complicate things.

-Chris’ group continues to stay huddled in the elevator as Willy attempts to hack the motherboard. Derek, Chris, and Kevin are blasting Hex-Duo robots when they can.

Willy: This is way more advanced than anything I’ve messed with at home.

Chris: Well, there’s bound to be a way to hack it.

Willy: (Tapping his earpiece). Glitch, I need some help here.

Glitch: Willy! There’s something you guys need to know!

-Derek blasts a robot but does a double take, squinting as the broken robots begin rebuilding into larger, better models.

Derek: Hey fearless leader, I’m seeing a potential problem here.

Chris: What?

-Chris looks out to see the robots regrouping bigger and stronger.

Willy: Chris, Glitch says these new models are capable of-

Chris: Yeah, I think we’ve just seen the proof of concept.

-The robots in the lobby have formed into larger models that look similar to Hex-Duo 1, 4, and 8, though with more wires ands gears exposed.

-Lindsey’s group sees the same thing on a larger scale with dozens more Hex-Duo robots looking ready to attack.

Chris: Whose idea was it to help the city again?

To Be Continued…

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Eclipse Star: Genesis Chapter Sixty-Four

May 4, 2010 at 4:15 am (Eclipse Star: Genesis, Uncategorized) ()

Eclipse Star: Chapter 64

“Sense and Sensibility”

Recap: While Syrus busily studies Chris’ technique, the boy himself goes in search of his grandmother’s whereabouts. Finding a Charles Robotics facility where his house used to be, things become more complicated when a team of Hex-Duo 6 robots suddenly attack. The fight is halted by Charles, or rather a robotic version of Charles. He assures Chris that his grandmother is safe but urges him to stay out of the next conflict. Chris leaves for the Northern Lodge once more as Charles tells Syrus of his findings. Things are about to get crazy, today, on Eclipse Star!

-The group is up in the mountains during a normal training session with Joshua. Most of the group is actively engaging in warm-up drills while Joshua gives pointers. Jack, however, remains in his usual spot off to the side, leaning against a tree with his crutches under his arms.

Joshua: That’s good guys, real good. I want all of you nice and loose for today.

Lindsey: What’ve you got for us today?

Kyle: Please tell me it’s not just more hiking.

Joshua: Nope, not exactly hiking. Today’s a test.

Danny: Test? TEST?! I didn’t know I was supposed to study for one of those!

Joshua: Haha, calm down Danny, you should be more than ready.

Scott: So what’s up?

Joshua: Oh it’s very simple. I’d like all of you to play hide and seek.

Leena: That doesn’t sound too hard.

Joshua: Well, all of you are hiding and all of you are seeking.

Leena: Okay, that’s impossible.

Joshua: I work best under those conditions.

Clinton: How will this drill work?

Joshua: First, everyone’s getting blindfolded. After that I count to ten and tell you all to scatter. The goal is to take out everyone else without being taken out yourself. Sound simple enough?

Derek: I assume we’re using Pulse Sensing abilities then?

Joshua: Precisely. This wouldn’t work if you didn’t.

Kyle: Okay, but I see a general flaw with this drill: Even if I attack someone first they’ll still take me out.

Joshua: Hmm, okay, the Kyle Rule is in effect: No one’s allowed to hit Kyle as hard as they’d hit Derek.

Kyle: I like this rule.

Leena: I don’t.

Austin: So any other limitations?

Joshua: Nope. I assume I don’t need to further explain how to play this game best, but just for clarification- (Danny smiles) –you will need to balance keeping your Pulse strength low enough to avoid detection with raising it quick enough to knock out your opponents.

Kyle: Except for Kyle!

Joshua: Right, except for Kyle. Just give him a pink belly until he gives up.

Kyle: I suddenly don’t like the Kyle Rule.

Joshua: Oh, and Glitch, I’m sorry, but you can’t play since you’ve got special scanners anyway.

Glitch: Yeah, I figured about as much.

Joshua: You’ll be the clean-up crew. Bring ‘em back as they knock each other out. Sound good?

Glitch: (Salutes). Sure, can do!

Joshua: Excellent! Ready to get blindfolded everyone?

Everyone: Hoorah!

Joshua: Ooh, no, nope, that isn’t going to work. We need a new group cheer.

Lindsey: Cowabunga!

-Everyone just stops and looks at Lindsey.

Lindsey: What? I like it. It sounds cool.

Joshua: Might I suggest “Hallelujah”?

Derek: Too religious, not powerful enough.

Joshua: I’ll have you know that it’s very powerful, thank you.

Jack: (Deadpan). How about just “Ha”?

-Everyone is somewhat surprised to hear Jack speak.

Joshua: (Pause, then). I like it!

Group: Ha!

-Everyone is fitted with a blindfold. Joshua counts to ten as they scatter.

Jack: How long you think before this is over?

Joshua: (Laughing). Oh no, I don’t think you’re just going to sit there and gloat. I’ve got a job for you, too.

Jack: Does it involve my legs finally working?

Joshua: I’ve told you, that is entirely up to you. No, I assume you’ve been paying attention to the lessons?

Jack: To a certain point.

Joshua: I know when you’re lying. Jack, you’re the best with this ability.

Jack: I’ve picked it up but nothing special.

Joshua: Tell me how far away Chris is.

Jack: (Rolls his eyes). I don’t-

Joshua: Jack.

Jack: (Pause). Roughly three miles south-southwest.

Joshua: I want you to describe everything as it’s happening to me.

Jack: How does this help you?

Joshua: This helps you, not me.

Jack: Fine, if you say so. (Jack closes his eyes for a moment). Alright, so far Danny’s the easiest to sense since he’s not suppressing his Pulse whatsoever.

Joshua: Oh that Danny. Maybe I should have told him about the test beforehand.

Jack: No one has made contact with anyone else just yet. They’re keeping themselves at a cautious distance. Derek’s making a move toward Kevin right now. And Kyle seems to be making a conscious effort to move away from Derek’s position. He’s almost completely out of range for everyone else.

Joshua: Not a bad tactic. Keep going. Don’t stop updating me. (Closes his eyes and sits down, relaxing, cross-legged).

-Out in the woods, Derek is moving between trees rapidly, keeping low but moving fast. He approaches Kevin rather closely.

Kevin: (Whipping around in Derek’s direction). I know you’re back there, Derek!

-Derek, however, is gone.

-Kevin moves his head around, listening carefully and trying to feel Derek out.

-Derek comes down on top of Kevin’s head with both feet, plowing Kevin into the ground.

Austin: Got you!

-An energy blast shoots at Derek as Austin comes rushing in with more.

-Derek leaps at Austin, underneath the energy blasts, and boots him in the stomach.

-Austin gasps but takes a mad swing with both hands, clonking Derek in the side of the head.

-Derek staggers off for cover.

Austin: Hah, hah, alright then, I see how it’s gonna be.

Jack: (Back at the Lodge with his eyes closed). Kevin was nearly knocked out for a second. He moved clear when Austin attacked Derek, though. He’s moving erratically right now. I think Derek’s hit has him confused.

Joshua: Good though, he’s still got enough sense to get away from the fight. He’s been listening to me pretty well.

-Kevin continues stumbling between the trees, running into a few without meaning to before stopping to rub his head.

Kevin: Man, how’d he hit me that hard without me feeling the Pulse spike first?

-Danny shuffles about, trying to stay busy doing something, but he can’t seem to find anyone.

Danny: Wow, everyone’s doing a really good job right now. I can’t find anyone. Unless…maybe they’re scared of me! (Epiphany). That’s right! I forgot! I’m super strong, aren’t I?! I’ll just let them come to me!

-Danny stands his ground and raises his Pulse level.

Jack: For whatever reason, Danny just decided to let everyone know exactly where he is.

Joshua: Ooh, that’s not a bad idea.

Jack: Oddly, it isn’t, at least in this scenario. I assume Danny thinks he’s really strong but what he’ll end up doing is cause everyone else to meet up and start weeding each other out.

Joshua: And then Danny gets out somehow. Genius!

-As Jack predicted, multiple others begin flocking to Danny’s position, with Derek, Scott, Lindsey, and Clinton moving toward a collision course, each expecting to be the first to intercept Danny.

-Scott is suddenly hurled into a tree, courtesy of Derek.

-Danny hears this and fires a blast at the direction of the noise, hitting Scott pretty hard.

Danny: Aha! I got someone!

-Clinton comes up behind Danny and nearly knocks his head off.

-Derek slams Clinton unexpectedly in the side of the head with an elbow.

-Danny turns around and fires another large blast, pegging Clinton really easily.

Danny: I got another one!

Clinton: (Taking his blindfold off). Of course you got me. I was right next to you when Derek hit me.

Danny: Aha! I can hear you!

Clinton: What?

-Danny begins firing more blasts at Clinton, believing he’s got him on the run.

Jack: Well, somehow Danny hasn’t completely messed this one up yet.

Joshua: Ahahaha! This is wonderful!

-While Danny is busy chasing Clinton off, Derek moves in for the kill.

-Before he can strike Danny, Lindsey has tackled Derek.

-The two careen off in another direction wrestling about in mid-flight.

-Austin breaks the two up, kicking one and uppercutting the other.

-Lindsey and Derek snap back to take out Austin, managing to hit each other incredibly hard.

-Austin is situated off to the side of the two, having missed being hit entirely. He grabs the two heads and slams them together before grabbing them and throwing them into the air.

Derek: Damn it!

-Danny stops chasing Clinton and turns his attention upward.

Danny: That sounds like Derek!

-Danny charges up and fires another large blast in Derek’s direction, making a direct hit.

-Lindsey manages to move out of the way before Danny can sense that she’s there, too. She drifts silently back into the treetop covering and fades off anyone’s radar, save for Jack’s.

Jack: Danny almost knocked Derek out with that last attack.

Joshua: (Kicking his feet in excitement). Oh isn’t this just fun?!

-Derek turns toward Danny and angrily throws a super-powered beam in his direction.

-Danny stops and begins to suspect something’s up.

Danny: Wait a minute…that felt like Derek throwing something really big and really painful at me. But he’s scared of me, right? Why’d he do that?

-Before Danny is exploded, Willy has pulled him out of the way to safety.

Willy: What d’you think you’re doing Danny? Derek almost killed you!

Danny: Willy? I found you!

-Danny places his hands on Willy’s chest and fires a forceful beam, launching Willy out of the woods and into the air.

Danny: (Beaming). I’m doing really good, aren’t I?

-Willy sails over the trees and into the clouds.

Jack: I’d say Willy’s pretty much done.

Joshua: Yup. Still, he did good keeping Danny safe. He passes the test nonetheless.

-Glitch flies up to Joshua and Jack carrying Clinton.

Joshua: Clinton, you’re out because you looked.

Clinton: I know, I know.

Joshua: Feeling alright?

Clinton: Yup, just kind of stupid.

Joshua: Glitch? You mind catching Willy before he hits the ground?

Glitch: You got it!

-Glitch flies off to get Willy.

-Chris finally shows up.

Chris: What’s up?

Joshua: Ah! Chris! You’re back so soon. How did it go?

Chris: I’ve got news. What’s everyone up to? I’m feeling Pulse spikes everywhere.

Joshua: Training. Hey Clinton, hand Chris your blindfold.

Clinton: Here.

-Clinton gives his blindfold over to Chris. Chris doesn’t quite understand.

Joshua: Well? Put it on.

Chris: Oh. (Puts it over his eyes). Now what?

-Joshua grabs Chris and hurls him into the woods, flailing like an idiot.

Joshua: There, that should give everyone else a slight handicap.

Jack: Well, at least he’s figured out the point of the exercise. His Pulse has already dropped to the “stealth” range.

Joshua: He always was a fast learning.

Clinton: Now that you mention it, there’s a question I’ve been meaning to ask.

Joshua: About how Chris made so much headway in three days’ training?

Clinton: That’s the exact question.

Joshua: I could tell you, but that’d ruin the surprise.

Jack: It was just what needed to happen. Nothing more, nothing less.

Joshua: Actually, I like that answer better.

Jack: By the way, I think Kevin’s about to be out.

-Deep in the woods, Kevin is being hammered with quick strikes from Lindsey and Leena. By the time he turns in the proper direction to attack one, the other is coming up from behind. Still, he’s enjoying himself.

Kevin: Ha, ha, okay, so how should I do this?

-Lindsey comes at Kevin from the right as Leena closes in from the left.

-Kevin shrinks himself instantly to the size of an ant, allowing the two girls to smash their faces into each other at full speed.

Leena: OW!

Lindsey: Dang it!

Leena: You weren’t supposed to run into me!

Lindsey: Then where’d Kevin go?

-Kevin reappears at quadruple his normal height the very next instant, grabbing at the two.

-Neither can break free, though Lindsey liquefies herself and slips through Kevin’s fingers.

-Leena, literally on the other hand, is launched way into the air.

Leena: This is why you don’t have a girlfriend…!

-Lindsey reforms herself and runs off through the woods again, hiding her power.

-Leena comes down in the middle of the woods while yelling.

Leena: Yaaaaaa…!

Danny: I know that voice! That’s Leena!

Leena: What? Danny? Oh no.

Danny: Ultra Beam Blast Cannon!

-Danny points himself at Leena and fires, hitting her with all his strength.

Jack: Well, Kevin may still be going, but Leena’s out now.

-Glitch flies to the starting location carrying Willy.

Joshua: Willy, how are you?

Willy: (Coming to, rubbing his head). I’m alright. Dumb, but alright.

Joshua: Don’t worry, you did good. Glitch? Leena’s gonna need a catch, too.

Glitch: Right.

-Glitch flies off to grab Leena.

-Meanwhile, Scott has located Kyle and proceeds to track him through the woods.

Scott: C’mere Kyle, I know you’re out there.

Kyle: (Whispering to himself while hiding behind trees). Dang it, how does he know?

-Kyle takes a step out from the trees and steps on a twig.

-Kyle looks down at the twig and then over towards Scott, who’s also noticed the sound.

Kyle: Oh come on, how cliché is the old twig gag?

-Scott lunges at Kyle. Kyle braces himself for something big.

Kyle: Okay, make it quick…!

-A swift flash and Kyle is left alone, still bracing for the attack.

Kyle: Okay, any time now. (Unbraces). Anyone there?

-Scott is reeling through the trees after getting struck by something or other.

Jack: Okay, whatever just hit Scott totally knocked him out.

-Glitch flies down with Leena.

Joshua: Glitch, Scott, please?

Glitch: Sure thing.

-Kyle “looks” around, wondering out loud what happened.

Kyle: Huh. I guess I must have done something unexpected just there, like a secret well of power.

Chris: You owe me. (Gone).

Kyle: Yeah that makes more sense.

-Austin and Derek continue to scuffle every now and then, trading blows as they sneak around one another.

-Derek finally decides to end it by closing the gap between him and Austin and detonating his energy, causing a fairly large explosion.

Leena: (Sees the explosion in the woods). Whoa, what was that?

Jack: (Still with his eyes closed). Derek started to get impatient. He pushed his power up suddenly near max and hit Austin pretty hard.

Leena: Yeah but Austin’s alright, right?

-Glitch comes flying in carrying Scott.

Joshua: Glitch, could you please go find whatever’s left of Austin and bring him in?

Glitch: I’m on it. (Flies off again).

-Kevin stops, having felt Derek’s huge power increase.

Kevin: Great, Derek’s not playing anymore, is he?

Chris: It doesn’t feel like it.

Kevin: That you Chris?

Chris: Yup. Austin’s out. What say we stop Derek from doing something like that again?

Kevin: Agreed.

-The two fly off towards Derek’s location.

-Danny, however, is as confused as ever.

Danny: Okay, I heard that come from that direction, but Derek was over in the other direction just a few minutes ago. Is he trying to trick me? (Stops and thinks for a second). He has to be. I won’t stand for that!

-Danny pushes his strength up to max, shaking the trees around him.

-The others still participating seem to view this as a signal to close in on Danny once more.

-Derek comes in low and quiet, anticipating Danny won’t notice him while charging up. He gets right up to Danny before talking.

Derek: Alright Danny, game’s over for you.

Lindsey: Think again, Derek.

Derek: The heck?

-Lindsey leans out behind Danny, having hid on the other side while also charging.

-She fires a beam at the same time Danny fires a beam at Derek, with the two beams combining and hitting Derek at the same time.

-Derek throws his hands up to block but is still hurled back against the force of the beam. He struggles to get control again.

Derek: (Through gritted teeth). I thought it’d be obvious I wasn’t playing nice anymore.

-As Derek finally gains control of Lindsey and Danny’s combined beam, another combined beam hits him from behind.

Chris: No way he’ll back down from this.

Kevin: No, I’m pretty sure we’re just making him mad again.

-As the brightness of the four beams colliding fades just enough, Derek appears to be holding the two combined beams at bay, one with each hand.

Derek: Hah! Is that the best you can do?!

Kyle: You sure look like you’ve got your hands full, huh?

Derek: What? Kyle?

-Kyle proceeds to continue charging his own attack in one hand, what appears to be a strange whirl of wispy smoke.

Kyle: Okay just hold still for a moment please.

Derek: (Freaked out, still struggling with the other blasts). Kyle! If you fire that I’ll hurt you so-!

Kyle: (Grandiose voice). TRAIN SUMMON!


-Kyle lets loose what appears to be a ghost train from his hand. The beam hits Derek and carries through him, obviously doing a lot of damage.

-Derek finally loses control of everything around him after getting thrown backward with the Train Summon.

Kevin: Heh, I think Kyle got him.

Chris: Excellent.

Kevin: Count to three then go?

Chris: Yup.

-The two leap away from one another before trading blows every so often.

-Danny and Lindsey both let out a sigh, though Danny still doesn’t seem aware that Lindsey is right next to him.

Danny: Wow! I did it! I did-!


-Danny’s eyes slowly close as he falls face forward, still smiling, before hitting the snow and passing out completely.

Lindsey: Sorry Danny, but you’ll just hurt yourself if you keep this up.

-Lindsey disappears after Chris and Kevin.

Leena: So what’s the status report? I just saw a big train shoot out of the woods and now nothing.

Jack: Derek is now officially out, thanks to the other five hitting him all at once.

Joshua: Teamwork! Excellent!

Jack: But then Lindsey knocked Danny out with a simple chop to the back of the head, so he’s out, too.

Joshua: Oh how sad. I really thought he’d win. But oh well, he did pretty good anyway. Glitch?

-Glitch is just flying in with Austin.

Glitch: Yes?

Joshua: Please go bring Danny in, but just let Derek sit unconscious in the snow for a while. It might help him cool down.

Glitch: Right. (Flies off again).

-Chris and Kevin continue hitting quick and fading into cover with neither showing significant leverage over the other.

-Kevin sends a punch that collides with Chris’ face, throwing him through some foliage.

-Kevin chases after a bit, pushing some bushes out of the way.

Kevin: I know you’re back there. I can sense your Pulse, Chris!

-Kevin moves some more brush aside, revealing a glowing energy ball.

Kevin: Uh-oh.


-Glitch flies in with Danny.

Danny: (Sleepily waking up). Danny do good?

Joshua: (Smiling). Yes, Danny do very good.

Jack: That leaves just Chris, Lindsey, and Kyle left in the woods.

Scott: Alright, takin’ all bets! That’s right, takin’ all bets! Lemme hear a hundred on Lindsey, the girl with the twirl! Any takers?!

Leena: Right here.

-The group huddles around Scott, placing bets. Even Joshua steps up with a few bucks.

-Lindsey finds herself finally having a hard time in the exercise now that Kyle is pretty much untraceable and Chris has been keeping himself hidden.

Lindsey: Shoot, I don’t even know who’s left.

-She starts to feel a huge energy spike as Chris rockets towards her at an alarming speed, his power climbing rapidly.

-He pulls back with a huge punch but stops inches from her face right as she turns around, having felt who’s in front of him.

Chris: Lindz?

-The two stand confused for a second before…


Chris: Oops.

-Energy appears between Lindsey’s thumb, index, and middle fingers.

Lindsey: Sorry.


-Chris is hit with a powerful explosion and sent careening through trees, ripping through them when hit.

Danny: What just happened?

-The group hears a faint yelling sound, which soon becomes very obvious when Chris explodes out of the trees, carried through the air from the force of the explosion.

-He skids to a stop in the snow right in the middle of the group as they just stare downward at him.

Chris: Ugh.


Joshua: (Points down). Chris, you’re out.

Chris: Good grief.

Jack: That means Lindsey and Kyle are the only two left.

Kyle: Yeah, and she has no clue where I am.

-The group, all without blindfolds now, are staring dumbfounded at Kyle, still in his blindfold, standing quite blatantly among them.

Joshua: Um, Kyle?

Kyle: (Points). Yes, Josh, question.

Joshua: Shouldn’t you be off trying to knock Lindsey out?

Kyle: Not a bad tactic, but I do believe I have a better chance letting someone else knocking her out for me.

Leena: You’re the only one left besides her.

Kyle: So where’s Chris?

Chris: I’m right here.

Kyle: Oh crap, so I really knocked Derek out?

Austin: Heh, yeah, I saw that. That was sweet.

Kyle: (Panicked). Oh jeez, he’s totally gonna kill me now! He’s not right here is he?

Joshua: Nope, I figured it’d be best to leave him alone for a bit.


Joshua: (Deadpan). Is that Derek?

Jack: That’s Derek.

Joshua: That’s Derek. Alright, but he’s still out.

-Derek flies up above the trees to a point where the group can clearly see him.

Joshua: Oh yeah, he’s not even wearing a blindfold; he’s totally out.

-Derek starts to charge something huge.

Joshua: (Facepalm). Dang it Derek, why do you do this?

-Lindsey shoots up from the trees and slams her head into Derek’s chin.


-Derek is sent flying toward the group. Glitch catches him in mid air before he hits anyone.

-Lindsey takes off her blindfold to see what’s happened.

Lindsey: (Yelling to the group). Did I win?!

Leena: Put your blindfold back on!

Kyle: What? Oh! Oh! No blindfold! She’s disqualified! I win by default! (Whips his blindfold off).

Joshua: Oy, I think this training session is over.

-After a short breather, the group has settled down and are ready to hear what Joshua has to say.

Joshua: I’m extremely pleased with how you all handled that last test. Glitch, you were a huge help by the way.

Glitch: Thanks.

Joshua: And Jack, excellent job as well.

Jack: Yeah.

Lindsey: (Nudges Jack). C’mon, savor the compliment.

Derek: So who technically won?

Joshua: Winning wasn’t the point.

Lindsey: Yeah but if you had to pick a winner, who was it?

Joshua: Uh…me.

Group: What?!

Joshua: Because I embodied the true spirit of passivity and non-violence. Now enough whining, I have one last thing I’d like you all to do. Is everyone sufficiently rested?

-Nods all around.

Joshua: Good. I want to see who among you is the strongest. I want to see who can top the charts here, so hold absolutely nothing back.

Austin: The usual way? Powering up?

Joshua: Yup, you’ve got the idea. I’ll go down the line here. Danny, you go first.

Danny: Because I’m so strong?

Joshua: Hahaha, yes, because you’re so strong.

Danny: Alright!

-Everyone takes turns pushing their Pulse energies to maximum strength and beyond until only Chris and Derek are left.

Joshua: Alright Chris, could you please do the honors and let these guys know if they’re really past where you left off a few months ago?

Chris: Sure thing.

-Chris crouches low clenching his fists. He begins to make a slight growling sound as his power rises along with the volume of his voice. The nearby trees start swaying slightly and the ground suddenly quakes as sparks shoot from Chris the louder he becomes.

Joshua: Good, don’t stop!

-Chris’ Pulse reaches the state it had been when he fought Hex-Duo 6, signaled when it looks apparent he can’t power up any further.

-He stops yelling and looks around.

-To his relief, instead of the fear he had noticed the last time this happened, the group seems at ease, almost happy.

Leena: That’s it? Are you sure you’re maxed out?

Chris: (Struggling a bit). Yeah, pretty much.

Leena: Okay, that’s not where he was three months ago.

Jack: No, that’s exactly where he was three months ago.

Lindsey: So that means we really did learn how to do what he did?

Joshua: Does this level of power seem strange to you anymore?

Lindsey: No. This is about what we’re doing during intense training sessions now.

Joshua: Good! Then I’ve made a difference, haven’t I?

Jack: He’s still the strongest one here, though, but the difference between Chris and everyone else isn’t as radical.

-The wind picks up suddenly from behind Chris.

Austin: Hey what’s up?


-Intense light momentarily blinds everyone as the quaking begins again, this time blowing the nearby trees so hard some of them crack and split down the middle.

-Everyone, including Chris, is having a hard time keeping their footing, finding themselves at risk of being blown away from the force coming from Derek.


-Pulse discharges surround Derek as he stands maxed out, the snow around him completely melted.

Chris: (Finally gets a good look at Derek. He smiles). Dang Derek, you just couldn’t let it go, could you?

Derek: (Also smiling). You know me.

Joshua: Alright! Enough, enough! Before my house blows away already!

-Derek lets out a sigh and returns to his normal state of calm.

Joshua: I think that’s all for today. Oh wait! Chris, you said you had news, correct?

Chris: Yeah it-

-Chris suddenly stops and remembers what Charles had said to him.

Charles: Wherever you and your friends are hiding, and I don’t want to know where that is, but wherever that may be, just stay there… if you fought right now, you’d expend a lot of units, making the full-scale attack severely lacking and cause me to have wasted my time. I was okay with the Locust Virus being a waste, and the Hex-Duo robots weren’t something I was proud of, but this time it needs to happen. The sooner this is all over…well the sooner this is all over.

Chris: I’ll consider the option for a by on this fight.

Charles: Please do.

Chris: Your robots attack me again, I’ll be fine. I can handle that. They attack my friends or someone else, then we have a problem.

Charles: Stay as far away from the city as you can for as long as you can.

Chris: I can’t and won’t make promises to someone who’s most likely an enemy, however nice he may be at the moment.

Charles: Then you really are perceptive.

-Back to the present.

Austin: Hey Chris, speak up man. Is there anything we should know?


Chris: No. Nothing all that interesting. I’ll tell you later.

-The group heads into the Lodge to rest as Chris continues thinking how easy it would be to just avoid the next conflict altogether.

-To Be Continued…

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